dr_mabeuse
seduce the mind
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Re: Re: Backclick Triggers
No. I like that. And using it in diaolgue is fine: it definitely types your character as having a certain kind of not-quite-with-itness.
It just irritates me when an author describes something in terms of how the narrator feels about it. It's the fallacy of the "delicious-looking steak": "She had the most incredible tits I'd ever seen!" (Well good for her, but what did they look like?) And then using a cliche like "to die for" on top of it makes me hit the eject button. Obviously the author's powers of description are feeble at best.
That, more than anything else, is why I like third person more than first person: because first person is more prone to give you that delicious-looking steak kind of thing. When you do get it in third person ("She had the most incredible tits he'd ever seen.") you can be pretty sure that you're dealing with an author who writes in crayon and that it's time to go.
---dr.M.
Uther_Pendragon said:|
From a recent story of mine:
"That's true of all the restaurants on that street. Food
to die for -- restrooms to die *from*."
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I guess I'd have lost the good doctor.
No. I like that. And using it in diaolgue is fine: it definitely types your character as having a certain kind of not-quite-with-itness.
It just irritates me when an author describes something in terms of how the narrator feels about it. It's the fallacy of the "delicious-looking steak": "She had the most incredible tits I'd ever seen!" (Well good for her, but what did they look like?) And then using a cliche like "to die for" on top of it makes me hit the eject button. Obviously the author's powers of description are feeble at best.
That, more than anything else, is why I like third person more than first person: because first person is more prone to give you that delicious-looking steak kind of thing. When you do get it in third person ("She had the most incredible tits he'd ever seen.") you can be pretty sure that you're dealing with an author who writes in crayon and that it's time to go.
---dr.M.
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