2009 Survivor Bonus Round Challenge #2: Masquerade.

[GuiltyPleasure]

Just a girl
lost inside
your heart,

butterfly,
china doll,
changeling child desperate
for sleep,
dreams of happier times
quest for orgasm
new realms of delight

(Am I wicked?)

The first time shaving
private places smooth
as honey,

Pain

self inflicted injury,
torn petals,
tattered leaves,

a flower still
blooms.
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WIP...all poem titles come from UnderYourSpell's submissions page

This reads really well, Remec. I found UYS' titles very fruitful too.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Hey, UYS, good job!

One can see on this occasion what a huge difference a small change, like "my" versus "the", makes to the image, scene, and mood, in my poem, how important is precision. Outside poetry such precision is rare, in poetry (at least in mine) it is a must.

Regards,

Senna Jawa​

Oooops I beg your pardon it wasn't done on purpose wonder how I read it that way

Just a girl
lost inside
your heart,

butterfly,
china doll,
changeling child desperate
for sleep,
dreams of happier times
quest for orgasm
new realms of delight

(Am I wicked?)

The first time shaving
private places smooth
as honey,

Pain

self inflicted injury,
torn petals,
tattered leaves,

a flower still
blooms.
------

WIP...all poem titles come from UnderYourSpell's submissions page

Gosh ... absolutely lost for words

 

[LadynStFreknBed]

oh, well. I submitted mine, but I don't know if it will post in time. I haven't had much time to breathe, much less work on this challenge.

 

[annaswirls]

oh, well. I submitted mine, but I don't know if it will post in time. I haven't had much time to breathe, much less work on this challenge.

Good job! On the continuation of breath and the poem

I can't wait for April!! What's it gonna be, Lauren???

 

[Lauren Hynde]

You'll see soon enough.