Good incest stories?

[caprine]

Yes...

Hello fellow Lit writers,

After taking some time off following my first two literary efforts, my third story just went up and I'm looking for some feedback.

My first two were Mature stories that got decent reviews, but this time I went for a brother/sister story that, so far, has only gotten mixed reviews in terms of voting and only two public comments, both somewhat critical. However, I've gotten nearly a dozen emails, all of which were complimentary and I would like to see what others Literotica regulars think.

Breakfast Lessons

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=378795

Thanks in advance for your comments!

Doug (carolinahusband)

This story line was a good one and developed fairly well, but I agree that the story ended too abruptly/soon and that left the reader hanging. If you plan on continuing the story, then some hint that more to come was needed. But, practice leads closer to prfection. Keep writing.

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Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well-preserved body but, rather, to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, beer in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming "WOOHOO!! What a ride!"

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[caprine]

Amen!

Plese don't feed the trolls. They are better ignored or with barbecue sauce.

I fully agree. If engaged, they can and most likely will drop 1 bombs all over the author who engages them.

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Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well-preserved body but, rather, to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, beer in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming "WOOHOO!! What a ride!"

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[caprine]

The discussion...

is straying from the subject. This thread started as a discussion of incest. Feedback discussion of a specific story (ies) is better done on a separate thread or in the AH. Just my opinion.

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...I feel more alive when I’m writing than I do at any other time—except when I’m making love. Two things when you forget time, when nothing exists except the moment—the moment of writing, the moment of love. That perfect concentration is bliss.”
- May Sarton

 

[Many Feathers]

Hey sweetie!

You mean me?

I'd love to.

Give me a link to your stories.

Have a new one out now too...give it a read and let me know what you think. See below in my sigy line for the link:

Aunt Sioux!

 

[george51]

I just found Literotica about a month ago and I am in the process of reading all the incest stories A to Z.
DaddyO_748

That's a big task. I might try myself.

One more point, and again I differ from the consensus: I dislike the use of obscene words and vulgar expressions. "c*nt" is an ugly word for a beautiful body part. "Vagina" and "vulva" are beautiful words.

I personally like plenty of vulgarity. Yet I rarely use bad language in speech. I also like stories when the author gets to the point. I find the standard of Literotica writing far superior to other sites. But some of the other sites are more liberated in what they allow.

As others have said, I read purely from a fantasy point of view, like pretty much everything I write on such forums.

Read T@nman. Excellent.

 

[kylewhitney]

I'm bored of the top incest stories, I read probably half of them..

Anyone know good stories outside of the top list?

I have a mother/son series (6+ chapters and growing) titled "Hard Times with Mom" that is getting pretty good responses.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=438895

It's my first attempt at an incest story, so I don't know if I hit all the buttons just right, but I'm having loads of fun with it.

Cheers,
-Kyle

P.S. I loooove the word cunt! Especially when it's used by a woman to refer to her "love sheath," not as much when used as an insult.

 

[mikeaday]

check out my one

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=421037

 

[george51]

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P.S. I loooove the word cunt! Especially when it's used by a woman to refer to her "love sheath," not as much when used as an insult.

I'm with that. Straight to the point. And most erotic.

 

[Timbledore]

I am a new Author here and my first story (which is an Incenst story) has been published. I have a thread going for it in this forum if you care to take a peek.

Thanks!

 

[Powertone]

A little side note to The_Trouvere...

I picture you wearing pink satin and having a wrist that is just a wee bit limp...

you hit it on the head

 

[Powertone]

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