wildsweetone
i am what i am
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Sub Joe said:My post was the birthday cake challenge. Obviously it didn't quite come off!
IT WORKED!!! I humbly apologise Sub Joe, I was off in cloud cuckoo land there, please forgive me.
You know, the way you've written it has me sitting there at the table watching Nat's delight. And knowing that there's 'even better to come'... well, heck I can taste the cake myself
Singularity: I have to agree with you, the original version seems to read more smoothly. But yes, it's sure worth the exercise. I'm glad you had a go.
Just-Legal: Yes! you've got it too, well done. I like the 'twenty little lights', a different way of saying candles and yet still easily visualised.