I Dare You to Take Your Clothes Off

ahem...a little music please?

A flash of skin
draws you in
breast once concealed
now revealed
skirt pulled slow
my juices flow
a little wiggle
makes me gigle
Spank my ass
you naughty lass!

*please note that this what happens when non-rhyming poets give into peer pressure when everyone else is standing about with their bits 'n pieces hanging out. It's very distracting. So much so, that they're simply forced to nervously sing-song their way through the whole disrobing ordeal. Apologies in advance to those on this board who are masters of rhythm & rhyme.:eek:
 
WickedEve...I'm mesmerized by your hypnotic tongue. Oh! I think you spilled a bit of ice cream...here, let me just...mmm... lick that off for you. Yum!

Truly, the main reason I return to this board is to see what your avatar will be next!:p
 
lickmyboot said:
WickedEve...I'm mesmerized by your hypnotic tongue. Oh! I think you spilled a bit of ice cream...here, let me just...mmm... lick that off for you. Yum!

Truly, the main reason I return to this board is to see what your avatar will be next!:p
I'm an AV junkie! I was thinking of changing it again today. It's hard to top those bouncing boobs I had yesterday. :D
 
LOL, I see I need to wander more and not just sit and write senseless nothings to no one in particular. So umm, how long does one need to take to write a poem? I think I'm in trouble if it's more than a few minutes or so....lol, now I'm looking to see how to delete posts...
 
PassionsEcho said:
LOL, I see I need to wander more and not just sit and write senseless nothings to no one in particular. So umm, how long does one need to take to write a poem? I think I'm in trouble if it's more than a few minutes or so....lol, now I'm looking to see how to delete posts...
You didn't write senseless nothings, so don't worry about deleting. Play and learn with us for a while, and then you may want to go back and revise some of the poems you posted.
Now it's time to get naked! Write us a poem about taking your clothes off. I'll turn the heat up so you don't freeze anything off. :D
 
Me? Get naked?
You've got to be kidding!
If you think it's my clothes
I'll be ridding!
 
~sighs~ Okay, okay...

It's time to get naked,
to have the air caress my skin,
to feel my nipples harden
and my desires tighten from within.

Should it be a slow striptease,
or rather throw caution to the wind,
which would be the most enticing,
to draw a partner in.

Should I slip my skirt down slowly,
and toss it in a heap upon the floor,
should I rip it off quickly,
in my hurry to explore?

And what should my hands do,
once every article has been shed,
would all this be a precursor
to sharing someone's bed?
 
"Naked. . ."

"Naked I came, bearing a phallus through the wood of the world."

I think that is Ferlighetti, but I can't find the source anywhere. Does anybody recognize it?

Regards, Rybka
 
Re: What rhymes. . . ?

Rybka said:
"Dick head" ? :)

Wicked's Eve

(a sonnet for the princess)

As dharmic pathways guide my habit's want
I long to train the Eve of wicked's haunt.
Compelled, her form might bend to sapphic will,
But hotly seek I lustful treasure still.

The heart which beats beneath her breasts I see
Lays locked away with fetish-flavored key.
But how it turns if one both likes the pain
To give and to receive without disdain?

Perhaps a tease would bring a fervent blush -
Between her legs, she'd feel a quickened flush.
Then I could kiss the tears of Eve away
As they flowed down her thighs where I could pray.

A kneeling worship bathes the gentle fires
Of dreams that magic brings to burning pyres.
 
Re: Re: What rhymes. . . ?

JUDO said:


Wicked's Eve

(a sonnet for the princess)

As dharmic pathways guide my habit's want
I long to train the Eve of wicked's haunt.
Compelled, her form might bend to sapphic will,
But hotly seek I lustful treasure still.

The heart which beats beneath her breasts I see
Lays locked away with fetish-flavored key.
But how it turns if one both likes the pain
To give and to receive without disdain?

Perhaps a tease would bring a fervent blush -
Between her legs, she'd feel a quickened flush.
Then I could kiss the tears of Eve away
As they flowed down her thighs where I could pray.

A kneeling worship bathes the gentle fires
Of dreams that magic brings to burning pyres.
Damn that's good!
 
Judo sweetie, you're drippin' with talent! Now go clean up that wet mess! :D
 
Lauren.Hynde said:
OMG! That is so hot! Shouldn't you put it in the Love Sonnet's thread?

Thanks, Lauren. I couldn't find words to rhyme with wicked, so I decided to write a sonnet instead - always my fallback now-a-days.

I've been thinking about writing one to you as well contrasting our mutual...ah, interests as well as ourselves.

;)
- Judo
 
WickedEve said:
Judo sweetie, you're drippin' with talent! Now go clean up that wet mess! :D

A nice cotton towel for me, but a tongue for you. Yum...

- Judo
 
JUDO said:


Thanks, Lauren. I couldn't find words to rhyme with wicked, so I decided to write a sonnet instead - always my fallback now-a-days.

I've been thinking about writing one to you as well contrasting our mutual...ah, interests as well as ourselves.

;)
- Judo
Uh... Do you mean, about both of us having dogs for pets? :p

I should let you know that I'm polishing a poem called "I Want A Girl" -- hopefully not the same you want, but I wouldn't mind sharing ;)
 
JUDO-
you never fail in making me wet, lusty, and willing. That's just what I needed. Great poem!:devil:
 
JUDO said:
C'mon...let's see it. Show me that bod you've been hiding. I'm in a mood and you can take me where ever you want.

This is a thread devoted to poetry that tells us about getting undressed. You know what I mean.

Yeah, stand up there. Put a spotlight on. Need some mood music? Fine, here ya go. Now, do it.

Take it off, take it...all off.

;)
- Judo

I know this was before my time BUT I am so loving what I am reading here.

Anyone wanna give it a go?? :devil:

Come on what'cha got to loose eh ~ ;)
 
Naked came I in from out of the deep
where dolphins swim and maybe sharks sleep
I know not what they do in nothing but skin
but I know all the sins of the skin that I'm in.

Vanity bares the smooth turn of a cheek
lust feels no shame and pride's never so meek
as to quietly hide my face and blush
no the pink in my cheeks is passion's flush

Bold lips have found those most sensitive planes
where muscle and nerve, stroked drives me insane
his fingers find that impossible place
and twist each response to intricate lace

I know joy in hearing my own reply
of love and passion when naked came I.
 
champagne1982 said:
Naked came I in from out of the deep
where dolphins swim and maybe sharks sleep
I know not what they do in nothing but skin
but I know all the sins of the skin that I'm in.

Vanity bares the smooth turn of a cheek
lust feels no shame and pride's never so meek
as to quietly hide my face and blush
no the pink in my cheeks is passion's flush

Bold lips have found those most sensitive planes
where muscle and nerve, stroked drives me insane
his fingers find that impossible place
and twist each response to intricate lace

I know joy in hearing my own reply
of love and passion when naked came I.

one can't really improve on perfection, but i have been thinking your poetry has improved since your op. :D why is it you always have to make me like rhyming poetry? :devil:

:rose:
 
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