Djmac1031
The usual suspect
- Joined
- Aug 15, 2021
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It's excellent!
Thank you.
My score currently sits at 4.3 which tells me enough people liked it but didn't LOVE it.
Which is fine; better than hating it. Only got one hate comment so far.
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It's excellent!
The contest ranking is based on the usual reader rating. Highest rating wins.Where is the voting?
Do vote totals show anywhere before results? If yes. Where?
We use that expression in Australia too...imported from the UK, like many others, to mix in amongst our own.I've finished a 14k draft, and should submit by the weekend. It's not going to be literature, not very polished, but it should be some fun for people, in the spirit of the event.
Question: are non-Brits familiar with the phrase "Exactly what it says on the tin!" I suspect it wouldn't be a good story description for Lit, sadly.
Well then, I must read it, to see if you maintained truth in advertising. What is inscribed on the tin is the gospel.It's not very polished nor well-edited, especially as my computer has snuffed it so the whole thing was done on my phone, but I've submitted my story. Even cutting out lots of rambling side-issues, it's grown to 17k words.
My preamble goes:
Naked Bisexual Lube Wrestling. Ten women, one guy. Exactly what it says on the tin.
It's in E/V as it's mostly about one woman watching events unfold.
I'll have to watch for thatIt's not very polished nor well-edited, especially as my computer has snuffed it so the whole thing was done on my phone, but I've submitted my story. Even cutting out lots of rambling side-issues, it's grown to 17k words.
My preamble goes:
Naked Bisexual Lube Wrestling. Ten women, one guy. Exactly what it says on the tin.
It's in E/V as it's mostly about one woman watching events unfold.
Luckily I counted on my fingers just before posting, and was able to correct where I'd said there were 'eight women'.Well then, I must read it, to see if you maintained truth in advertising. What is inscribed on the tin is the gospel.
To potential readers: I confirm that tin-promised content is provided in the story. Personally, I enjoyed all of the, um, slapstick that took place within the lubed arena, even though Ben's stick was never actually slapped.Luckily I counted on my fingers just before posting, and was able to correct where I'd said there were 'eight women'.
I'm still not quite sure how or why I ended up with more than eight, which is a ridiculous number of characters to start with, but there was no way I could cut out a couple at that point!
First sweep done. My story lost 3 votes and gained 0.05 points. Still way below some of the other, very nice stories.
First sweep done. My story lost 3 votes and gained 0.05 points. Still way below some of the other, very nice stories.