~~Haiku River~~

I toss my grief in the river,
a heron skips past it.
It will flourish downstream.
 
projectile tofu

what i feel is so heartfelt
my open hands
immediately grasp
my lower tract
 
MyNecroticSnail said:
what i feel is so heartfelt
my open hands
immediately grasp
my lower tract

sensing utopia
mind locks senses of time
yet time itself is unlocked
 
she pulled the whistle

erupting now
to
a then

queen of the rivers
 
I asked for some help
posted-"Looking for Feedback"
Some help, no votes. Why?
 
On impulse, I wrote
Seeking feedback from authors
Read, vote, comment. Thanks
 
Bad haikus are fun
My poems must be less so
No votes, do they suck?
 
jomar said:
I asked for some help
posted-"Looking for Feedback"
Some help, no votes. Why?


there is a movement among some here to not read nor vote on poems from the new poems list but to only disect poems in the poetry forum. I do not totally disagree with this concept so I read and comment on them when I can but hopefully that may explain the lack of comments and votes. (~_~)
 
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