StrangeLife
Eater of beef
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My last two stories have had almost no eyes on them...
Your Halloween story is quite long, which tends to require more investment from the side of the reader. This may turn off those with a short attention span.
To give an example, I posted 2 stories for this Halloween event:
- A short one (< 2 pages) that currently stands at 18106 views and 1632 votes
- A long one (> 7 pages) that currently stands at 3865 views and 111 votes
In other words, the short one has 4.6 times as many views and almost 15 times(!) the number of votes (which I assume translates to the number of people who actually read it).
So you shouldn't take it as a critique. It maybe simply be because some readers are intimidated by the grandiose scale of your imagination...
