What I would do with you in an hour!

[drksideofthemoon]

I think he came here looking for a response something like this:

OMG!! U R sooooo fucking hot! Ur a really good writer, and I your AV pic. I creamed my panties twice reading this. Wanna chat? I have a cam. Let's hook up. PM me.

Pepsi spew!

 

[coolcan]

Sorry

I am so sorry, I guess I did post that in the right place. I did not mean to offend any of the professional writer's in the house. I feel like I have been jumped in an alley and left for dead. Thanks for the feedback, no matter how punishing it was. I definitely feel put in my place.

 

[tickledkitty]

I am so sorry, I guess I did post that in the right place. I did not mean to offend any of the professional writer's in the house. I feel like I have been jumped in an alley and left for dead. Thanks for the feedback, no matter how punishing it was. I definitely feel put in my place.

Aw, gee. Now I feel bad.

Why don't you take the feedback you were actually given and write a real story then come back and prove us all wrong? Seriously. You can do it. Think how great you'll feel about making us look like a bunch of assholes.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

I am so sorry, I guess I did post that in the right place. I did not mean to offend any of the professional writer's in the house. I feel like I have been jumped in an alley and left for dead. Thanks for the feedback, no matter how punishing it was. I definitely feel put in my place.

You didn't offend anyone. If you want to write, I suggest you look at some of the writing resources available on the site.

When you post something in here, tell us what you expect of us? Are you looking for tips in grammar? Plot development? Don't just paste up a wall of text and leave us wondering what it is you are looking for.

Oh, and most of us aren't professional writers.

 

[sr71plt]

I am so sorry, I guess I did post that in the right place. I did not mean to offend any of the professional writer's in the house. I feel like I have been jumped in an alley and left for dead. Thanks for the feedback, no matter how punishing it was. I definitely feel put in my place.

I'm actually a professional writer, so I'll answer. What you should do no matter where you post is frame what you would like other members of the forum to do with what you post. If you are posting just for the thrill of it or to get a rise out of other posters or to show how great a writer you are, it would probably be best just not to bother--although you probably got the attention you were after, so there you go.

 

[wanderwonder]

For the record, it's not the worst that has graced or disgraced this forum : D

If you're wanting an editor, which I gently suggest, or for constructive feedback before posting, buddy, you need to say so. Read the stickies to figure out where your post belongs, then be prepared to be eaten alive. Any self-declared psycho bitch will show no mercy.

An another note, I'm glad that you're taking the full hour. It's very thoughtful of you.