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To an anonymous feedbacker
If you're out there, if you happen to see this.
You sent me something that suggested an alternate ending. Something about she should have sniffed her hand or something. Well, I fixed that. And incorporated your suggestion. I think it is a bit better. I also changed a couple other details, and decided to mess around with the story's continuation. So an edit is pending as well as the next part (which will likely experience innumerable revisions as time goes on, and as they all seem to do, so I hope you will be as forgiving of it as you were with the other). And if you have better ideas, I'm open to hear them.
Wish I knew who you were so I could publicly credit you with the inspiration and thank you for the encouragement to continue the tinkers. But there's something to be said for the allure of the unknown, too. So, it's beautiful.
Thanks, and take care, whoever you are, out there, somewhere.
T.
If you're out there, if you happen to see this.
You sent me something that suggested an alternate ending. Something about she should have sniffed her hand or something. Well, I fixed that. And incorporated your suggestion. I think it is a bit better. I also changed a couple other details, and decided to mess around with the story's continuation. So an edit is pending as well as the next part (which will likely experience innumerable revisions as time goes on, and as they all seem to do, so I hope you will be as forgiving of it as you were with the other). And if you have better ideas, I'm open to hear them.
Wish I knew who you were so I could publicly credit you with the inspiration and thank you for the encouragement to continue the tinkers. But there's something to be said for the allure of the unknown, too. So, it's beautiful.
Thanks, and take care, whoever you are, out there, somewhere.
T.