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[dv8tmind]

Read them noth

Enjoyable reading and good plots. Nice twist on Ridinghood. But I have to agree I found myself skipping some places from the paragraphs being long.

I am also new and learning quite a bit here. PIcked up an editor made alot of difference. I have two new stories pending. After getting the editor. The ones already posted I can definately see alot more mistakes. But then that is how we learn.

And please keep writing, writing and writing.

T

 

[CyranodeMelbourne]

Hey dv8tmind!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and sorry for my delay in replying Also, I appreciate the constructive feedback.

One question, and I ask this of anyone, with the newer stories, are my paragraphs getting better?