Veroe's picture book

Veroe · Sep 10, 2016

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Tallcajun · Sep 10, 2016

Subscibed!!

Again, nice work, Veroe!

Between you and lldar and Asa, I'm on overload!!

Veroe · Sep 10, 2016

Tallcajun said:
Subscibed!!

Again, nice work, Veroe!

Between you and lldar and Asa, I'm on overload!!

Welcome TC. Surprised you haven't found my picture book before. It's been around a while now.

Veroe · Sep 10, 2016

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Veroe · Sep 11, 2016

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Veroe · Sep 11, 2016

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Veroe · Sep 11, 2016

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Veroe · Sep 12, 2016

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Tallcajun · Sep 12, 2016

Veroe said:
Welcome TC. Surprised you haven't found my picture book before. It's been around a while now.

I know, right?
Always fun to discover new theads.

Veroe · Sep 13, 2016

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Reminder: Accentuate every detail of every step, dummy. The slightest touch, the simplest caress, the smallest action can be a goldmine of opportunity for storytelling. So use it.

Veroe · Sep 13, 2016

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Reminder: Build the moment. Example: if you're doing a blowjob scene make your co-writer and everyone reading anticipate it like the coming of Christmas morning. Take time in disrobing. Take time in teasing. Take time in detailing technique used. Just take your time and build the moment, dummy.

Veroe · Sep 13, 2016

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Normally this would be a reminder to tell your story through your characters actions and reactions fool, but this is the fatal flaw in writing SRPs. In these you are only in control of 50% of what is happening in the scene, and no matter how much you try to communicate with your cowriter miscues and misunderstandings can and frequently will happen. So here's a reminder, dummy, reinforce your storytelling through action with dialogue detailing in some way the intent you are proposing to them in what you think may happen next so they can play along or go against that intent as their muse compels them to.

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