Hi Ku Cat

[butters]

from charcoal to cornflower
I witnessed the fade
of night to day

that's beautiful!

using cornflower, you could have gone with 'witnessed the bloom of day', which has a more upbeat note to it than 'the fade of night to day' but it's the more unusual turn that lends a note of residual loss to the welcome. oh, i know what i mean. it has more layering your way, and a delicacy.

 

[painful_rapture]

from poppy black to hydrangea blue
morning blooms as if just for you



have it whichever way you like, it was more of a fade where I'm at.

 

[butters]

from poppy black to hydrangea blue
morning blooms as if just for you



have it whichever way you like, it was more of a fade where I'm at.

i'll take it your way

the blackness of charcoal and all its implications - fire, pain, destruction, what's left behind (including the visuals) - gently fading with time; the blue comes as a healing, but slowly.

 

[HarryHill]

i'll take it your way

the blackness of charcoal and all its implications - fire, pain, destruction, what's left behind (including the visuals) - gently fading with time; the blue comes as a healing, but slowly.

..
Fade in again, tight shot,
charcoal seeps in rain,
runs away like roots growing through the concrete,
soul fire extinguished, heart's fire lit
leaves no shadow in the room
and I wonder why;
for it's always been my constant companion,
call Wendy, oh god,
tell her to stich me back together,
mend what's rent and torn,
but first wash the damn thing,
there's no telling where it's been.
fast fade

 

[butters]

wendy's away with the fairies
and tinkerbell's hiding the thread
will superglue do? don't be wary
let's do it and bounce on me bed!

 

[HarryHill]

wendy's away with the fairies
and tinkerbell's hiding the thread
will superglue do? don't be wary
let's do it and bounce on me bed!

...
I heard yer neighbor say
in last nights Won-ton dream
'What you recons going on over there?
I thought I heard a scream,
the creak of straining bedsprings,
laughter most the night and day.

 

[butters]

...
I heard yer neighbor say
in last nights Won-ton dream
'What you recons going on over there?
I thought I heard a scream,
the creak of straining bedsprings,
laughter most the night and day.

*giggling*

 

[Wintermute01]

Cotton clouds fly past quickly,
Backed by an azure sky;
Coolly warm is this spring day.

 

[pelegrino]

her brains at midnight,
eyes half-closed,
legs wide open,
perfect state of been.

 

[HarryHill]

H2so4

Boiling vitriol
Virtual reagent
Dissolve

 

[butters]

Boiling vitriol
Virtual reagent
Dissolve

acid'll give you
heart burn

 

[butters]

monstrous ego
bonfire for the lonely
cold fingers warmed

 

[butters]

a scared man
builds his card-castle high
protects it from stray breezes
one stamped foot
may bring it all tumbling down

 

[Remec]

a scared man
builds his card-castle high
protects it from stray breezes
one stamped foot
may bring it all tumbling down

Tumblin'
.....tumblin'
..........tumblin'
No manner of posies is
likely to help as we
alternate between rolling
down from the well and
gently spinning,
monologue running,
from rabbithole to
wonder.

 

[butters]

been thinking a lot
about big dumb rocks

Sisyphus was a trier
i'll give him that

 

[butters]

Tumblin'
.....tumblin'
..........tumblin'
No manner of posies is
likely to help as we
alternate between rolling
down from the well and
gently spinning,
monologue running,
from rabbithole to
wonder.

the wonder of wonders
a wonder-filled hole -
sans bunnies -
fragrant and making a mind slip
from here to there and back again

> poe-sies

 

[butters]

why was the well up a hill?
strange water
tables turned

was it all just a plot?

 

[HarryHill]

why was the well up a hill?
strange water
tables turned

was is all just a plot?

is was?

 

[butters]

is was?

oops

it
not is

 

[HarryHill]

oops

it
not is

Thought you were reading Heinlein again.

 

[butters]

Thought you were reading Heinlein again.

Never underestimate the power of human stupidity.
Robert A. Heinlein

 

[HarryHill]

Never underestimate the power of human stupidity.
Robert A. Heinlein

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<case in point

 

[butters]

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<case in point

but still, i want to know - why was the well up a hill? wouldn't it make more sense to start diggin closer to the water-table?

 

[HarryHill]

but still, i want to know - why was the well up a hill? wouldn't it make more sense to start diggin closer to the water-table?

I makes more sense to drink fluoridated city water; the hell with the well.

 

[butters]

I makes more sense to drink fluoridated city water; the hell with the well.

well, well, well... you're just creeped out. you'd never make a dwarf