The messy sex poetry thread

[UnderYourSpell]

I was a little confused by that at first, too, but I think he means the woman starts in a position like this

on the table, then drops to her knees on the floor in front of him. At least that's how I read it.

The line that bothered me is "egged on by / your tumultuous breath" which connotes rather something different for me (seafood dinner playing havoc with her breath) than what I think is meant (hard, rapid, passionate breathing).

I think that's probably just me, though, so I wouldn't suggest changing it.

Very hot poem, fridayam. And pretty messy.

she looks a bit bony in odd places

 

[Tzara]

she looks a bit bony in odd places

Her pelvis seems drawn quite narrowly, but the prominence of the iliac spine (those pointy things above her legs) are a little exaggerated, but not too much, I think, for a young woman. When I was young (and thin as a reed), my hip bones stuck out like that, too. Maybe not quite that much, but quite a bit.

Alas, that was years ago.

I don't see any other "boniness," except maybe in the rib cage.

And the picture was merely meant to illustrate a possible position for "legs akimbo."

BTW, what did you mean by "fanning?" Just, um, curious.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Her pelvis seems drawn quite narrowly, but the prominence of the iliac spine (those pointy things above her legs) are a little exaggerated, but not too much, I think, for a young woman. When I was young (and thin as a reed), my hip bones stuck out like that, too. Maybe not quite that much, but quite a bit.

Alas, that was years ago.

I don't see any other "boniness," except maybe in the rib cage.

And the picture was merely meant to illustrate a possible position for "legs akimbo."

BTW, what did you mean by "fanning?" Just, um, curious.

flapping ones hand or a sheet of paper infront of ones hot flushed face lol

 

[fridayam]

flapping ones hand or a sheet of paper infront of ones hot flushed face lol

How....disappointing

 

[UnderYourSpell]

How....disappointing

why so? you'd rather a lower fanning was needed?

 

[fridayam]

why so? you'd rather a lower fanning was needed?

A boy may hope to inspire such necessity

 

[Tzara]

flapping ones hand or a sheet of paper infront of ones hot flushed face lol

That's what I thought too. Which leaves this comment of yours:

I knowwwww but frantically fanning what ?

a bit confusing. Could you explain what you meant, please?

 

[UnderYourSpell]

A boy may hope to inspire such necessity

if it was that hot would need more than a fanning

That's what I thought too. Which leaves this comment of yours:
a bit confusing. Could you explain what you meant, please?

Annie was being very rude an implying that Tess was fanning her nether regions

 

[Tzara]

Annie was being very rude an implying that Tess was fanning her nether regions

Tsk, tsk. How impolite of you.

Though, y'know, the idea of Tess, fanning, um, well...

I have to leave now. Sorry.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Tsk, tsk. How impolite of you.

Though, y'know, the idea of Tess, fanning, um, well...

I have to leave now. Sorry.

As must I, you and Friday are being very bad influences on me

 

[Tzara]

As must I, you and Friday are being very bad influences on me

I hope that was a "good" bad influence, if that makes any sense.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

A boy may hope to inspire such necessity

Tsk, tsk. How impolite of you.

Though, y'know, the idea of Tess, fanning, um, well...

I have to leave now. Sorry.

As must I, you and Friday are being very bad influences on me

You're, all three, outrageously naughty, I love it!

(fanning again. )

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I hope that was a "good" bad influence, if that makes any sense.

Made me smile so I think it came under the category 'if it feels good, do it'

 

[CharleyH]

Hitting the spot sprang to mind here

I'd be best going back to writing stories, I'm much more poetic in that genre me thinks. Nevertheless, I do enjoy the poetry you all deliver ... and the leeway you give to me! Always fun.

 

[CWatson]

Love it or hate it please join in

Okay.

Whoa. It's even on
The ceiling. Careful next time!
I'mma need a mop...

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Okay.

LOL and welcome ...... the guys will be sorry the AV picture isn't you though!

 

[Epmd607]

look forward to it because I can't come up with messy that isnt explicit!

I'm still working on my poem, I got sidetracked by an argument about forum rules, and by this guy named braxton hicks.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I'm still working on my poem, I got sidetracked by an argument about forum rules, and by this guy named braxton hicks.

Where? not here? have you been casting your bodily fluids on foreign threads?!

 

[champagne1982]

I'm still working on my poem, I got sidetracked by an argument about forum rules, and by this guy named braxton hicks.

Mommy's about due is she? Congrats!

 

[Epmd607]

Where? not here? have you been casting your bodily fluids on foreign threads?!

Other threads, other forums(Other Voices, Other Rooms?) but always with the same two people. I've no message board self control.

And yes, Champagne, thanks. I sadly won't have time for arguing on message boards, any minute now... I might pop back in to deliver my poem, post-delivery. My hands a mess. Not sexy at all.

That's an idea. Florabelle.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Other threads, other forums(Other Voices, Other Rooms?) but always with the same two people. I've no message board self control.

And yes, Champagne, thanks. I sadly won't have time for arguing on message boards, any minute now... I might pop back in to deliver my poem, post-delivery. My hands a mess. Not sexy at all.

That's an idea. Florabelle.

Be sure to let us know when there is any news

 

[bflagsst]

Other threads, other forums(Other Voices, Other Rooms?) but always with the same two people. I've no message board self control.

And yes, Champagne, thanks. I sadly won't have time for arguing on message boards, any minute now... I might pop back in to deliver my poem, post-delivery. My hands a mess. Not sexy at all.

That's an idea. Florabelle.

Florabel is too Southern. You should name her GaGa and hope Lady gaga's career doesn't end after 1.5 records.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Florabel is too Southern. You should name her GaGa and hope Lady gaga's career doesn't end after 1.5 records.

Don't know about your side of the pond but over here gaga means not right in the head

 

[EroticOrogeny]

Don't know about your side of the pond but over here gaga means not right in the head

That's how I take it too, but not sure where/when the word entered by vocabulary. Might well be from your side.

 

[bflagsst]

That's how I take it too, but not sure where/when the word entered by vocabulary. Might well be from your side.

It feels like an American word to me. Like some Forties cinema part of speech, positive. "She was absolutely gaga over him." So maybe sick in the head with love, not crazy at all from what I've seen. I'll check it out on dictionary page.

1.
excessively and foolishly enthusiastic: The public went gaga over the new fashions.
2.
ardently fond; infatuated: He's gaga over the new girl in class.
3.
demented; crazy; dotty.

Origin:
1915–20; < F; imit.