~~Haiku River~~

[Unbridled_Passion]

ribbon of death
from a snake's unlucky charm
the hoe

that snake crawled across
my foot, and I did what came
natural...I chopped

 

[My Erotic Trail]

that snake crawled across
my foot, and I did what came
natural...I chopped

the battle
in the valley of garden row
was the hoe

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

dirt under my fingernails,
sunburned skin on my tender
face, but all worth it

 

[Du Lac]

Callow raindrops dance
Riding slides of slick grass blades
tiny playground of life

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

swinging back and forth
on an old rope near the water
letting go; splash!

 

[My Erotic Trail]

Callow raindrops dance
Riding slides of slick grass blades
tiny playground of life

bows humble (~_~)

swinging back and forth
on an old rope near the water
letting go; splash!

(chuckleboned) (~_*)

 

[Du Lac]

Minute miracles
sun touched white petals breathing
Here I am alive

 

[Du Lac]

Clean aqueous air
The scent of blue dawn rising
spontaneity

 

[drown]

way down yonder in...

she had changed in our time there

sweet muddy river​

 

[sellthecookie]

philtrums wide enough
to sleep on: bed above lips,
words coated with spit

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

overspilling banks
following a new found path
the river runs through

 

[drown]

the ramshackled life:

house boy says dey's out tonight

water's runnin high

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

my tongue tied silence
construed as anger, only
wrestling with my thoughts

 

[Du Lac]

A cold wind blowing
comatose embryos float
old bones dream of spring

 

[Du Lac]

Swirling, molted sky
melancholy ocean waves
cumbersome silence

 

[My Erotic Trail]

A cold wind blowing
comatose embryos float
old bones dream of spring

I like this...

"comatose embryos float"

especially with all the pollen in the air... nice (~_*)

 

[Du Lac]

Anticipation
rain fed sullen clouds rupture
screaming green grass dance

 

[RhymeFairy]

Swirling, molted sky
melancholy ocean waves
cumbersome silence

melancholy silence
swirls the molten sky


I love your imagery Du ~

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

finally, I'm home
back to the place where I hang
my hat and feel peace

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

it's a great morning
the kids are in good spirits
time to start the day

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

the sun has now set
stars twinkle in the night sky
time to have some fun

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

a herd of moose walk
out among the Alaskan
wilderness, silent

 

[My Erotic Trail]

bubbles fly
children run
softly they collide

 

[Du Lac]

Haze dusted mountains
macerative pollution
frolicing fox pups

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

dictionary words
help me to say what I can't
find the right word for