Exquisite Corpse V.2

[todski28]

nouns:
verbs:
adjectives:
adverbs:
exclamations:

ummm, beyond my comprehension, I failed school, and this hurts my brain
I know how to get in a car turn it on and drive, but how the engine works??? beyond me

I'll go through everyone's answers slowly (adverb?) and see if I can decipher it

 

[Senna Jawa]

Each participant posts, in this thread, five each of nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs and three exclamations [...] For each line of your poem, you choose a noun from one person, a verb from another, an adjective from another and so on.

Then it seems that for full lines you need at least six different authors.

 

[greenmountaineer]

English Is So Fucking Versatile

It's a noun as in what a good she is
as well as a verb as in what lovers do.
And there's no fucking way if an adjective
it can't be an adverb too,
and don't you fucking deny it!*

*exclamation point

(I think this might be cheating, but I couldn't fucking resist.)

 

[Ashesh9]

English Is So Fucking Versatile

It's a noun as in what a good she is
as well as a verb as in what lovers do.
And there's no fucking way if an adjective
it can't be an adverb too,
and don't you fucking deny it!*

*exclamation point

(I think this might be cheating, but I couldn't fucking resist.)

You're a naughty fuckin' Poet
But I looove U
I really do
I daren't fuckin' deny it
i'm crazy 'bout this Nu Look UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU !!!

 

[todski28]

English Is So Fucking Versatile

It's a noun as in what a good she is
as well as a verb as in what lovers do.
And there's no fucking way if an adjective
it can't be an adverb too,
and don't you fucking deny it!*

*exclamation point

(I think this might be cheating, but I couldn't fucking resist.)

Don't know wether to be offended
Amused
or consider my self taught something ;D

(Amused is definitely running this party )

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I'm in like Flynn.
(don't know who Flynn is or how I'm like her/him, but it is what it is...)

nouns: garden, puppy, whore, dust, stiletto
verbs: to kneel, to hear, to jump, to ask, to deny
adjectives: cold, inadequate, triumphant, voracious, sweet
adverbs: nicely, anxiously, humorously, nearly, noisily
exclamations: Cripes! Snap! Shit!

wasn't that Errol Flynn and his sexploits lol? rather apt considering!

 

[Angeline]

English Is So Fucking Versatile

It's a noun as in what a good she is
as well as a verb as in what lovers do.
And there's no fucking way if an adjective
it can't be an adverb too,
and don't you fucking deny it!*

*exclamation point

(I think this might be cheating, but I couldn't fucking resist.)

Fuck! It's fucking funny, you fucker.

 

[butters]

saving my spot

back later.

i'm back but still nothin'. why am i finding this such a struggle? i can do jigsaws....

ok, kinda sorta, though my brain hurts and it's not something i enjoyed

voracious dust candidly fondled
his face, prepared hasty, inexplicable
demands like a finger-fuck, impatient,
defiantly dirty, a shipwreck rocking his
now, a whore kneeling , dour and noisily
cider, scratching and always inadequate.

 

[HarryHill]

saving my spot

back later.

..
This poem is getting long
now correct me if I'm wrong...Do we
Write one line from each poets list... Or
write as many lines as there are poets from ALL the nouns, verbs...

 

[butters]

..
This poem is getting long
now correct me if I'm wrong...Do we
Write one line from each poets list... Or
write as many lines as there are poets from ALL the nouns, verbs...

get them altogether - you have 6 poets' list to choose from as there are 7 of us...

so, 6 lines. in each line, you get to choose one noun, verb, adjective, adverb and exclamation if you want that many - you might opt for a noun, adverb and adjective.

it's bugging me, since i want silence to think about this and can't get it right now.

 

[HarryHill]

get them altogether - you have 6 poets' list to choose from as there are 7 of us...

so, 6 lines. in each line, you get to choose one noun, verb, adjective, adverb and exclamation if you want that many - you might opt for a noun, adverb and adjective.

it's bugging me, since i want silence to think about this and can't get it right now.

...
So, one more time, our (6) line poem will be a separate entity from the others, right? thought so.

 

[Angeline]

...
So, one more time, our (6) line poem will be a separate entity from the others, right? thought so.

Yes! Each poem is unique because each of us will mix our choices from the poets' list in our own ways. The only requirement is to use something from each participant in each line.

 

[butters]

best i could come up with. sorry...

http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=51209430&postcount=33

 

[Angeline]

http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=51209430&postcount=33

I like it. I like the poems where meaning is malleable.

 

[champagne1982]

ooooh, so a 6 line poem with at least 6 words in each line? I guess I did mine wrong.. but meh. I'll try again later

 

[greenmountaineer]

Fuck! It's fucking funny, you fucker.

When I saw the F word listed 3 times for a noun, verb, and exclamation, respectively, it reminded me of I kid I knew as a teenager who managed to say "fuckin' A" in just about every grammatical possibility you could think of, as in:

"The fuckin' A Yankees fuckin' A lost again last fuckin' A night."

Did you ever hear that phrase growing up in Trenton?

 

[Ashesh9]

When I saw the F word listed 3 times for a noun, verb, and exclamation, respectively, it reminded me of I kid I knew as a teenager who managed to say "fuckin' A" in just about every grammatical possibility you could think of, as in:

"The fuckin' A Yankees fuckin' A lost again last fuckin' A night."

Did you ever hear that phrase growing up in Trenton?

That's a fuckin'ly funny fuck of a fuckin' comment by that fuckin' teenager !?!

 

[Angeline]

When I saw the F word listed 3 times for a noun, verb, and exclamation, respectively, it reminded me of I kid I knew as a teenager who managed to say "fuckin' A" in just about every grammatical possibility you could think of, as in:

"The fuckin' A Yankees fuckin' A lost again last fuckin' A night."

Did you ever hear that phrase growing up in Trenton?

I did though more as an exclamation than a modifier.

The expression I always think of as really Jersey is "g'head" for "go ahead." I've never heard it outside the metro NYC/NJ area. My friends in the midwest always used to giggle when I'd (unintentionally) say it.

 

[HarryHill]

Shipwreck of Whores

Think I've missed it.

Are you going to the cider dance?
Fucking A, I'll be there where
labia cry for steamy thunderheads
to spit ice cream lower, Merde',
to fondle portly cantolopes
sweaty, barely pompadored, always

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Think I've missed it.

Are you going to the cider dance?
Fucking A, I'll be there where
labia cry for steamy thunderheads
to spit ice cream lower, Merde',
to fondle portly cantolopes
sweaty, barely pompadored, always

I do like that I tripped up a bit on the last two lines, but reading it over again a few times enjoyed it more!

 

[butters]

Think I've missed it.

Are you going to the cider dance?
Fucking A, I'll be there where
labia cry for steamy thunderheads
to spit ice cream lower, Merde',
to fondle portly cantolopes
sweaty, barely pompadored, always

brain hurts too much to check about the rules v the write, but as a write? no, you didn't miss. lines 3 & 4? brilliant

 

[HarryHill]

brain hurts too much to check about the rules v the write, but as a write? no, you didn't miss. lines 3 & 4? brilliant

I think I cheated in the first line, used two nouns though its possible I've subverted a noun as a modifier? adjective?

 

[butters]

I think I cheated in the first line, used two nouns though its possible I've subverted a noun as a modifier? adjective?

i hope someone else comes in and answers your question, harry; my brain hurts

 

[HarryHill]

i hope someone else comes in and answers your question, harry; my brain hurts

Mental waves of Aleeve sent your way.

 

[HarryHill]

ooooh, so a 6 line poem with at least 6 words in each line? I guess I did mine wrong.. but meh. I'll try again later

Knew I missed the mark