Tour group - where would you take this?

[TheWritingGroup]

Most of us have seen a stereotypical tour group. A big group of people speaking what you think is probably Mandarin (or Italian, or ...), with an official leader waving a flag to help them all stay together. They fill up entire sidewalks and streets, blocking the path of everyone else. They take lots of pictures, meaning they block even more space when the photographers step back from the subjects.

So how could you turn that into a Literotica story?

I'll toss out an idea or four.

• The tour guide takes the group into a Thai brothel. It's PoV from one or more tourists. They get to see sexy, sexy stuff, and at the end they're offered an "intimate tour" for an additional fee. The brothel is kicking back a percentage to the tour guide, who technically isn't supposed to be leading groups there.
  • A girl is separated from the tour, doesn't speak Thai, and is confused with a prostitute. Could go several ways, from the sleaziest "girl gets trafficked" to an adventure story where she runs, but still doesn't speak Thai and is lost in Bangkok (and eventually meets a charming Mandarin (Italian, Arabic)-speaker who buys her a drink and walks her back to the hotel ... and back to her room ... and into her bed). Feel free to use different genders if that makes for a fun story!
• There are two families with children in the tour. The dads disappear into the bar together. The moms put the littles to bed, try some of the local wine, and end up putting each other to bed, the fun way. The dads come back in the early morning hours, having done something:
  • Hired a local prostitute for a threesome.
  • Also fucked each other.
  • Agreed to a wife-swap.
  • Been arrested for public drunkenness and needed someone from the tour company to get them out of lockup, and they're deeply ashamed.
    • Their wives punish them by demanding they watch the kids the next night, while the moms go out on the town together.
      • And hire a prostitute for a threesome!
  • This one relies on stereotypical guy behavior, so swap genders at your own peril.
• The entire tour group is stranded at an airport partway home from their tour, due to weather. Lots of people have to share rooms, because there just aren't many rooms in town since so many flights are canceled. It's Tokyo, so two (or more!) people are put up at a love hotel, which is equipped with fetish gear, sex toys, a bed made to look like a kaiju's mouth, etc. They "miss" their flight home to spend another day there together.
  • Make it taboo by having the people stuck in the love hotel be relatives (which is why they were stuffed in there together).
  • Worth mentioning: some love hotels lock the doors of the rooms, so you need them to buzz you out. You literally can't get out unless the hotel staff let you. (It's a way to keep their guests from running into each other in the halls, since the whole point of love hotels is secret nookie.) In a weather disaster like I just invented two bullets up from here, the system goes down, so the guests are literally trapped together, unable to escape their sinful, but irresistible attraction ....

What obvious plots am I missing? Would this be a fun little thing to actually write? None of these stories would have to be long.

Have any of you already written a story like this?

-Billie

 

[THBGato]

Slow burning attraction between two of the women on the tour, which may or may not be consummated. They acknowledge their attraction to each other, and tell each other, in detail, what they would do to one another if they could. The tension, the fear of discovery (imagine they are in a country where homosexuality is illegal), would add to the eroticism.

Ideally, bi_cathy would write it!

 

[Bramblethorn]

This might fit better in the Story Ideas forum.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

This might fit better in the Story Ideas forum.

You mean, where I meant to post it? Wow, how did I do that?

I think I'll report my own thread and ask the mods to move it.

-Billie

 

[Rob_Royale]

Honestly, it's a near-perfect opening for a couples-swap story. Away from home, all their friends, family, and obligations, a couple might let themselves have a wild affair with no one the wiser back home.

I imagine a mature couple (Smith) of empty nesters take a vacation. This works better if the writer uses a location that they have already been. It adds authenticity to the story. There, on a local tour, they meet a young couple (Willson) and hit it off. They spend a few days together, enjoying the tour, and have a great time, maybe hitting a nude beach, amping up the sexual tension.

That night, the young husband boldly asks if the Smiths would be open to a little partner swapping. He explains that he and his wife are occasional swingers and really find the Smiths attractive.

Initially, the Smiths are taken aback and stammer nervously for a minute or so. Finally, the young husband, tells them to forget it for the moment, but perhaps talk about it that night.

The Smiths do indeed talk about it in their suite and get wildly aroused, having incredible sex that night.

The next night? Who knows? Maybe they have an incredible night. Maybe one of them has an incredible night while the other can't bring themselves to do it. Now there is an inequity between them and that needs to be sorted out before the plane ride home. Maybe a threesome or foursome is the way to do that?

 

[KimAwakened]

Slow burning attraction between two of the women on the tour, which may or may not be consummated. They acknowledge their attraction to each other, and tell each other, in detail, what they would do to one another if they could. The tension, the fear of discovery (imagine they are in a country where homosexuality is illegal), would add to the eroticism.

Ideally, bi_cathy would write it!

I'll second that one.

 

[JohnnyNotCraig]

I think the first one would be more fitting if it was a guy who got separated from the group and ended up in a Thai trans brothel and ends up with a ladyboy or two

 

[TheWritingGroup]

I think the first one would be more fitting if it was a guy who got separated from the group and ended up in a Thai trans brothel and ends up with a ladyboy or two

That's an interesting story idea. I am curious, though, why it's "fitting"? What is it fitting into?

My story-inventing brain just rewrote your idea (as it does), to a guy waking up from a drunk in Chiang Mai, to find himself in a room in a trans brothel, with a beautiful ladyboy saying stuff to him. He is naked and she's in pretty lingerie. He has no idea what happened between them. Nobody in the brothel (except our viewpoint character) knows more than 10 words of English. Go!

-Billie

 

[JohnnyNotCraig]

It’s fitting to me because I think most people associate Thailand with trans (ladyboys) and it seems like a hot idea to have a hung trans get suck off and get railed by a guy who’s straight and possibly has a slightly smaller cock than the trans woman.

 

[bi_cathy]

Slow burning attraction between two of the women on the tour, which may or may not be consummated. They acknowledge their attraction to each other, and tell each other, in detail, what they would do to one another if they could. The tension, the fear of discovery (imagine they are in a country where homosexuality is illegal), would add to the eroticism.

Ideally, bi_cathy would write it!

Am I getting assignments now?

At the rate I write and with my backlog of ideas, this will be done by 2035. But it will be epic!

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

There are a lot of walking tours led around my own local city... and I mean a lot.

Unfortunately there's no real 'red light' district - the area that comes closest to that description lies away from the central area where the tours take place. That however would be no bar to the imagination.

My take on this would need no ulterior motives or kickbacks paid to the guide. I would simply have a couple where the (frustrated) wife becomes detached from the main party during a walk through a maze of very narrow, winding streets. Somewhat lost, she looks to enquire inside a doorway.. where she is taken for one of the 'girls' by a customer... and ends up enjoying every last moment. She rejoins the main party just before they raise the alarm, giving out excuses for her lateness...

 

[Reenigam]

There are a lot of walking tours led around my own local city... and I mean a lot.
Unfortunately there's no real 'red light' district - the area that comes closest to that description lies away from the central area where the tours take place. That however would be no bar to the imagination.
My take on this would need no ulterior motives or kickbacks paid to the guide. I would simply have a couple where the (frustrated) wife becomes detached from the main party during a walk through a maze of very narrow, winding streets. Somewhat lost, she looks to enquire inside a doorway.. where she is taken for one of the 'girls' by a customer... and ends up enjoying every last moment. She rejoins the main party just before they raise the alarm, giving out excuses for her lateness...

Great thought. You could spend some time setting a scene where the couple - maybe from the US or Japan - are on an organised 10 day tour of England, stopping each night at a new location and spending the day before/after sightseeing. This preamble would describe the reasons for the wife's gradual alienation from and frustration with hubby.

 

[000zing]

Yes, a nice little short story already in the making.

 

[bi_cathy]

Slow burning attraction between two of the women on the tour, which may or may not be consummated. They acknowledge their attraction to each other, and tell each other, in detail, what they would do to one another if they could. The tension, the fear of discovery (imagine they are in a country where homosexuality is illegal), would add to the eroticism.

Ideally, bi_cathy would write it!

Oh, I finally found the origin thread!

I owe "I take it off for you" to this post, and you know what, it went live before 2035, unlike what I had predicted

I remember I had the Saudi Arabia / religious dynamic in my mind but I didn't have a proper storyline to fit it into, and then this thread, with the mention of illegal homosexuality, clicked for me. Took a long while to find the right setting for the scene and the exact dynamics at play, but yup. I'll consider my mission completed and my homework submitted.

 

[THBGato]

You forgot to add the link Cathy! Here it is: https://www.literotica.com/s/i-take-it-off-for-you

It made me squirm so badly! x

 

[bi_cathy]

Always publicizing others' work more than they do - thanks!
And squirming is a badge of honor

 

[MikeXIrons]

Americans are touring the holy sites in Jerusalem. There are two couples who have gotten to know each other during the week, including a little minor flirting. Lisa, a devoted wife, finds Jack attractive and charming, but, she’d NEVER cheat on her husband.

On the tour they enter a church, and the guide asks them all to follow the rules and take off their hats to be respectful. They enter a synagogue, and they are asked to put on a hat (one will be provided if you don’t have one). They are given the rare privilege to enter a sacred Muslim building where, out of respect for those there to work or worship, find it distracting to see non-Muslims walking around, they ALL wear a burka, men and women, covering pretty much everything from head to toe.

While putting on the black robes, Jack flirtatiously jokes about how hot his wife and Lisa look in burkas - how it’ll be hard to keep his hands off them. Lisa giggles and tries to strike a mockingly seductive pose for Jack and her husband. Jack's wife scolds him with a stern look, embarrassed that he isn’t acting solemn as they’d been instructed.

The whole group is instructed to walk slowly and stay very close. Jack decides to tease his wife by, under cover of the tight group, grab her ass. Instead of the expected glare, she backs into him pressing her ass against his hand, and then reaching back to give his quickly-growing hardon a rub. During the tour they continue to tease each other at every hidden opportunity, every time the group is crowded into a corner or small room or stairway - an unspoken game of “I bet I can turn you on more than you can turn me on". They all crush into a tiny room to let some locals pass by in the hall, leaving Jack pressed against the wall and his wife pressed against him… her hand gripping his cock. He pulls up the back of her burka and fingers her from behind - the game unspokenly changing to “I bet I can make you cum”… a game which, based on the way her body tensed and shook, Jack wins. As the group finally is released from the cramped room, Jack and his wife hang back, close the door, and she spins around and drops to her knees. It takes only a minute for her to finish him off, and they quickly catch back up to the group.

a) Later that night Jack comments to his wife how hot it was the tour was and his wife says, “I was kinda chilly” and Jack realizes it was Lisa he was playing with
b) When she drops to her knees and pulls back the burka, Jack is surprised to see Lisa’s sweet innocent beautiful face. He knows he should stop her, but, he doesn’t have the willpower to do so once she starts sucking
c) One, or the other or both of them knew who they were playing with all along

 

[MikeXIrons]

A woman (faithful wife is always my preference, but, single, cheating, whatever you prefer) is on a tour in a foreign country.

She has headphones and an app or radio device to listen to a translation into her language. Maybe the translator is live and part of the group?

Or, as they pause in a tiny alley surrounded by buildings, maybe there’s some static and then she hears another man’s voice… he’s breathy and talking about how hard he is. It sounds like he’s masturbating. She blushes as she listens and starts to get turned on and without thinking, her hand brushes past her hardening nipple. She wonders if there’s some radio station or sex call or baby monitor that’s interfering with the frequency of her audio device and feels a little voyeuristic that she’s listening in to an intimate moment between a man and woman.

The voice, continues on, saying, “Oh yeah, you like it. You’re wet. You’re going to make me cum and you like it.” She’s startled that it almost sounds directed at her, but, it turns her on even more, enjoying the fantasy that a man wants her badly. The voice describes what’s turning him on - and his description fits her - hair color, etc… “I want to run my fingers through your long blond hair so much…” which turns her on even more that he’s fantasizing about a woman that looks like her. The voice starts encouraging his real or imagined woman to touch herself along with him. She finds herself leaning against a brick wall, trying to hide at the back of the group as she rubs her nipple teasingly.

The voice says, “your lips are so inviting… I want you to kiss and lick my cock so badly…” and she reaches a finger to her lips without thinking. “Yes, lick it. Lick it for me.” and, she does. The voice moans. “Suck it”. She does. “Oh, fuck, yes, that’s so hot. You’re mouth is so sexy on my cock.”

She’s again startled by how perfectly his fantasy is fitting with her reality and she looks around, and then up… and sees a man in a window looking at her. She blushes and pulls her finger away from her mouth. “No, don’t stop. Make me cum. You’re so gorgeous… I can tell you liked knowing I want you so badly.” She returns her finger to her mouth and continues to follow his instructions, losing herself in the moment, eventually making him cum.

The guide says, “OK, we’re moving on now to… blah blah blah” and she follows the group away.

 

[MikeXIrons]

A husband and wife are on a tour of a medeval city or someplace like Salem, MA where the tour guide, and people at many of the places they stop are in period costume.

At one stop there’s a courthouse and in front, stocks. A jester/mime who flirtatiously interacts with the wife, pulling her forward into his “performance”. As part of the performance he entises her to do something “wrong” (like, he encourages her to steal an apple from the vendor’s cart), then acts surprised tsk tsks her, and has her bend over for a playful spanking. But, then, the man dressed as an executioner or judge steps forward and has her bend over and locks her head and wrists into the stocks.

a) the group is encourage to throw “fruit” at her (and given water balloons)… which have a wonderful effect on her thin white top
b) the group is further encouraged to shame and punish the criminal… which leads to some men sneaking behind her and copping some feels of her breast or under her short skirt
c) the husband is encouraged to shame and punish her… the jester encourages him to get behind her and lift her skirt, which he playfully “pretends” to do out of site of the group. His “playing along” turns into actually fingering or fucking her… which everyone thinks is just simulated and that she’s a “good sport” for playing along and pretending she’s being fucked
c) the guide tells the group to follow them inside, they’ll be back for her after the trial. While left alone, the jester and/or executioner take all sorts of advantage of her
d) the guide tells the group to follow them inside, leaving her alone with just her husband who, unable to release her, can’t resist lifting her skirt and taking her from behind… trying to finish up before the group returns

etc
etc

 

[liliput1]

Always publicizing others' work more than they do - thanks!
And squirming is a badge of honor

I believe my reply to that one was a stream of expletives. In a good way. Air did help.