Haiku Lovers

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

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Farewell, literotica.

 

[Mv_Name_Is_Cade]

I don't like this thread because it needs more penis.

 

[vrosej10]

A bird's kind of song
sits on A-sides of singles
nothin' to arty

clarity
the bellbird's song
pings through the rainforest

 

[SweetOblivion]

Haiku

With each service done,
Your head rests on my shoulder,
Nature breathes as one;

M

 

[bflagsst]

Love lie on her cheek
and her cheek for my pillow
nest on my shoulder

 

[bluerains]

felt

lines caressed
locks stroked
heart receptors

 

[ThePrinceOfSeduction]

arise!
time is neared...
im cumming

 

[LadynStFreknBed]

I LOVE HAIKUS! But for the sake of learning ..how do I write one?

What is Haiku? by: jthserra

The old 5-7-5 rule is actually an English bastardization of haiku.
jthserra has other excellent articles on the subject.

Hope this helps!

Oh, I don't like to use Wiki as a reference ever, but most of their info on haiku is actually pretty good.

 

[vrosej10]

crab-scuttling leaves
it blows away company
an empty night wind

 

[tungtied2u]

Jazz Haiku 1

God’s breath on grass reeds
Sublime sounds weave awareness
Earth and air in dance

 

[tungtied2u]

Jazz Haiku 2

Two hands seek heaven
Climb the ladder step by step
Fertile fields greet open ears

 

[Irania]

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[Mac2383]

Raspberries bled,
Into your milky white navel.
I licked the nectar...

I like the image of that....but i would do it with blackberries....

 

[mynameisben]

Pony tails and Barbies
Howling wind whispers them by
And then they are gone

 

[WillWander]

From western Eyes, Ears, and Mind
Christian comforts, huckleberry pies
Damned by Dubious democracy

 

[robotbox_x]

I wrote this forever ago..but I love Haiku

Into the unknown
I once fell; ah The Unknown,
I know it so well.

 

[Luke's Angel]

Wind blows over the hill,
The sun shines brightly overhead,
The sky, alive with clouds

 

[Senna Jawa]

I wrote this forever ago..but I love Haiku

Then why don't you write one?

 

[Senna Jawa]

Wind blows over the hill,
The sun shines brightly overhead,
The sky, alive with clouds

and...?

 

[Mac2383]

Wind blows over the hill,
The sun shines brightly overhead,
The sky, alive with clouds

Yes: "The sky, alive with clouds..." "clouds" in Buddhist terms "our thoughts" covering the clear sky, "one's own true nature behind the clouds.... unchanging.....pure consciousness..... nice to get there now and then....

 

[Mac2383]

a lovely book

If u get the chance, see if u can get hold of the book: 'haiku mind' by Patricia Donegan (108 Poems to Cultivate Awareness & Open Your Heart)
she offers her thoughts on each haiku; it's a beautifull read.....

 

[vrosej10]

late evening
to the our pet mice
my son sings

 

[Senna Jawa]

late evening
to our pet mice
my son sings


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I like it! It's still better when you reverse the order of lines.

("the" didn't belong).