What's the ending for this incest idea?

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Got a start and middle of a story, but can't find an ending.

American family inherit an old home in England. Decide to go stay there for a long family holiday. (alternatively are forced to go there from money problems, losing US home)
In the will they are told NOT to visit, and definitely NOT to uncover the mirrors.

Of course family don't listen.

I'm imagining family as standard dad,mum,son, daughter, but I'm flexible if someone has a better suggestion.

(The family later learn) the house used to be owned by Alister Crowley, the UK black magician, and was used in some of his dark rituals.

Their reflections in the mirror start to misbehave. First they only reflect underwear. Not other clothing. When the family get used to that, the mirrors stop reflecting any clothing.

Mirror versions are no longer tied to their original person. They appear in and out of mirrors randomly. Still naked of course. (like the paintings in harry potter)

Mirror versions then start performing sex acts on each other. E.G. Family are in the living room playing a boardgame while mirror dad is doing very unsuitable things to his mirror version daughter.

Perhaps Son is first to realise that the mirrors are flexible. Puts his cock through the mirror and has mirror mum suck him off.

Maybe next daughter steps fully through the mirror and is taken by both father and brother. Mum too perhaps? Why not. It's an incest story. (Mirror versions never speak. they are always silent.)

The mirrors goad a couple of family members to actual incest. Perhaps both brother and sister are in the mirror world and pair up, only realising the truth when one of them starts moaning loudly.

How does the story end? What's the conclusion?

Best idea I've got so far is that the whole family end up having a real life incest orgy in the room Crowley used to do his rituals in. The magic starts operating, the entire family climax at the same moment and... disappear.
The room empty. The mirrors empty.

Just an epilogue of a police report for the missing family. The fourth file connected to this house in the last hundred years.
 
Incredible story idea! Could lean more into the magic element? Or take "darker" approach and certain amount of "sexual energy" (harvested from climaxes inside the mirror world from the real) needed for the mirror versions to trap the real one inside the mirror and the mirror versions replace one, several or all in the real world?
 
Perhaps defeating the influence of an evil relic or ancient tome, is the key to the whole place. Like Evil Dead or Stephen King's Duma Key.
 
Got a start and middle of a story, but can't find an ending.

American family inherit an old home in England. Decide to go stay there for a long family holiday. (alternatively are forced to go there from money problems, losing US home)
In the will they are told NOT to visit, and definitely NOT to uncover the mirrors.

Of course family don't listen.

I'm imagining family as standard dad,mum,son, daughter, but I'm flexible if someone has a better suggestion.

(The family later learn) the house used to be owned by Alister Crowley, the UK black magician, and was used in some of his dark rituals.

Their reflections in the mirror start to misbehave. First they only reflect underwear. Not other clothing. When the family get used to that, the mirrors stop reflecting any clothing.

Mirror versions are no longer tied to their original person. They appear in and out of mirrors randomly. Still naked of course. (like the paintings in harry potter)

Mirror versions then start performing sex acts on each other. E.G. Family are in the living room playing a boardgame while mirror dad is doing very unsuitable things to his mirror version daughter.

Perhaps Son is first to realise that the mirrors are flexible. Puts his cock through the mirror and has mirror mum suck him off.

Maybe next daughter steps fully through the mirror and is taken by both father and brother. Mum too perhaps? Why not. It's an incest story. (Mirror versions never speak. they are always silent.)

The mirrors goad a couple of family members to actual incest. Perhaps both brother and sister are in the mirror world and pair up, only realising the truth when one of them starts moaning loudly.

How does the story end? What's the conclusion?

Best idea I've got so far is that the whole family end up having a real life incest orgy in the room Crowley used to do his rituals in. The magic starts operating, the entire family climax at the same moment and... disappear.
The room empty. The mirrors empty.

Just an epilogue of a police report for the missing family. The fourth file connected to this house in the last hundred years.
The reflections are spirits tied to an ancient power brought on by the black magic, and are drawing upon the sexual acts to draw in and entrap the family. If you have four kids, where the elder siblings are mid-twenties, and the youngest two are just over 19 and bisexual, they can resist the influence and counter the magic, which only harvests the sexual acts of heterosexual intercourse. The younger siblings use their same-sex attraction to counteract the magic and try to break the curse, as an alternative ending.
 
I love it! Lewis Carroll meets HP Lovecraft! It also reminds a bit of a great Mike Flanagan movie called Oculus.

You could have the family members one by one disappear into the mirror universe, not to return. The remaining ones get more and more scared as each one is taken. Finally, the last one (possibly the Dad?) gets sucked in, where he finds out that they are in a sort of living sexual torture hell, or alternately, that they are in a sexual paradise. Depending on if you want a happy ending or a horror ending.
 
It's an ongoing saga - there is no ending.

Once the new family is all absorbed into the mirrors, it releases the images that have been trapped, and they now get to live in the house. When they eventually die, the new owners come in and the family trapped in the mirrors has to lure the new family so they can finally be released and get to live in the house.

Not sure how you'd write that in a short story, however.
 
Reminder to everyone that posts should be about Story Ideas, not outlines. The guideline is more or less three paragraphs. I am a bit flexible on the exact count, but this is obviously an outline, not just an idea.
My taking out my editing axe would be unfair to the reply poters, and no one has reported it, so for now, I will leave this one.
 
Reminder to everyone that posts should be about Story Ideas, not outlines. The guideline is more or less three paragraphs. I am a bit flexible on the exact count, but this is obviously an outline, not just an idea.
My taking out my editing axe would be unfair to the reply poters, and no one has reported it, so for now, I will leave this one.
Sorry! But I could find the "Story Outlines" forum.
 
Sorry! But I could find the "Story Outlines" forum.
Yeah, there really isnt one. :(
I think some folks might try Story Feedback, but it is really intended for already submitted stories.
The preferred option in this forum is to edit your request to the very basic essential background points and then a brief focused item with the request.
For an example, see my OP in this thread:

https://forum.literotica.com/thread...proceed-with-my-silent-auction-story.1654958/
 
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