Turn the tables

You can drop it in without the free-use designation. "Restricted" designation is what I put when I created- I mean, when Lester and Hester Hopscotch created PBP, for when you want to maybe retain it. If you ever want to let it go, you can always go back and edit the original post or quote it and say it's now free-use.
:unsure: I do want to let other people use this idea. I'd be curious to see what they come up with, even if I do someday come back to it, I doubt I'd write a story like what they wrote.
 
:unsure: I do want to let other people use this idea. I'd be curious to see what they come up with, even if I do someday come back to it, I doubt I'd write a story like what they wrote.
I mean, free-use bunbun should be free to use for everyone... including yourself :p So it's not like you're giving up all rights to write it or anything.
 
I'm with @dirk2024 on this one. Think it is kinda a shame, not to push @NuclearFairy to write something she's not into- I've tried that, it sucks to do. Anyway I think he's right in saying the story could use your soft touch. You have a very nuanced way of bringing out compassion even when you're writing your most harsh material, like the merman story; not sure how you do it, but it's subtle and natural to your writing. Hope you keep thinking about it.
 
Okay, so I have this idea, but I'm stumped for how to go from beginning to end.

Protag meets his high school girlfriend, and finds out that she's married to what was the least popular guy in school, the guy that the MC was the biggest bully. Last time he saw this guy, or his ex girlfriend, was he pulled a prank that wound up with the guy naked in the middle of prom, showing off his very small penis.

He spends the story trying to get back with her, or at the very least prove to her that she should be with anyone other than the looser she's married to.

Story ends with her inviting him to her house, convincing him to let her tie him to a chair, and then proceeding to show just how much better of a lover and person her husband is.

But yeah, that middle, what would he do to try and get back into her life?
Maybe even add a twist where it is revealed this guy has fucked the bullys mom back in school
 
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