🔮 What are you doing right now? 🔮

Was thinking this:

I woke up in a daze. Where am I? The sights, the sounds, was I in a hospital? I couldn’t remember anything prior to now. I tried to sit up, but my arms and legs were strapped to the bed. What the hell is going on here? I looked in every direction, I was alone but could hear voices outside the room. Muffled mostly but I listened intensely to piece together what I could. I counted three voices, all female but they spoke in a foreign language. Where the fuck am I!
 
Was thinking this:

I woke up in a daze. Where am I? The sights, the sounds, was I in a hospital? I couldn’t remember anything prior to now. I tried to sit up, but my arms and legs were strapped to the bed. What the hell is going on here? I looked in every direction, I was alone but could hear voices outside the room. Muffled mostly but I listened intensely to piece together what I could. I counted three voices, all female but they spoke in a foreign language. Where the fuck am I!
Now, that sounds like a good start. Anything with someone tied to a bed has my attention.
 
I've just finished reading a story and I'm now thinking to myself that I wish I could write as well as that.
 
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