Tzara
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In progress...
Part of the reasoning behind this particular challenge is that good poems take some time to be built, or be constructed.
I know. Right now I'm trying to build some kind of Frank Gehry image.
Not working, is it?
In progress...
So Chelsea Does My Reading
You look at my palm.
There you see
a heart line
a head line a life line
a hand opened to you,
enveloping your hand.
Somewhere there is a tree
newly nestled into earth
that will erupt straight
from the ground to the sky.
I know that is cliché.
I know. I know.
But can you tell me
whom I will meet
to finally stub this loneliness
away like a dead cigarette?
I'm not sure this is worth continuing.You look at my palm.
There you see
a heart line
a head line a life line
a hand opened to you,
enveloping your hand.
Somewhere there is a tree
newly nestled into earth
that will erupt straight
from the ground to the sky.
I know that is cliché.
I know. I know.
But can you tell me
whom I will meet
to finally stub this loneliness
away like a dead cigarette?
Part of the reasoning behind this particular challenge is that good poems take some time to be built, or be constructed.
I know. Right now I'm trying to build some kind of Frank Gehry image.
Not working, is it?