pink_silk_glove
Literotica Guru
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You're hung up on the editing as the style. It's not, and I'm not saying that.
But you did.
My writing comes out raw and straightforward, and I bet you can find flaws in the above-mentioned story. But overall, I thiink, (and commenters agree), that it has impact. Other's writing is finely crafted. The best writing is a balance of the two. However and wherever anyone finds that balance - and that is a question of style, not objective value - the end result is all that matters.