Fib Divine

[EriAliSaa]

:blink:

Wow I am seriously impressed. I can't even do hiaku's. Counting is not my strong suit.

 

[HotKittySpank]

:blink:

Wow I am seriously impressed. I can't even do hiaku's. Counting is not my strong suit.

blink,
think
we know
strong suits, Wow
seriously am
impressed Counting. I do, not can't.
my woman even in this you have knack, count in you!

 

[My Erotic Trail]

blink,
think
we know
strong suits, Wow
seriously am
impressed Counting. I do, not can't.
my woman even in this you have knack, count in you!

dare
fly
or fall
no matter
lifes filled with more
swimming in a blanket nude
stand on your head and write poetry while walking!

 

[HotKittySpank]

I
trip slightly
on peanut shells and sawdust
the jukeman and me hit it off right quick,
the sidewalks are perilous with ice and sweatered single girls,

one cop breezes by sippin his mud,
meanwhile, shell stored memories sound oceans
for I am alone
not interested in staggerqueens
medicated and stoley'd to their chairs.

"Got any Beck?" I ask
Nobody dancing anyway,
"Hell Yeah" he says.

"Guero?"

for you man, the whole thing.

from Memphis to New Orleans
Your out there in scenes passing by...

ok - if there is some hidden 'math sequence' going on here you will need to fill me in. i am what is 'affectionately' refered to as dyscalculic (no comprende math mi amigo) THAT is why i think this is so much fun, 'math' i CAN do. : ) its like my big ole birdie finger, way up high in the sky man - stickin' it to all the others who get it but me. ; )


Other than that, i actually really liked this piece. should it be Stoli'd to their chairs? are you refering to the vodka?

favorite line: the sidewalks are perilous with ice and sweatered single girls
mmmmm...alliteration makes the mouth water....
: ) you gotta watch out for those ice maidens...

 

[HotKittySpank]

dare
fly
or fall
no matter
lifes filled with more
swimming in a blanket nude
stand on your head and write poetry while walking!

up
side
down, you
always find truth.
wisdom of ceilings
hung with our feelings, in the way
swimming toes graze the cold pebbles far below, reeling

 

[My Erotic Trail]

up
side
down, you
always find truth.
wisdom of ceilings
hung with our feelings, in the way
swimming toes graze the cold pebbles far below, reeling

deep
down
the lure
dangles and wiggles
precision casts with expert reels
anticipations vise, the joy in testing our patience
I could go on, about how great fishing is but I have to go, the fish are not biting!

 

[Remec]

deep
down
the lure
dangles and wiggles
precision casts with expert reels
anticipations vise, the joy in testing our patience
I could go on, about how great fishing is but I have to go, the fish are not biting!

Would
be
just my
sort of luck
to find that when the
fish do begin biting, I will
fail to escape their ravenous jaws---damn piranha.

 

[champagne1982]

one
moves
so quick
skipping me
drifting back paddles
lazily finding eddy flows
stickier under your ass than ice at ten below
in parkas and north winds blowing dark southward with a glowing coreolis borealis.

 

[cherries_on_snow]

up
side
down, you
always find truth.
wisdom of ceilings
hung with our feelings, in the way
swimming toes graze the cold pebbles far below, reeling

I love this! and many of the lovely poems made in this challenge. Great job with this idea, HKS.

 

[RhymeFairy]

Originally Posted by Remec :

I
did,
at one
time, enjoy
the safety that comfort
zones provided me whenever
it became necessary to withdraw inside such
and wait out the world until my comfort overflowed,
and I could sail home once more
the wind at my back,
and my heart
swollen
with
hope

Hi ya stranger ....

Love this thread.
Will have to come back after work and play with this.

 

[HotKittySpank]

I love this! and many of the lovely poems made in this challenge. Great job with this idea, HKS.

i can not take credit for the 'idea' - found it on the internet while researching the fibonacci sequence and wanting to write something around the numbers... i guess someone else had the same idea and beat me to it : )
look up 'fib poems' and you will find TONS of them popping up everywhere.
however, i am thrilled that people like this. happy counting. --hks

 

[HotKittySpank]

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..
...
.....
........
.............

 

[HotKittySpank]

first,
you
should stop.
forgetting
everything you thought
and fall into the loud open.
listen and begin again, you will find your way friend

 

[HotKittySpank]

am
i
going
insane? dead
stop. times clock in, what?
two voices, names play games with me.
shake, shake, shake, erase this blur in time, stop! don't watch me!

 

[HotKittySpank]

0/0
0/1
1/1
1/2
2/3
3/5
5/8
8/13

 

[HotKittySpank]

i
am
puppet
to your string,
strung along name games
speak open, don't pull me cruely
i happily dance for your tunes amusement, my umbilicus cord cut

 

[Remec]

Strung
up
upon
nothing more
than hopes and daydreams,
I dangle, slowly spinning in
space, waiting for gravity to reassert itself.

 

[HotKittySpank]

float
through
daydreams
drifting along
thought pondering waves,
dangled spinner places strung up
against gravity; cradled in my empty spaces

 

[MsBug]

Oh
please.
Friday
is way late
to be complaining
at the boss about overtime.
I am so ready for the weekend to get rolling.
Fasten your seatbelts, it's going to be one hell of a bumpy ride, done correctly.

 

[HotKittySpank]

turn
on
my switch
make me twitch
shudder under touch
in currents flow to course beneath you
caressed until i light up your sky; electrified

 

[EriAliSaa]

Bed
of
flora
caressing
delicate petals
my senses so alive on silk
sheets, breathlessly heaving against the taut lace teddy,
anticipation of a touch, that is to long in coming, scent of jasmine floating.

Satin binds, wrist together, ankles apart, mask of satin and lace, the darkness I
embrace. My pulse quickens at a sound, ever so slight.
An invisible touch hovers.
Vocalization
betrays my
wanton,
wild
lust.

 

[HotKittySpank]

Bed
of
flora
caressing
wanton
wild
lust.

hey! there ya go chickie! see, wasn't too hard was it : ) or was it ; )

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