Welsh Rarebit's Bare Bits (BBW)

lovemonster said:
OK.....I have just had my first ever Lit story published.....wow....me, a Lit author, that sounds really good.... :nana: :nana:

If any of you have time, please go read, leave comments, scores etc......all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism most welcome.......

Story can be found here

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:


Thats great LM, I'm really pleased, I will read it later on.


I hope you enjoyed last night, I know I did. :kiss: :p :p
 
FRENCHIE44T said:
Thats great LM, I'm really pleased, I will read it later on.


I hope you enjoyed last night, I know I did. :kiss: :p :p

It was great Frenchie...had a lovely time... :kiss: :kiss:
 
lovemonster said:
OK.....I have just had my first ever Lit story published.....wow....me, a Lit author, that sounds really good.... :nana: :nana:

If any of you have time, please go read, leave comments, scores etc......all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism most welcome.......

Story can be found here

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

very good LM
 
lovemonster said:
OK.....I have just had my first ever Lit story published.....wow....me, a Lit author, that sounds really good.... :nana: :nana:

If any of you have time, please go read, leave comments, scores etc......all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism most welcome.......

Story can be found here

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

Very hot story lovemonster! I will reccommend it to my lit friends definitely. Hope to see some more stories from you. :nana: :nana:
 
lovemonster said:
OK.....I have just had my first ever Lit story published.....wow....me, a Lit author, that sounds really good.... :nana: :nana:

If any of you have time, please go read, leave comments, scores etc......all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism most welcome.......

Story can be found here

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

Well done, you!!!!

It's a hot one .... *fans face*. I'll go back and comment on it later ... very impressed :kiss:
 
Thanks you guys.....this was my first effort at writing something like this.....I had help from Geronimo and kbate with the editing so I'm so grateful to them for helping me get it accepted :)
 
lovemonster said:
OK.....I have just had my first ever Lit story published.....wow....me, a Lit author, that sounds really good.... :nana: :nana:

If any of you have time, please go read, leave comments, scores etc......all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism most welcome.......

Story can be found here

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:


Ummmmmmm

Read it, commented, voted on it and got jealous of the heroine :devil: :devil: .
 
bluefoxlady said:
Ummmmmmm

Read it, commented, voted on it and got jealous of the heroine :devil: :devil: .

Thank you babe.....heroine would be me....in my imagination *sigh* :kiss:
 
lovemonster said:
OK.....I have just had my first ever Lit story published.....wow....me, a Lit author, that sounds really good.... :nana: :nana:

If any of you have time, please go read, leave comments, scores etc......all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism most welcome.......

Story can be found here

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:


Well read your story loved it voted left a comment...damn girl..you are a Love Monster..Could just ravage your luschious body :devil:
 
Whispering_Wolf57 said:
Well read your story loved it voted left a comment...damn girl..you are a Love Monster..Could just ravage your luschious body :devil:

Awwwww....thanks WW.....much appreciated babe. :kiss:
 
` mhhhhh awesome thread & oh such yummy Pics :p
>>>>>Good Morning LoveMonster :kiss: :kiss: <<<<<
 
just read your first story, very arousing, your mind is as beautifull as your body :kiss:
 
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