BDSM Haiku

[Wintermute01]

Everytime I think
I know what I know it
really proves nothing.

In that case Cali,
Do the lottery today
Your luck might be in

 

[Curious_in_Cali]

In that case Cali,
Do the lottery today
Your luck might be in

Can my win be a
boat on a soft stream with a
delicious picnic?

 

[Wintermute01]

Can my win be a
boat on a soft stream with a
delicious picnic?

I'm sure that it could.
I'll provide the wine and food
You name the river.

 

[Curious_in_Cali]

I'm sure that it could.
I'll provide the wine and food
You name the river.

The gift of granting
a name is a generous
one... how about Bob?

 

[Wintermute01]

The gift of granting
a name is a generous
one... how about Bob?

Bob's appropriate
After all, is that not what
boats do on water?

 

[Curious_in_Cali]

Bob's appropriate
After all, is that not what
boats do on water?

Yes! That is what I
used to inspire the birth of
Mr. Bob N. Flow.

 

[Wintermute01]

Yes! That is what I
used to inspire the birth of
Mr. Bob N. Flow.

Both Bob's and Flo's birth,
Are they dizygotic twins?
One birth, two sexes.

 

[Curious_in_Cali]

Both Bob's and Flo's birth,
Are they dizygotic twins?
One birth, two sexes.

Oh, Flo's really great
fun except on Sundays when
that one bird's too stoned.

 

[Wintermute01]

Oh, Flo's really great
fun except on Sundays when
that one bird's too stoned.

Maybe in the bush,
Though she doubles in value
When held in the hand.

 

[Collar_N_Cuffs]

Hand behind my head,
pulling on my hair, taking
what you want from me

 

[Wintermute01]

When riding, one learns
Rein control, the fine balance
Of gesture and force.

 

[Collar_N_Cuffs]

A master who knows
the art of distraction, can
finish when desired.

 

[Wintermute01]

Those with expertise
Ensure their mounts enjoy both
The race and finish.

 

[minette05]

Those with expertise
Ensure their mounts enjoy both
The race and finish.

With speed and pleasure
the race becomes the journey
beginning anew

 

[Wintermute01]

With speed and pleasure
the race becomes the journey
beginning anew

Now reunited,
As canter turns to gallop
Muscles become taught.

 

[minette05]

Now reunited,
As canter turns to gallop
Muscles become taught.

Charging to rhythms
clap! clap! slap! the sounds
clamorous delights

 

[Wintermute01]

Charging to rhythms
clap! clap! slap! the sounds
clamorous delights

Harnesses secured
Leather and steel shine with sweat;
One rides the other.

 

[minette05]

Now reunited,
As canter turns to gallop
Muscles become taught.

Harnesses secured
Leather and steel shine with sweat;
One rides the other.

Faces flushed, glowing
with vigor the steed
is ridden hard, fast

 

[Wintermute01]

Faces flushed, glowing
with vigor the steed
is ridden hard, fast

Progressing through pain
Masculine power's controlled
By female orders.

 

[PreggoBitch]

Wow

Had one to write but reading the ones already posted got me all wet... The one i had was shit in comparison to these

 

[Wintermute01]

Had one to write but reading the ones already posted got me all wet... The one i had was shit in comparison to these

Go for it. We're a friendly bunch here.

 

[Heatseekher]

mm Haiku, never done this before...3 lines right ?



chains rattle,
cold to the touch,
unquestionable restraint.

nervous anticipation,
sightless darkness pervades,
waiting, waiting.

imagination wanders,
creating heaven and hell,
his to create

mentally aroused,
physically stimulated
pleasure and pain

legs spread wide
gasps of pleasure ,
escape her mouth.

 

[Wintermute01]

mm Haiku, never done this before...3 lines right ?



chains rattle,
cold to the touch,
unquestionable restraint.

nervous anticipation,
sightless darkness pervades,
waiting, waiting.

imagination wanders,
creating heaven and hell,
his to create

mentally aroused,
physically stimulated
pleasure and pain

legs spread wide
gasps of pleasure ,
escape her mouth.

Yes three lines, but the syllable counts are also important.

5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third.

E.g.

In sum/mer/time heat
The cool/ing breeze on her skin
Rais/es small goose/bumps.

There are other rules but that's enough to be getting on with for now.

 

[minette05]

Had one to write but reading the ones already posted got me all wet... The one i had was shit in comparison to these

Soft strokes on your hand.
Write what your mind and body
are aching to tell

 

[minette05]

Progressing through pain
Masculine power's controlled
By female orders.

Withholding, giving
Retreating then advancing
Watching your sweet squirms