OCC; I sincerely apologize to you Edward for abandoning this thread without an explanation. Though I to this day do not totally understand the personal reservations that plaqued me regarding the subject matter of this story, rest assured that though I may not have worked all of them out, I have worked enough of them out to continue, if that is what you wish.
Would like a partner for play
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Suddenly aware that I was not alone in the doorway, Juliet's name filled my head and my mouth. The mere uttering of her name sent chills up and down my entire being. As I spoke her name softly, yet urgently, I could tell that Edward was fully aware that the presense of the two of us would make this night complete. As I spoke her name, Juliet closed the door behind her. The silence that had surrounded me had now been broken. Broken with one solid bellow. It echoed in my head for what seemed like minutes, though only seconds. With the silence now broken Edward spoke his first words....."Welcome My Loves, come closer." As I turned to look behind me at Juliet, she had already started towards Edward. I could see the anticipation in her eyes. I could almost feel her trembling as she moved past me. She whispered as she past, "follow me." A few steps ahead of me now I began to follow her. She was so elegant in her stride, her dress following close behind her, her arms reaching for the scarf that had been wrapped around her neck, now being freed from its position, falling ever so gently to the floor right in front of me. I thought for a moment to stop and pick it up for her, but instead dropped the silk wrap that had kept my shoulders hidden for most of the night, right beside it. It was as though they had been placed there for some specific reason, like a mirror image of what was to come. As she neared Edward it became increasingly apparent that she had planned all along to actually pass him and allow his warm gaze and welcome reach to ascend upon me. She stood behind him now with the look of pure lust in her eyes. A devious smile had now replaced the angelical portrait that had been forever burned in my mind of dear sweet Juliet. Who was this woman I see, what was now possessing her, and would it also possess me?
Edward took my hands in his. Firm yet gentle, soft, yet masculine. A black onyx ring adorned the ring finger of his right hand. A gift perhaps? Is he the kind of man to difficult to buy for, so he purchased it himself? Such silly questions for me to be thinking right then. His hands were tanned and obviously manicured. I began to feel myself slip away as he squeezed ever so gently my hands in his, and whispered softly in my ear "Give of yourself to me Maria, as I give of myself to you." His hands swiftly moved from my hands now trembling to my neck and face as he pulled me close enough to feel him breathing then passionately and without regret kissed me like I had never been kissed before. Any fear of the unknown that had held me prior to entering this room now faded away without question. As he pulled away from my mouth, I found myself wanting more, not wanting this kiss to end, wanting his hands on more of me than my neck, wanting my hands on him. He looked at me merely a second before he released his grasp on me and turned to Juliet. It was now time for Edward to welcome her. It was now I that wore that familiar devious smile that I had seen on the face of Juliet only minutes before. Would she enjoy his touch as I did? Would she not want his mouth to leave hers? Is she melting inside as I did with his touch? Will she be left wanting more as I wanted more?
Was she as prepared as I now was for this night to continue...........
Edward took my hands in his. Firm yet gentle, soft, yet masculine. A black onyx ring adorned the ring finger of his right hand. A gift perhaps? Is he the kind of man to difficult to buy for, so he purchased it himself? Such silly questions for me to be thinking right then. His hands were tanned and obviously manicured. I began to feel myself slip away as he squeezed ever so gently my hands in his, and whispered softly in my ear "Give of yourself to me Maria, as I give of myself to you." His hands swiftly moved from my hands now trembling to my neck and face as he pulled me close enough to feel him breathing then passionately and without regret kissed me like I had never been kissed before. Any fear of the unknown that had held me prior to entering this room now faded away without question. As he pulled away from my mouth, I found myself wanting more, not wanting this kiss to end, wanting his hands on more of me than my neck, wanting my hands on him. He looked at me merely a second before he released his grasp on me and turned to Juliet. It was now time for Edward to welcome her. It was now I that wore that familiar devious smile that I had seen on the face of Juliet only minutes before. Would she enjoy his touch as I did? Would she not want his mouth to leave hers? Is she melting inside as I did with his touch? Will she be left wanting more as I wanted more?
Was she as prepared as I now was for this night to continue...........
At long last....
OOC: Maria....the past is just that -- past. I am so very, very delighted that you have resurfaced and are willing to continue our episode. I have had a rather large hole in my heart for weeks now, and your return has begun a healing process. I must ask, though, will Juliet be returning? If not, I shall endeavor to remove her character from the story in my next post. If she is to return, I will need some confirmation from either her or you. I will not post to the thread tonight. I shall await some sort of response from either you or her. I now await that response with a warmth unfelt for a long period of time. Edward
OOC: Maria....the past is just that -- past. I am so very, very delighted that you have resurfaced and are willing to continue our episode. I have had a rather large hole in my heart for weeks now, and your return has begun a healing process. I must ask, though, will Juliet be returning? If not, I shall endeavor to remove her character from the story in my next post. If she is to return, I will need some confirmation from either her or you. I will not post to the thread tonight. I shall await some sort of response from either you or her. I now await that response with a warmth unfelt for a long period of time. Edward
Count me In
OCC: Edward I'm afraid I too must apologize for my long absence. Now that I know you and Maria both share my interest in continuing this story I will do my part to carry it forward. I do look forward to being captured once again by your mystery and passion.
OCC: Edward I'm afraid I too must apologize for my long absence. Now that I know you and Maria both share my interest in continuing this story I will do my part to carry it forward. I do look forward to being captured once again by your mystery and passion.
Fire from within........
As I stood in the doorway just behind Maria, it occurred to me that we had both followed this man away from the crowd and into a room alone with him, without knowing a single thing about this man. Yet neither of us seemed the least bit fearful of the situation we had put ourselves in.
I scanned the room familiarizing myself once again with its furnishings. It was warm and inviting. When my eyes met Edward’s I again searched deep within his eyes for answers to the mystery held within. My eyes were mesmerized almost in a trance peering into his eyes. My body yearned to have him near me, to feel his breath, to inhale his scent, to be consumed with his passion. His eyes immediately cast their spell on me as if drawing me to him and I began my descent across the room past Maria to stand nearer him.
Standing behind him, now, I could smell the unbelievable aroma from his cologne. There was a hunger deep within me that needed to be satisfied. As I stood there in my own daydream Edward moved toward Maria and broke my trance. I wondered if she was feeling the same spell I was. Her eyes were filled with so much lust. I knew she wanted him as badly as I did. Edward was now kissing Maria. I watched with such intensity. Seeing his mouth on hers, their tongues dancing feverishly together, him pulling her nearer him, her almost exasperating from his kiss; made my heart race faster and faster. I had never wanted anything so badly before! I wanted Edward. I was overwhelmed with such desperation now. This night had proceeded so slowly to this point with this cat and mouse game the three of us had played which only added to the agony that was increasing by the minute.
Still lost in my dream, I didn’t realize Edward had turned away from Maria and was now standing before me. I smiled slightly the reached for his hand leaning into him. As my lips met his they instantly lost any hesitation that may have been left. My mouth had never touched his before this night yet it was so familiar to mine. My tongue traced the outline of his lips before probing deep into his mouth; then sucking his lip gently into my mouth, kissing him, tasting him, smelling him, wanting him………I was lost in his kiss.
As our kiss broke, an embarrassed fever came over me. Had I been too direct with my kiss? Had I appeared too anxious? Knowing it was too late to retract what had already taken place I quickly pushed those thoughts aside and looked toward Maria once again. I could tell now by the look on her face that she too was feeling the same desperation that I was. I was sure that her pussy was filled with the same blazing fire that was deep within mine. Surely Edward was aware of our desires now, and would quench the fires that surrounded him. I wanted him more than I had ever wanted anything. But even more so I wanted to share him with this woman whom I so dearly loved.
Did He want the same thing or was there something else he desired tonight? I wondered what his plans were for the two of us. Once again my thoughts were wisked away in a daydream as I considered the possibilities of what was to come.........
As I stood in the doorway just behind Maria, it occurred to me that we had both followed this man away from the crowd and into a room alone with him, without knowing a single thing about this man. Yet neither of us seemed the least bit fearful of the situation we had put ourselves in.
I scanned the room familiarizing myself once again with its furnishings. It was warm and inviting. When my eyes met Edward’s I again searched deep within his eyes for answers to the mystery held within. My eyes were mesmerized almost in a trance peering into his eyes. My body yearned to have him near me, to feel his breath, to inhale his scent, to be consumed with his passion. His eyes immediately cast their spell on me as if drawing me to him and I began my descent across the room past Maria to stand nearer him.
Standing behind him, now, I could smell the unbelievable aroma from his cologne. There was a hunger deep within me that needed to be satisfied. As I stood there in my own daydream Edward moved toward Maria and broke my trance. I wondered if she was feeling the same spell I was. Her eyes were filled with so much lust. I knew she wanted him as badly as I did. Edward was now kissing Maria. I watched with such intensity. Seeing his mouth on hers, their tongues dancing feverishly together, him pulling her nearer him, her almost exasperating from his kiss; made my heart race faster and faster. I had never wanted anything so badly before! I wanted Edward. I was overwhelmed with such desperation now. This night had proceeded so slowly to this point with this cat and mouse game the three of us had played which only added to the agony that was increasing by the minute.
Still lost in my dream, I didn’t realize Edward had turned away from Maria and was now standing before me. I smiled slightly the reached for his hand leaning into him. As my lips met his they instantly lost any hesitation that may have been left. My mouth had never touched his before this night yet it was so familiar to mine. My tongue traced the outline of his lips before probing deep into his mouth; then sucking his lip gently into my mouth, kissing him, tasting him, smelling him, wanting him………I was lost in his kiss.
As our kiss broke, an embarrassed fever came over me. Had I been too direct with my kiss? Had I appeared too anxious? Knowing it was too late to retract what had already taken place I quickly pushed those thoughts aside and looked toward Maria once again. I could tell now by the look on her face that she too was feeling the same desperation that I was. I was sure that her pussy was filled with the same blazing fire that was deep within mine. Surely Edward was aware of our desires now, and would quench the fires that surrounded him. I wanted him more than I had ever wanted anything. But even more so I wanted to share him with this woman whom I so dearly loved.
Did He want the same thing or was there something else he desired tonight? I wondered what his plans were for the two of us. Once again my thoughts were wisked away in a daydream as I considered the possibilities of what was to come.........
A delay now, from me....
Ladies of the Balcony....
My week has been unbelievable and the week-end is no better. Please be patient while I try to scrape together enough minutes to respond to your overtures with the detail and emotion they both so richly deserve.
In a day or two....
Forget not that I cherish the both of you...
Edward
Ladies of the Balcony....
My week has been unbelievable and the week-end is no better. Please be patient while I try to scrape together enough minutes to respond to your overtures with the detail and emotion they both so richly deserve.
In a day or two....
Forget not that I cherish the both of you...
Edward
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From Edward:
"I was doing a story with Maria and Juliet called "Partner
wanted for (something or other)...a story about a man and two women who met on a balcony. Could you go into the story and drop Maria and Juliet an e-mail telling them that I have been forced to give up the game altogether?"
Neither of you had email address icons so I've posted Edward's request to me here. He won't be back to Lit at all. If you'd like any more info, you can email me.
"I was doing a story with Maria and Juliet called "Partner
wanted for (something or other)...a story about a man and two women who met on a balcony. Could you go into the story and drop Maria and Juliet an e-mail telling them that I have been forced to give up the game altogether?"
Neither of you had email address icons so I've posted Edward's request to me here. He won't be back to Lit at all. If you'd like any more info, you can email me.
Worried and Waiting
As I wait and wonder what my response to Cheyenne may bring, I am reminded just how precious life and the time that we have here on earth really are to me. We began a fantasy and now it is entirely possible, right in the middle of such fantasy, that it could disappear as though it never existed. As I was not the one who began this fantasy - is it my right now to continue? Can the fantasy be played out in it's entirety? Can writers two make the same impression that was orignally depicted when there were three of us?
Edward - Where ever you are......I wait and wonder.......I am looking for a sign from you to either continue on without you, or let the fantasy die.........
As I wait and wonder what my response to Cheyenne may bring, I am reminded just how precious life and the time that we have here on earth really are to me. We began a fantasy and now it is entirely possible, right in the middle of such fantasy, that it could disappear as though it never existed. As I was not the one who began this fantasy - is it my right now to continue? Can the fantasy be played out in it's entirety? Can writers two make the same impression that was orignally depicted when there were three of us?
Edward - Where ever you are......I wait and wonder.......I am looking for a sign from you to either continue on without you, or let the fantasy die.........
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Maria, Juliet....I've returned
Maria & Juliet -- two of the most treasured assets of this Board -- I have returned. My absence was most untimely, I know; but circumstances far beyond my mortal control were at work in my life. I sit here wondering if the two of you are still active.
A response here would be appreciated.
Edward
Maria & Juliet -- two of the most treasured assets of this Board -- I have returned. My absence was most untimely, I know; but circumstances far beyond my mortal control were at work in my life. I sit here wondering if the two of you are still active.
A response here would be appreciated.
Edward
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just a note
Maria - Juliet,
My absence and return cannot fully be explained herein. I would prefer to maintain some privacy (LOL). I am not actually certain I will be able to continue the thread, either. I just wanted to let you both know that I had not fallen off the face of the earth or had some cataclysmic event befall me.
And, yes, Juliet, I truly am a virgin....gee, hadn't you realized that before this?
Can either/both of you e-mail me at the Board? I might be able to explain my current situation.
Edward
Maria - Juliet,
My absence and return cannot fully be explained herein. I would prefer to maintain some privacy (LOL). I am not actually certain I will be able to continue the thread, either. I just wanted to let you both know that I had not fallen off the face of the earth or had some cataclysmic event befall me.
And, yes, Juliet, I truly am a virgin....gee, hadn't you realized that before this?
Can either/both of you e-mail me at the Board? I might be able to explain my current situation.
Edward
Let No More Time Pass
OCC:As I wish for no more time to pass, I shall continue with this story of which I have become to proud of to let just disappear. If there is anyone out there who would like to join me in the completion of this incredible fantasy.......please feel free. I too would like to take this opportunity to change the title of this such fantasy........In my heart on in this median, it shall forever be known as : The Balcony.
OCC:As I wish for no more time to pass, I shall continue with this story of which I have become to proud of to let just disappear. If there is anyone out there who would like to join me in the completion of this incredible fantasy.......please feel free. I too would like to take this opportunity to change the title of this such fantasy........In my heart on in this median, it shall forever be known as : The Balcony.
As The Heat Continues To Rise
My gaze now almost a blank stare, is quickly averted to the expanding front of Edwards trousers. There is no mistaking that he too is as aroused as I. Is Juliet??? Again my gaze is averted to Juliet, whose face is now flush with color, her eyes still closed from the kiss that Edward so forcefully placed upon her. I watch in hopes that her breathing will return to normal, and her eyes will once again open and take in all the splendor that surrounds her, Edward and I.
Edward now looks back at me, standing directly behind him. He takes my hand and walks me around so that Juliet and I are standing next to eachother, her shoulder only a few inches above my own. I can feel her breath now, see her chest both inhale and exhale. As I see and hear Juliet I am reminded of my own respitory rate which has now almost tripled it normal rate. What now? WHat would he ask of us? What is it that this incredible man want from us.
My skin begins to tingle at the same moment Edward begins to speak. I feel that I will surely collapse if I do not have this creature before me, if I do not have him now. The words still echo in my head as though I am hearing them for the first time. Juliet, My sweet Juliet...... Your kiss, your smile, your scent, your incredible gait, the one that drew your attention to me, is certainly all that any man could ever dream of. and Maria......Maria ( he says with such wanting in his voice) You are all of that and more. Your kiss, your kiss is that of an angel whose halo's bright aora is only shadowed by the devil deep within you. You my dear are what I have been sent here tonite to find. As I have not been totally forward with the both of you until now, I wish to fully apologize. As I was sent here by my employer in search of, by his discription, all that he finds erotic and sensual in a woman. As I have searched now for a number of years, in many countries, it is with great pleasure that I can announce to him and to you that alas I have found what he desires most in this lifetime. I knew the moment the two of you came into my view that my search would come to an end this evening.
Juliet, it is with deep regret that I inform you that alas as my search has ended, it ends with Maria. I hope in time you will forgive what seems like my dishonesty, as it was the only way. Maria, with my hand stretched towards you now, I ask that you trust in me as you have trusted in no other. Come with me my sweet Maria, you shall never regret such decision.
As I am sure at this moment, my utter amazement at the words that were just spoken, are portrayed in the question in the eyes of Juliet. What had just happend? Was this some sort of evil test, and for who was this test performed. As two very large and emotionless men enter the room and head directly towards Juliet, I am reminded of the fear in her eyes that I had only seen one other time before. only minutes before we ascended the staircase leading us to this very moment. She looked to me for answers, answers that I did not have. The two men stood on either side of her now and waited for a signal from Edward who still had a rather tight grasp on my hand. With an ever so slight of a bow of his head the two mean each took Juliet's arm in there rather large and strong hands. The fear that overcame me at that moment could have only been matched by the fear that I now saw in her eyes. Edward spoke to assure the both of us that no harm would come to either of us, that Juliet would now be escorted off of the premises, and that I would now be prepared.
Prepared??? Prepared for what I wonder. The fear now rapidly fading left me with pure wonderment. I was quickly walked to the master bath of the suite where three women await my presence. Edward took my hands in his and spoke softly....Maria my dear, you are the answer, to so much that you may not ever understand, you are what my search has taken me all over the world for, only to find you here in our own backyard. I leave you now only for a while as the three women you see behind you will prepare you for what shall be the most exciting, exhilerating, erotic, fantasy filled moments of yours or anyones lifetime. Allow me my dear to make all your dreams come true. Though I wondered what would come of Juliet, where she was, what was she thinking, would she or could she ever forgive me, thoughts of Juliet quickly faded as the women undressed me and placed me into a deep tub of warm water and the most luxurious bath beads that I had ever expeienced. I lay back letting the water envelop me and my mind raced.......raced, wondering what lie ahead for me.............
My gaze now almost a blank stare, is quickly averted to the expanding front of Edwards trousers. There is no mistaking that he too is as aroused as I. Is Juliet??? Again my gaze is averted to Juliet, whose face is now flush with color, her eyes still closed from the kiss that Edward so forcefully placed upon her. I watch in hopes that her breathing will return to normal, and her eyes will once again open and take in all the splendor that surrounds her, Edward and I.
Edward now looks back at me, standing directly behind him. He takes my hand and walks me around so that Juliet and I are standing next to eachother, her shoulder only a few inches above my own. I can feel her breath now, see her chest both inhale and exhale. As I see and hear Juliet I am reminded of my own respitory rate which has now almost tripled it normal rate. What now? WHat would he ask of us? What is it that this incredible man want from us.
My skin begins to tingle at the same moment Edward begins to speak. I feel that I will surely collapse if I do not have this creature before me, if I do not have him now. The words still echo in my head as though I am hearing them for the first time. Juliet, My sweet Juliet...... Your kiss, your smile, your scent, your incredible gait, the one that drew your attention to me, is certainly all that any man could ever dream of. and Maria......Maria ( he says with such wanting in his voice) You are all of that and more. Your kiss, your kiss is that of an angel whose halo's bright aora is only shadowed by the devil deep within you. You my dear are what I have been sent here tonite to find. As I have not been totally forward with the both of you until now, I wish to fully apologize. As I was sent here by my employer in search of, by his discription, all that he finds erotic and sensual in a woman. As I have searched now for a number of years, in many countries, it is with great pleasure that I can announce to him and to you that alas I have found what he desires most in this lifetime. I knew the moment the two of you came into my view that my search would come to an end this evening.
Juliet, it is with deep regret that I inform you that alas as my search has ended, it ends with Maria. I hope in time you will forgive what seems like my dishonesty, as it was the only way. Maria, with my hand stretched towards you now, I ask that you trust in me as you have trusted in no other. Come with me my sweet Maria, you shall never regret such decision.
As I am sure at this moment, my utter amazement at the words that were just spoken, are portrayed in the question in the eyes of Juliet. What had just happend? Was this some sort of evil test, and for who was this test performed. As two very large and emotionless men enter the room and head directly towards Juliet, I am reminded of the fear in her eyes that I had only seen one other time before. only minutes before we ascended the staircase leading us to this very moment. She looked to me for answers, answers that I did not have. The two men stood on either side of her now and waited for a signal from Edward who still had a rather tight grasp on my hand. With an ever so slight of a bow of his head the two mean each took Juliet's arm in there rather large and strong hands. The fear that overcame me at that moment could have only been matched by the fear that I now saw in her eyes. Edward spoke to assure the both of us that no harm would come to either of us, that Juliet would now be escorted off of the premises, and that I would now be prepared.
Prepared??? Prepared for what I wonder. The fear now rapidly fading left me with pure wonderment. I was quickly walked to the master bath of the suite where three women await my presence. Edward took my hands in his and spoke softly....Maria my dear, you are the answer, to so much that you may not ever understand, you are what my search has taken me all over the world for, only to find you here in our own backyard. I leave you now only for a while as the three women you see behind you will prepare you for what shall be the most exciting, exhilerating, erotic, fantasy filled moments of yours or anyones lifetime. Allow me my dear to make all your dreams come true. Though I wondered what would come of Juliet, where she was, what was she thinking, would she or could she ever forgive me, thoughts of Juliet quickly faded as the women undressed me and placed me into a deep tub of warm water and the most luxurious bath beads that I had ever expeienced. I lay back letting the water envelop me and my mind raced.......raced, wondering what lie ahead for me.............
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Ahhhh, you beat me to it...
OOC: Maria, I had difficulty with my computer earlier today and could not post this chapter.
I post it now, in the hopes that you might consider switching back to where I had left the story. I truly, truly want to continue the thread with you and Juliet. I, too, have a certain amount of pride in what we have done and what we have managed to uncover.
Please re-consider your posting and allow me to once again take the lead. Please respond to let me know which way you might wish to travel.
Edward
IC:I watched as Maria hesitatingly slipped into the room, followed by an even more tentative Juliet. They stood there, just a few feet from me, one behind the other. Juliet closed the door behind her as if having made her final decision. Maria heard the door close and her body visibly relaxed. Did she now feel safe since Juliet had joined her in this room with a strange man? What sort of ideas had leaped through their minds as they ascended the stairs and entered what they could only view as the wolf’s lair?
Juliet silently, but purposely strode around Maria and approached me. She whispered something to Maria as she passed by, but I could not hear and I am not certain Maria understood completely. As Juliet walked onto the carpet, she allowed the scarf that had been wrapped around her lovely neck to slip onto the carpet in an erotically charged motion that fairly screamed, “Undress this body and it shall bring you hours of enchantment!” The scarf, blood red against her ankle-length, white satin sheath and the ivory complexion of her shoulders had been like a violent slash through her entire being. Now, with it on the floor, she took on a radiance unseen by these old eyes for many years. She glowed throughout the length of her body. Juliet passed by me and stood just behind me. I wondered at this movement, but soon understood it as a challenge to Maria to join her in accepting whatever lay ahead for them in this room.
Maria took but a few seconds to accept the challenge of the scarf. She took two steps closer to me and allowed her lace wrap, black as the night itself, to fall on top of the red satin of Juliet’s scarf. The two materials, the two colors, the two women, now blended themselves together as one entity, offering themselves to me. I would demonstrate to them how a man can truly appreciate such an offering.
Maria approached closer to me and I stepped into her circle of protection and kissed her. I know the kiss was unexpected at that moment, but it was also the one very definitive thing I knew I had to do. As I caressed the dusky skin along her neck, I whispered into her mouth, “Give of yourself to me, Maria; as I give of myself to you.” An immediate response was communicated through her entire body to me. I did not need to wait for a verbal affirmation. Her body’s heat increased to the searing temperatures of sexual abandon, threatening to melt the black chiffon of her knee-length cocktail dress, and I felt it course through my hands into the very depths of my soul. I knew she was mine for this evening.
I slid my hands down across her shoulders and slowly turned to view the vision in white satin behind me. Two women could never have been more opposite. Where Maria is dark and musky, Juliet is blonde and golden; where Maria is petite and compact, Juliet is tall and full-blown. I stepped close to Juliet now, and bent to kiss her mouth. While Maria’s kiss was intensely burning, heated lip upon heated lip; Juliet’s was astoundingly beautiful in that she was startled by my insistent tongue and allowed her breath to catch in her throat, thus sucking the air directly from my lungs. We had truly just shared a most intimate moment. We breathe the same breath, dear thing. I sucked her lower lip into my mouth and nipped it experimentally. Her body screamed at me to touch it, to stroke it, to love it. I again whispered, “Surrender yourself, your will, your love to me, Juliet; be mine and mine alone to command this night.”
Stepping back and taking both of their hands again, I lead them to the huge mahogany table in the center of the room. I bend and lift two flutes of champagne, one for each of them; and then pick up my own. I salute their beauty with my raised glass and they follow suit. I murmur, staring into each of their lovely eyes, “Tonight, my loves, shall be an adventure in delights unknown by the two of you. We shall learn each other’s most intimate secrets, feelings, desires, fantasies, and fears. You are about to learn as much about each other as you are about yourself. Do not fear anything you feel this evening. Do not resist any urge that slips into your consciousness. Allow your body the true freedom it was always designed to have. Allow your mind to also roam free within the realm of erotic fantasy. Remember, my sweet women, if you can think it; if you can imagine it; if you can dream it; you can experience it here, tonight, with me and with each other. Now, drink to our evening.”
As we drained our glasses, I watched the flush creep into Juliet’s chest. Her mind was already working with unspoken desires, I was certain. I observed Maria, too; her eyes never left Juliet’s heaving breast. There was much more to these women than met the eyes of the casual observer. Lord, how fortunate you allowed me to be – to assist these two incredible women in their discovery of the love they already share, but have not yet shared. What had I done to deserve this honor?
Three glasses returned to the table. Two sets of eyes stared now at me. Two imaginations run amok with questions as to what would occur next. My plans for the evening had evaporated with that first kiss between them, seemingly now so long ago on the balcony. This is an event that no Hollywood director had ever been privileged to take part in. This is a first-time experience of a lifetime. And I am there.
I stepped to them and held the points of two chins in my hand as I whispered, “Maria, undress this lovely woman for me. I want to stand back and watch, as her beauty is unveiled. Juliet, as she removes an article of clothing from you, I want you to return the favor, removing one of hers. I already have both your luscious panties in my pocket. I know there are no bras to contend with. I would imagine that what there is to remove amounts to your lovely frocks, shoes, and white or black lace-top, thigh-high stockings. How much love do you think the two of you can express in this small favor for me?” And I stepped away from them to take a comfortable seat on one of the overstuffed armchairs at the end of the square of carpet. Was I the quintessential voyeur? Was I a player in a control game? Was I the master of my own fate? Answers to these questions evaded and eluded my mind. I watched as the two women stood facing each other, less than 12 inches separating breast from breast, eyes locked into each other’s, chests rising and falling in rapid succession, fingers twitching at their sides, necks and faces flushing. Had I pushed too far? Would my experiment fall apart right here and right now?
OOC: Maria, I had difficulty with my computer earlier today and could not post this chapter.
I post it now, in the hopes that you might consider switching back to where I had left the story. I truly, truly want to continue the thread with you and Juliet. I, too, have a certain amount of pride in what we have done and what we have managed to uncover.
Please re-consider your posting and allow me to once again take the lead. Please respond to let me know which way you might wish to travel.
Edward
IC:I watched as Maria hesitatingly slipped into the room, followed by an even more tentative Juliet. They stood there, just a few feet from me, one behind the other. Juliet closed the door behind her as if having made her final decision. Maria heard the door close and her body visibly relaxed. Did she now feel safe since Juliet had joined her in this room with a strange man? What sort of ideas had leaped through their minds as they ascended the stairs and entered what they could only view as the wolf’s lair?
Juliet silently, but purposely strode around Maria and approached me. She whispered something to Maria as she passed by, but I could not hear and I am not certain Maria understood completely. As Juliet walked onto the carpet, she allowed the scarf that had been wrapped around her lovely neck to slip onto the carpet in an erotically charged motion that fairly screamed, “Undress this body and it shall bring you hours of enchantment!” The scarf, blood red against her ankle-length, white satin sheath and the ivory complexion of her shoulders had been like a violent slash through her entire being. Now, with it on the floor, she took on a radiance unseen by these old eyes for many years. She glowed throughout the length of her body. Juliet passed by me and stood just behind me. I wondered at this movement, but soon understood it as a challenge to Maria to join her in accepting whatever lay ahead for them in this room.
Maria took but a few seconds to accept the challenge of the scarf. She took two steps closer to me and allowed her lace wrap, black as the night itself, to fall on top of the red satin of Juliet’s scarf. The two materials, the two colors, the two women, now blended themselves together as one entity, offering themselves to me. I would demonstrate to them how a man can truly appreciate such an offering.
Maria approached closer to me and I stepped into her circle of protection and kissed her. I know the kiss was unexpected at that moment, but it was also the one very definitive thing I knew I had to do. As I caressed the dusky skin along her neck, I whispered into her mouth, “Give of yourself to me, Maria; as I give of myself to you.” An immediate response was communicated through her entire body to me. I did not need to wait for a verbal affirmation. Her body’s heat increased to the searing temperatures of sexual abandon, threatening to melt the black chiffon of her knee-length cocktail dress, and I felt it course through my hands into the very depths of my soul. I knew she was mine for this evening.
I slid my hands down across her shoulders and slowly turned to view the vision in white satin behind me. Two women could never have been more opposite. Where Maria is dark and musky, Juliet is blonde and golden; where Maria is petite and compact, Juliet is tall and full-blown. I stepped close to Juliet now, and bent to kiss her mouth. While Maria’s kiss was intensely burning, heated lip upon heated lip; Juliet’s was astoundingly beautiful in that she was startled by my insistent tongue and allowed her breath to catch in her throat, thus sucking the air directly from my lungs. We had truly just shared a most intimate moment. We breathe the same breath, dear thing. I sucked her lower lip into my mouth and nipped it experimentally. Her body screamed at me to touch it, to stroke it, to love it. I again whispered, “Surrender yourself, your will, your love to me, Juliet; be mine and mine alone to command this night.”
Stepping back and taking both of their hands again, I lead them to the huge mahogany table in the center of the room. I bend and lift two flutes of champagne, one for each of them; and then pick up my own. I salute their beauty with my raised glass and they follow suit. I murmur, staring into each of their lovely eyes, “Tonight, my loves, shall be an adventure in delights unknown by the two of you. We shall learn each other’s most intimate secrets, feelings, desires, fantasies, and fears. You are about to learn as much about each other as you are about yourself. Do not fear anything you feel this evening. Do not resist any urge that slips into your consciousness. Allow your body the true freedom it was always designed to have. Allow your mind to also roam free within the realm of erotic fantasy. Remember, my sweet women, if you can think it; if you can imagine it; if you can dream it; you can experience it here, tonight, with me and with each other. Now, drink to our evening.”
As we drained our glasses, I watched the flush creep into Juliet’s chest. Her mind was already working with unspoken desires, I was certain. I observed Maria, too; her eyes never left Juliet’s heaving breast. There was much more to these women than met the eyes of the casual observer. Lord, how fortunate you allowed me to be – to assist these two incredible women in their discovery of the love they already share, but have not yet shared. What had I done to deserve this honor?
Three glasses returned to the table. Two sets of eyes stared now at me. Two imaginations run amok with questions as to what would occur next. My plans for the evening had evaporated with that first kiss between them, seemingly now so long ago on the balcony. This is an event that no Hollywood director had ever been privileged to take part in. This is a first-time experience of a lifetime. And I am there.
I stepped to them and held the points of two chins in my hand as I whispered, “Maria, undress this lovely woman for me. I want to stand back and watch, as her beauty is unveiled. Juliet, as she removes an article of clothing from you, I want you to return the favor, removing one of hers. I already have both your luscious panties in my pocket. I know there are no bras to contend with. I would imagine that what there is to remove amounts to your lovely frocks, shoes, and white or black lace-top, thigh-high stockings. How much love do you think the two of you can express in this small favor for me?” And I stepped away from them to take a comfortable seat on one of the overstuffed armchairs at the end of the square of carpet. Was I the quintessential voyeur? Was I a player in a control game? Was I the master of my own fate? Answers to these questions evaded and eluded my mind. I watched as the two women stood facing each other, less than 12 inches separating breast from breast, eyes locked into each other’s, chests rising and falling in rapid succession, fingers twitching at their sides, necks and faces flushing. Had I pushed too far? Would my experiment fall apart right here and right now?
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Need a clarification
OOC: Maria, I just re-read your latest post. Does your direction indicate that Juliet has completely abandoned our scenario? Please say that is not so. I have come to admire and respect both of you -- in your writings and in your personalities. I so much want to continue our thread! Personal difficulties in real time have made it quite difficult to write here, but things have now returned to a state I can deal with and want so much to go on. The remarkable thing is, that I have been calling this story "The Balcony" in my own mind ever since the second posting, months ago. See, there are things we share, dear one.
Please read my latest chapter and let me know if this is at all possible. If it is not, I would like to adapt yours slightly and continue along your lines.
Edward
OOC: Maria, I just re-read your latest post. Does your direction indicate that Juliet has completely abandoned our scenario? Please say that is not so. I have come to admire and respect both of you -- in your writings and in your personalities. I so much want to continue our thread! Personal difficulties in real time have made it quite difficult to write here, but things have now returned to a state I can deal with and want so much to go on. The remarkable thing is, that I have been calling this story "The Balcony" in my own mind ever since the second posting, months ago. See, there are things we share, dear one.
Please read my latest chapter and let me know if this is at all possible. If it is not, I would like to adapt yours slightly and continue along your lines.
Edward
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A fond farewell...
It has become obvious over the past month (last post by my partners was 08/09) that neither Juliet nor Maria wish to continue along the lines we had originally charted. Or, perhaps, they find themselves in situations not unlike my own, in which time constraints prevent even the most casual posting here. While I would love, absolutely love, to continue this thread to its eventual climax (poor choice of words?), I must here and now apologize to both of my literary partners and to anyone who has been patient enough to check in here now and then to see if we have added anything fresh. I must bow out of the Literotica scene, most likely permanently, and by this I am truly saddened. Our real lives, however, do tend to take over at times and this is one of those times. Au revoir to all who followed with any interest this tiny tale of imagination and fantasy.
It has become obvious over the past month (last post by my partners was 08/09) that neither Juliet nor Maria wish to continue along the lines we had originally charted. Or, perhaps, they find themselves in situations not unlike my own, in which time constraints prevent even the most casual posting here. While I would love, absolutely love, to continue this thread to its eventual climax (poor choice of words?), I must here and now apologize to both of my literary partners and to anyone who has been patient enough to check in here now and then to see if we have added anything fresh. I must bow out of the Literotica scene, most likely permanently, and by this I am truly saddened. Our real lives, however, do tend to take over at times and this is one of those times. Au revoir to all who followed with any interest this tiny tale of imagination and fantasy.
Re: A fond farewell...
Just as in real life it becomes necessary to step back and allow a friend to shine in her own awesome way. When it became apparent to me that my presences was no longer wanted here;
"Juliet, it is with deep regret that I inform you that alas as my search has ended, it ends with Maria. I hope in time you will forgive what seems like my dishonesty, as it was the only way. Maria, with my hand stretched towards you now, I ask that you trust in me as you have trusted in no other. Come with me my sweet Maria, you shall never regret such decision."
So you see I did not intentionally abandon ship....just chose to take a step back to allow my friend to take the story in the direction of her choosing.
Take care Edward and know that you will always hold a special spot in my heart because of the wonderful things you helped me to find out, not only about my husband's fantasies and desires but also for the things you helped me to discover about myself.
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Just as in real life it becomes necessary to step back and allow a friend to shine in her own awesome way. When it became apparent to me that my presences was no longer wanted here;
"Juliet, it is with deep regret that I inform you that alas as my search has ended, it ends with Maria. I hope in time you will forgive what seems like my dishonesty, as it was the only way. Maria, with my hand stretched towards you now, I ask that you trust in me as you have trusted in no other. Come with me my sweet Maria, you shall never regret such decision."
So you see I did not intentionally abandon ship....just chose to take a step back to allow my friend to take the story in the direction of her choosing.
Take care Edward and know that you will always hold a special spot in my heart because of the wonderful things you helped me to find out, not only about my husband's fantasies and desires but also for the things you helped me to discover about myself.
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An appreciative 'thank-you'
Juliet, dear one...
My sincere and hear-felt appreciation for your most kind comments. I, too, have incredible memories of our "connections" here and am more than grateful to you for being the incredibly accepting woman that you are. Your personality has allowed this elderly gentleman to live out fantasies that have played havoc with his mind for more years than I actually care to count.
Maria's chosen direction is clear, yes, and I understand your loving willingness to back off and allow her to move the thread in the direction of her choosing. And that, again, indicates the loving woman you are.
Until we run into one another again somewhere hereabouts,
Fondly,
Edward
Juliet, dear one...
My sincere and hear-felt appreciation for your most kind comments. I, too, have incredible memories of our "connections" here and am more than grateful to you for being the incredibly accepting woman that you are. Your personality has allowed this elderly gentleman to live out fantasies that have played havoc with his mind for more years than I actually care to count.
Maria's chosen direction is clear, yes, and I understand your loving willingness to back off and allow her to move the thread in the direction of her choosing. And that, again, indicates the loving woman you are.
Until we run into one another again somewhere hereabouts,
Fondly,
Edward
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