The Mugger's Surprise

Pepper McDonald

She finished her meal, eating every bit, though her stomach was full long before she finished. It was a ritual she had had for years now.

She didn't seem to speak to him. He was distracted. There was no doubt about that. But she finished and then went to do the dishes, watching him over the bar as he finished.

She admited to herself that he ate like a barbarian. Much like some animal off the street. If he did stay she would have her work cut out for her. But Elizabeth would be pleased. Either way, she would be pleased, after all....

She let the thought drop from her miind. Who knows if he is like her and can read.
 
Ray Jones

Ray was still pondering what to answer when she finished doing the dishes. He hadn't moved since she picked up his plate. He simply sat there, staring into the distance, thinking. Then she came back to sit down, a thoughtful look on her face.

"What..." he began uncertainly. "What would this training involve?And would the bitch be a part of it?"
 
Pepper McDonald

She smiled. He was really contimplating his decision. That showed he was smarter than he was showing.

"You would become a man. You would learn to eat in proper society, cook perhaps. You would learn to make a living in the real world. You would learn to live as only the rich do. Like Eliza Doolittle, oh never mind. You most likely have never seen it."

She grinned, perhaps this would work out well.
 
Ray Jones

Become a man... But he already was a man. He was a man's man, and not in the gay meaning of the phrase. He prided himself on how tough he was. But what about the vampire?

"Will SHE be involved?" he asked again.
 
Pepper McDonald

"Oh, yes. I forgot that." She smiled wider this time. "Not, not unless you want her to be. There will be however a task at the end of your training. A date of sorts. You must take a woman of my choosing out on a date and impress her."
 
Ray Jones

He felt relieved - not that she wouldn't be part of the course, but that she didn't seem to want to be part of anything much now the initial torture was over. He could go back to the streets and, just maybe, if he was careful. He wouldn't run into that crazy mother again.

Ray finished his meal and smirked at Pepper. "Sorry, doll," he said, laughing slightly. "Not that I don't 'preciate the meal and everything, but I'm not gonna be trained. I got better things to do."

With that he stood up, making sure the belt was tight enough to hold the trousers he'd been given.
 
Pepper McDonald

She frowned a bit. "Very well then. It is your loss...." She went to sit on the couch and flipped the tv on propping her feet up on the table in front of her. "Good luck finding a job. But just be warned, she finds you and you aren't being proper, you will wish she killed you. You know where the door is, you can let yourself out."
 
Ray Jones

He had to go straight. He knew it. And he did. The threat hanging over him was just too grievous to ignore. They were advertising for workers at Mickey D's. Struggling hard to bite down his anger at the asshole who interviewed him, he actually got accepted. The work was a lot harder than he'd thought, certainly more so than mugging innocent people. It didn't pay much, but he'd pretty much lived from hand to mouth anyhow, so that was no real change. Life seemed to be getting better.

Except for one thing. It made him shudder, but every night, the vampire bitch filled his dreams. What she had done was a nightmare, and many nights he woke up screaming. But what he was soaked in was not just sweat. The longer he went after leaving that house, the worse it got. She filled his daydreams too. He saw her face on the body of female customers...

And one night, he returned to the park. He waited and watched. Was she here? He was being stupid, this was ridiculous. But was she here? And then he saw his chance. A young woman walking alone, her purse in her hand. She didn't look rich and he didn't care. He lept out on her suddenly, not touching her but screaming that he was going to rape her. And his eyes cast about in hope.
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

She watched him. This was the first of many nights that she was going to start watching him.....waiting on him to attach. Of corse he did. Not takeing her words into concideration. He seemed to be wanting her.

"Don't go to him this time." She heard a femenine voice behind her say. "That is what he wants."

Slowly she backed into the shadows, allowing him to continue.
 
Ray Jones

He grabbed the terrified woman in front of him and pulled her against his body. His head darted from side to side, wondering where she was. She said she was going to protect women from him. Hadn't she said that? Was it a lie?

"Where are you then?" He screamed. "Look, I'm attacking her, where are you?!?"

She was nowhere in sight. He started to grab the woman's clothing, as if to tear it, that would work. That would make the bitch show up. She'd have to show up then. But as he looked at the terrified woman, he was irritated by her. She was plain. She was ugly. She was scared. He pushed her away, and screamed at her to get away from him. Then he collapsed onto the dirt path, crying.

"Where are you? I thought you were watching me..."
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

"Now, go to him. But remember, I am watching you." She heard the voice say.

Her heels clicked as she ran to him, pulling him up to her by his hair. She smelled his blood, the fact that he was crying only pleased her more. Licking a tear from his face, she said. "OH, you missed me have you?"
 
Ray Jones

He froze. Her sudden appearance had shocked him to his senses. It seemed like a good idea to get back to her. Well, not so much a good idea, but what he wanted. Right until then, when she was standing in front of him, grabbing him by the hair and looking as malicious as possible. His throat knotted in fear as ice dripped into his stomach. What had he done?

"..." he said.
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

"WALK!" She told him letting him go, but sticking close to him. He knew where to go, she knew that,so she pushed him towards the apartment. "Run, and I won't do anything more than kill you."
 
Ray Jones

He walked. He walked as tall as he could, trying to show her that he had no intention of trying to dip behind a bush and escape. He didn't turn back. He didn't halt. His brain focused on exactly the steps he would need to get from here to her house. One foot in front of the other, his eyes trying to dart sideways and see behind him. His breathing was a coarse whisper dragged through his lungs. He was terrified. And just like last time, he felt his erection begin to grow. What had she done to him?
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

They soon arrived at the appartment. "There." she said, very firm as she pushed him towards the door.

It opened as he twisted the doorhandle. Once inside Elizabeth eyed her captive. "Turn around." She said, eyeing him and seeing his erection as he turned.

"You are a strange lot. You lie. You are given the chance to succeed and have money, yet you choose to work at McDonald's instead? Strip!"
 
Ray Jones

The indignity of her commands and insults washed over him like warm water. He felt his penis twitch with every word. He was losing his mind, he knew he was. But he couldn't help it. All he wanted right now was to be dominated by this woman, to be used by this woman... to be hurt by this woman.

He stripped as quickly as he could, standing then, naked, before her. He dare not meet her gaze. His eyes looked straight at the floor as if seeking an exit. His body told a different story.
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

She walked up to him, walking slowly around knowing that his anticipation was more than the actual pain. Reaching his front again shee looked at the scars of her work before.

"You have healed well." She said before thunping his penis head with her long fingernail. "Though your brains have never left their lower home." she said again lumpng his purple helmet again.

both of her hands went to his nipples, squeezing them with her fingernail as the blood began to arise to the tiny cresent cuts. "This may hurt but there is more pain to come. Tell me. Why did you not take Pepper's oppurtunity?"
 
Ray Jones

He suppressed the cry of pain and mental turmoil that swelled through him as she tweaked his nipples so savagely. He wouldn't show his pain, he would keep calm. She wouldn't break him. Not now, not ever. He was stronger than her. It was madness. That could be the only reason he ever would have responded to her question in that way.

"She's a wimp. She's weak. I see sluts like her every day and she's nothing but a victim and she deserves to be. Not like you..."

His eyes widened and tried to focus on his mouth to stop the words coming out. He knew he was in trouble now.
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

She twisted hre hands as he confessed how he felt of Pepper. Little circles of blood formed around his nipples. She kept pinching one, while the other went to the undershaft of his cock and pinched there.

She was confused by his words. "You want me to teach you to be a man, not some sniffling loser in today's society? Is that what you are saying? Because I am strong? Because I cause you pain, more pain than imaginable and it makes you hot?"

She grabbed his hair and pulled his head back. "Answer me!" She yelled.
 
Ray Jones

His scream rocked the house. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH! YES! OH GOD YES!! YESSSS!!!!"

He couldn't help it, through the pain his cock felt as if it was about to burst with pressure. He was hot, hotter than he'd ever been. So incredibly turned on by what she was doing, by the pain she was causing. The blood, the sheer carnal domination. His balls twitched, already spurting a little seed. Without penetration, he started to come.
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

Like lightening her hand backhanded his face. "I didn't tell you to cum!" she screamed. Her hands were at him, hoisting him over her shoulder as if he didn't weight anything.


She took him an threw him on the empty bed. "Stay there." She left the room and walked back within a few moments. "You know the saying, 'Like salt in the wound." She said before pouring some salt in her hand. She put what she had on his nipples then massaged it into his nipples. "DONT ever come before I tell you to. Understand?"
 
Ray Jones

It burned! It burned like a flame against his skin. His face screwed up against the pain and his throat choked off his air in momentary shock. As her hands rubbed the salt into the ripped flesh he found his erection returning. He had to maintain control. And this time he would. He would.

"Yes..." he gasped, struggling against the twin tortures of pleasure and pain.
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

Easing her grip on his nipples, she finally let go. Looing at him she wondered what made him tick. His erection began to grow yet again, and that was one of the most painful tortures she had been taught.

"What moves you?" she asked, truly wanting to know what was up with this one. She had never had one that seem to enjoy his pain like he did. But was he really hers? Only Pepper could find out for sure.

She wanted to test if her were broken yet. Pressing her lips to his she waited to see what he would do.
 
Ray Jones

He wanted to respond, he started to. He kissed her back and began to move his hand up to grasp her head and pull her tight against him. He wanted her so badly... and he could just take her.

But what if that was not what she wanted? What if she was testing him, if that was exactly the wrong thing to do? What if she really wanted him to lie there and wait for an instruction? She had already ordered him not to come without permission. Should he do nothing else without express permission also?

But what if he stopped responding. Would that be the wrong thing to do? Would that anger her still further? Would it bore her? She must know what he was thinking of her, how he loved the torture despite himself. She had to, she wasn't stupid.

And what if he did the wrong thing? Would she taunt him and hurt him some more? Would she take him and use him like she had the last time? Or would she abandon him and leave him unfulfilled. His mind screamed for answers she would not provide.

He lay his arm back down by his side, but continued responding to the kiss. All he could hope was that something he was doing was the right thing to keep her there.
 
Elizabeth Boutalia

She pulled away smiling. "You are broken. I am proud of you my pet." She said, pushing his hair away. "You may have one wish, for learning your first lesson. What is it?" She asked, her voice so matter of factly.
 
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