The Sacrifical Lamb

[sirhugs]

No, not a real life lamb. THAT would be SICK.
besides, Lit bans bestiality.

No, I'm thinking about a story set in a society where to appease the sex gods (or the fertiliiy gods), there is an annual sacrifice of a virgin.

Maybe the twist is that one year, they just can't find a virgin... that mightgo into humour & satire, I suppose, if you avoid incest. the other logical category generally is First Time.

Or maybe it is the story of an 18 year old virgin, scheming to lose her virginity before the big event. How could she have guessed that it would be so hard?

Care must be taken about whether there is an actual sacrifice, dancing along the edge of the volcano of Lit's submission guideline which bans:

• Sexualized death, “vore”, or “snuff” fiction. Characters are allowed to kill or die in stories, but the death should not be intended as sexually titillating.

Thoughts?

(Credit where due: I think that this idea bloomed from some of the archeologically tinged posted in the Mummy thread. but I thought this deserved its own thread. Besides which, I'm on a binge of creating fresh threads to try to encourage more activity on this forum.)

 

[TheLobster]

Care must be taken about whether there is an actual sacrifice,

The obvious way around it is that the “sacrifice” means getting deflowered in a ritualistic and humiliating fashion by a priest of the gods in question.

Further, maybe the society values virginity in a bride so much that this basically shuts off the victim from any prospects of marriage and forces her to become whatever’s the equivalent of a nun (or a Vestal “Virgin”, for added irony).

 

[wildp]

Funny saw the title and laughed. I have guys at work joking with me to take one for the team and fuck this ugly lady at work lol

 

[sirhugs]

Funny saw the title and laughed. I have guys at work joking with me to take one for the team and fuck this ugly lady at work lol

Well it might inspire a good story
And she deserves sex too

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

No, not a real life lamb. THAT would be SICK.

righteous dude! *electric guitar solo*

As for the idea. Since it’s a sex god, I think @TheLobster has the right idea. No one is dying but the “sacrifice” is a fairly humiliating ritual…not to mention, in a society that worships a sex god…do you really want to be outed as the one adult who isn’t getting laid?

So we could do a bunch of ideas, either focusing on the ritual itself or the difficulties in finding a virgin to sacrifice.

For the ritual, it could be a public deflowering. Now, maybe the Virgin gets to pick their partner or partners but still they are having sex in front of every adult member of the community. So if it’s a guy, the community gets to be extra judgey if he gets performance anxiety.

…on the flip side, that could lead to people swooping in to eliminate people from being in the virgin pool. Like “Okay, look, David turned 18 yesterday. He’s a prime candidate for the ritual and you know he’s gonna pick all three of us…so one of us needs to fuck him now so we can avoid that.

 

[TheLobster]

“Sam, you don’t need to be ashamed! Lots of people don’t have sex right away. Remember when you learned to ride your bike? You just have to keep trying and I’m going to be with you every step of the way, cheering on my little man! …huh, you got soft. How about some roleplay? I remember your first crush was on your grandma’s best friend, here, I’m wearing her panties. Remember how you spied on her?”

This is pretty genius. You're basically putting in a light fem/maledom angle with mommy/daddy vibes but without the incest, and also doing a deep dive into MCs sexual history and potential hangups that had to be resolved before (s)he can fuck the god(dess), or maybe even while (s)he does.

Just one problem, with this and also with:

do you really want to be outed as the one adult who isn’t getting laid?

It all requires at least alluding to underage sexual activity, so chances are high it isn't going to fly :/

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

Split for better reading

Back to the ritual: you don’t have to have sex publically but you become the God’s consort for a month. Doesn’t sound too bad but the god is handsome/beautiful to a maddening degree while also taking a paternal/maternal view of you. Like imagine a gorgeous naked woman talking to you like you’re her kid and since she’s your god, she knows everything.

“Sam, you don’t need to be ashamed! Lots of people don’t have sex right away. Remember when you learned to ride your bike? You just have to keep trying and I’m going to be with you every step of the way, cheering on my little man! …huh, you got soft. How about some roleplay? I remember your first crush was on your grandma’s best friend, here, I’m wearing her panties. Remember how you spied on her?”

For the candidates:
1. Lil fourthwall humor. “Wait, I’ve had sex-“
*cough* “oh wait, I just turned 18, I mean, I’ve never had sex. Didn’t even know what it was till just now.”

2. No one meets the criteria or will have a birthday in time so the town starts a marketing campain (yes, even if it’s a pre historical society) trying to get virgins to come there. Two problems: one, this is a hypersexed society so the town can’t help but try and seduce the new folk before the ritual. Two: people think it’s a scam or no one wants to admit to being a virgin even if they will get a free trip

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

This is pretty genius. You're basically putting in a light fem/maledom angle with mommy/daddy vibes but without the incest, and also doing a deep dive into MCs sexual history and potential hangups that had to be resolved before (s)he can fuck the god(dess), or maybe even while (s)he does.

Just one problem, with this and also with:

It all requires at least alluding to underage sexual activity, so chances are high it isn't going to fly :/

so the latter example I don't see as a problem. Again, in universe they wouldn't count anything from before someone turned 18 and from a meta perspective the story wouldn't allude to any pre 18 sexual encounters.

Now the earlier example does run that risk. I don't think there's any rule against a crush as long as it's puppy love. The spying would need to be set later or for it to be made clear the crush only turned sexual after the virgin in question turned 18.

A safer example could be something like, "Dear little Sophie, 24 already? I remember when your parents prayed to me to give them a child. Your mother made the most enticing ejaculations while your father...well, ejaculated. Oh don't look at me like that. I have half a mind to tell your coworkers what you do with the unsold porn magazines-I'm not judging but if you spent half as much time asking girls out as you did flicking your bean to those pictures you wouldn't have even been in the running as my consort...stop pouting, you know it's true."

 

[eaee]

Yeah, the OP is right. One wouldn't fuck a lamb. Too small. A ewe? Now there might be a possibility if Lit would allow such a discussion.

 

[anthrodisiac]

To twist this a little bit:

Society worships a wolf god. Every year, they sacrificed a sheep to it, so that it would bless their hunters and they could keep living. However, a rival village stole all their sheep that year, because they'd been having shitty luck and wanted to really appease the wolf god.

In a panic, the villagers decide to take an orphaned girl, who is, of course, an 18-year-old virgin because, uh, I dunno, man, I just work here. Reasons. Anyway, they dress her up like a sheep, using what little wool they had remaining. Maybe she has a huge crush on a guy, and they convince him to tell her to do it, and if she does, he'll remember and love her for all eternity.

Anyway, she goes into the woods, and the wolf god appears. He's beyond amused, takes her back to his place, and gets to know her. He hasn't had a good conversation with a mortal in decades. But when she starts to take off the sheep outfit, he growls at her to leave it on. He normally eats the sheep they send him, but he has a different meal in mind for this one.

 

[Carnevil9]

Funny saw the title and laughed. I have guys at work joking with me to take one for the team and fuck this ugly lady at work lol

What, they don't have any paper bags where you work?

Anyway, I was thinking this story could be set in a society that is primitive enough to still sacrifice virgins (whatever that means to them) but is sophisticated enough to have invented a "body count meter." With one scan of your forehead (or maybe your genitals?) it displays how many lovers you have had. Not how many times, just how many different people.

Since they rarely find an actual ZERO reading, they generally have to settle for the MOST virginal person, meaning the lowest body count. So all the young people of eligible age, for the few months before the Big Event, spend their time humping as many partners as they possibly can.

 

[sirhugs]

Yeah, the OP is right. One wouldn't fuck a lamb. Too small. A ewe? Now there might be a possibility if Lit would allow such a discussion.

Fuck ewe

 

[anthrodisiac]

Fuck ewe

We can't, Lit's beastiality policy.

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

Hmm...

"And where the hell are we to find an adult virgin to serve as our sacrificial lamb? It's not like one is going to just come walking in the door!"

The patrons at the inn heard the door open follows by the sound of careful clopping. Every member of the not-so-clandestine meeting turned around to see a shapely woman in a habit, wringing the cloth of her soaked garments. She stamped her feet-hooves? clean on the floor and then waved with a hand that appeared to have a palm covered in wool.

"Excuse me everyone! My name is sister unobservant from our lady of the overly-trusting! I have recently left my convent and am exploring with no destination in mind, no luggage, and no letters to anyone updating them of my whereabouts. Do you have a room I might rent? preferably one that doesn't have a lock so I may wander freely if I sleepwalk, which I am known to frequently do and let me tell you, I wind up in the strangest of situations."

The highpriest mumbled to himself "Lord I love you, but this almost feels patronizing."

 

[anthrodisiac]

Hmm...

"And where the hell are we to find an adult virgin to serve as our sacrificial lamb? It's not like one is going to just come walking in the door!"

The patrons at the inn heard the door open follows by the sound of careful clopping. Every member of the not-so-clandestine meeting turned around to see a shapely woman in a habit, wringing the cloth of her soaked garments. She stamped her feet-hooves? clean on the floor and then waved with a hand that appeared to have a palm covered in wool.

"Excuse me everyone! My name is sister unobservant from our lady of the overly-trusting! I have recently left my convent and am exploring with no destination in mind, no luggage, and no letters to anyone updating them of my whereabouts. Do you have a room I might rent? preferably one that doesn't have a lock so I may wander freely if I sleepwalk, which I am known to frequently do and let me tell you, I wind up in the strangest of situations."

The highpriest mumbled to himself "Lord I love you, but this almost feels patronizing."

I tried so hard not to just do an anthro sheep story idea Glad someone else did it for me. This is hilarious.

 

[liliput1]

of course, an 18-year-old virgin because, uh, I dunno, man, I just work here. Reasons.

an orphaned girl, who is, of course, an 18-year-old virgin because, uh, I dunno, man, I just work here. Reasons. Anyway,

OMG my eyes are leaking.

They think it don't be like that but sometimes it do.

 

[liliput1]

I seem to be developing a fondness for retellings of Beauty and the Beast.

My comment on https://www.literotica.com/s/estelle-and-the-sorceress was that if you haven't read the book Uprooted yet you really should.

In both, the villagers have a pretty dire view of what exactly the wizard does with the girls that are sent as tribute. But I think there's a lot of space between the original and these retellings for other stories. I'd also class Wanda's Enchanted in this genre as well but more at the periphery, which I think kind of makes my point that there's space here.

 

[liliput1]

What, they don't have any paper bags where you work?

Anyway, I was thinking this story could be set in a society that is primitive enough to still sacrifice virgins (whatever that means to them) but is sophisticated enough to have invented a "body count meter." With one scan of your forehead (or maybe your genitals?) it displays how many lovers you have had. Not how many times, just how many different people.

Since they rarely find an actual ZERO reading, they generally have to settle for the MOST virginal person, meaning the lowest body count. So all the young people of eligible age, for the few months before the Big Event, spend their time humping as many partners as they possibly can.

Town lothario gets paid by farmers to save their daughters from the Lottery. Only sometimes he doesn't wait to get paid and gambles on them listening long enough before stabbing him with a pitchfork to explain how he's just done them a favor.

 

[BellaBestia]

Why is it always female virginity? If gods or monsters are appeased by devouring or consuming or defiling purity, the unsullied, why not male purity as well in and of itself so rare and scarce as to be greatly prized more so than female purity…

 

[sirhugs]

Why is it always female virginity? If gods or monsters are appeased by devouring or consuming or defiling purity, the unsullied, why not male purity as well in and of itself so rare and scarce as to be greatly prized more so than female purity…

because male purity is a unicorn. The cliche that males are by natural stained by impurity, even if they are technically virgns, is largely true.