to sexy amber

[moondoggie]

Okay, the bra and panty thread got me going. And, Amber as always just adds fuel to the fire.

Here goes:

The Joining

Warm bodies-
side by side,
quaking in anticipation.

Trembling hands-
running through flowing hair,
caressing sensual cheeks.

Moistened lips-
kissing supple lips,
tracing graceful neck.

Fingertips-
exposing silky breast,
teasing erect nipples.

Tongue-
following curving swells,
down a supple stomach.

Pulsing manhood-
throbbing with desire,
entering heated folds.

Hips-
counterparts in rhythm,
thrust matched to thrust.

Beating hearts-
joined in union,
rushing to climax.

Glistening bodies-
side by side,
glowing in ecstasy.

 

[moondoggie]

trying for the big leagues

I tried posting my last poem in the main story/poetry section of Lit. Hope it is well received. First, I'ld like to thank Amber and Mysti for being so beautiful and being my inspiration. Second, thanks to everyone that has given me positive feed back and direction. It has been generously accepted.

Last, I have to say I was bummed out when I put two of my poems from this thread up on the poet's forum. I thought I might get some type of feed back. Sadly, it has only been hit 19 times, and no one has offered any type of criticism.

All I can say is the Picture forum was the first place I ever visited, and everyone has been warm and friendly. You are all great and I hope this forum will always stay this way; a home away from home.

 

[moondoggie]

sorry

sorry, I lost the change.

Will try again.