exercise - Write a scene

[Guest]

Re: Good greif! Not agian!

I kiked down the dor of her Frisco apartment and cammed in her fase.

Maths, I see you've embellished your standard offering. Not bad, but you have a ways to go to reach Gauche's heights.

constructively critical, Perdita

 

[destinie21]

The sky was the color of malice. Gray- black clouds rolling slowly across the horizon. A portend to the coming storm.
The coppery smell of fresh unfallen rain blanketed the wooly air, and the chill was enough to permeate bricks. Causing the residence of the sleepy suburb to use their furnace for the first time that autumn.

 

[wildsweetone]

These are such fun to play around with. I'm going to have another attempt later today or tomorrow.

Please keep them coming, feel free to add a second or third if you'd like the practise.

 

[MathGirl]

feel free to add a second or third if you'd like the practise.

Oh, okay: "She kiked down the dor of the Frisco flatt and set on his fase."
MG

 

[Guest]

Maths,

Your work and Gauche's - from the ridiculous to the sublime.

tritely, Perdita

 

[MathGirl]

nolo contendre

Originally posted by perdita Maths, Your work and Gauche's - from the ridiculous to the sublime.

Dear Perdita,
I can't compete with Gauchie authorililily, so I had to go in the other direction.
MG
Ps. You must admit, though, that I'm hell for terse.

 

[Guest]

Re: nolo contendre

You must admit, though, that I'm hell for terse.

Yes, terse for the worse. Ah ha ha ha... I must needs go home.

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