Best MMF story?

susurrus · Apr 4, 2008

member814 · Apr 14, 2008

My Story

I hope it's not too presumptuous, but I just posted my first story to Literotica and thought I'd give you all a pointer to it. I've been reading this thread for years, and it seems like a great way to share. Anyway, you can find my story here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=360195

If you have suggestions on how I can improve my writing, please let me know! Also, if you like my story, please be sure to post a Public Comment at the end... sometimes the relentless gay bashing can be a bit discouraging.

Thanks!

summerof69 · Apr 14, 2008

member814 said:
I hope it's not too presumptuous, but I just posted my first story to Literotica and thought I'd give you all a pointer to it. I've been reading this thread for years, and it seems like a great way to share. Anyway, you can find my story here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=360195

If you have suggestions on how I can improve my writing, please let me know! Also, if you like my story, please be sure to post a Public Comment at the end... sometimes the relentless gay bashing can be a bit discouraging.

Thanks!

OMG, that is THE HOTTEST story I've read in the best MMF story thread! Seriously, it's my fantasy to a 'D'

I can't tell you how perfect that is. I appreciate the fact that there wasn't any anal. I can't wait for your next one. I can totally relate to that guy in the story in every way.
Wow!

Bicuriousone · Apr 14, 2008

I agree completely

summerof69 said:
OMG, that is THE HOTTEST story I've read in the best MMF story thread! Seriously, it's my fantasy to a 'D'

I can't tell you how perfect that is. I appreciate the fact that there wasn't any anal. I can't wait for your next one. I can totally relate to that guy in the story in every way.
Wow!

That is one great story. I could picture my wife and I as the couple in the story and that is actually what I would like to happen. Can't wait to read more stories by you.

cadman7777 · Apr 14, 2008

I always love the stories from the woman's perspective....they always make me hard

sethp · Apr 14, 2008

cadman7777 said:
I always love the stories from the woman's perspective....they always make me hard

check out my busty jessica stories ..though they aren't everyones cup of tea..lot's of dark humor and poorly written.

curiousnme · Apr 15, 2008

member814 said:
I hope it's not too presumptuous, but I just posted my first story to Literotica and thought I'd give you all a pointer to it. I've been reading this thread for years, and it seems like a great way to share. Anyway, you can find my story here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=360195

If you have suggestions on how I can improve my writing, please let me know! Also, if you like my story, please be sure to post a Public Comment at the end... sometimes the relentless gay bashing can be a bit discouraging.

Thanks!

Great story - my fantasy in great detail. Would love to be the husband in your story.

Keep up the great writing.

Cheers

schaeff · Apr 16, 2008

Having a woman there for it all

me too. great story

susurrus · Apr 18, 2008

Member814,

Welcome!

You're not being presumptuous at all. It's the sure way for like-minded people to know you've written something that'll probably appeal.

You've written a great story, and I (and everybody on this thread, I'm sure) would love to see chapter 2.

So, don't be afraid to notify us when you get your stories posted.

susurrus · Apr 18, 2008

Tantric_in_oc · Apr 18, 2008

Suss...

You are a true hunter... job well done

muffin420 · Apr 21, 2008

here are my two contributions to the world of mmf storytelling:

online couple pt 1:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=360538

online couple pt 2:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=361422

i have many more to offer, i find writing helps me work through my bicurious feelings...

susurrus · Apr 23, 2008

Muffin,

You keep exploring. Just make sure the rest of us get to read about it.

Thanks a bunch.

Tantric_in_oc · May 3, 2008

submissions

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=250296

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=251628

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=357863

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=307388

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=288408

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=253377

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=327644

Apologies for any repeats....

Sooner76065 · May 3, 2008

susurrus said:
Muffin,

You keep exploring. Just make sure the rest of us get to read about it.

Thanks a bunch.

And thanks to you for your hard work, Sus. It is appreciated.

Sooner

susurrus · May 3, 2008

Sooner76065 · May 16, 2008

A very hard . . .

Ker- Bump!!!

S--

schaeff · May 16, 2008

Becoming one of my favs...bump

susurrus · May 16, 2008

member814 · May 16, 2008

My Story - Part 2

I just posted the second part of my story; I hope you find it equally pleasureable!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=365312

If you have suggestions on how I can improve my writing, please let me know! Also, if you like my story, please be sure to post a Public Comment at the end... sometimes the relentless gay bashing can be a bit discouraging.

michaelinteas · May 16, 2008

susurrus

I applaud you for all of your effort in finding the best stories for us to read.

You are much appreciated.

curiousnme · May 17, 2008

member814 said:
I just posted the second part of my story; I hope you find it equally pleasureable!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=365312

If you have suggestions on how I can improve my writing, please let me know! Also, if you like my story, please be sure to post a Public Comment at the end... sometimes the relentless gay bashing can be a bit discouraging.

Really enjoyed both chapters of your story. Keep up the great work - - wish you had more!!

sandiego1 · May 18, 2008

great thread!

susurrus · May 18, 2008

Member814,

I know it's discouraging to have the jackasses flame your work after you've warned them it's a bi male story. Hell, the title should have tipped them off in the first place.

The problem gets to be, there are people out there who have made it their only purpose to write nasty, stupid bullshit comments like the ones that you're talking about. The big question gets to be: What the fuck are these shitheads doing on this site in the first place?

Then, if you'll notice, the ugliest flames are always by dumbasses too ball-less to put their names to them.

There's an option when you submit your stories that lets you allow/disallow anonymous feedback. I've activated this on *all* my stories. Sure, it means you don't get quite as much feedback - both negative *and* positive - but it does mean that it helps keep the dumbshits who obviously only read the story so they *could* get offended to a minimum. You can also disallow the public feedback it you want. This means you'll only get email feedback. And if you have the anonymous disallowed, you won't get anonymous feedback through email, either.

I don't know if you've deleted any of the public feedback (yes, you can do that) but if you've noticed, both from chapter 1 and 2, that the general consensus is that you need to keep going. Fuck the idiots (and not in any good way).

Remember, all the rest of us aside: If you're enjoying what you're doing, keep doing it. Not enough people get to do things they really like, and what you're doing is fine stuff. That what you're doing is appealing to others is icing on the cake.

jeninflorida · May 18, 2008

Tantric_in_oc said:
Wondering what people think is the hottest one out there on Literotica. Links anyone?

and....what about my stories? lol

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