New chain story... Blossoming Rose.

[CharleyH]

I would suggest the following solution...have group go before lesbian, since CH really wants to write that chapter. And here is my rationale for that...for a woman like Rose, it would be plausible that she would feel more comfortable in a threesome experience prior to a lesbian one. If she is not a lesbian by nature (in fact, she was established as a rather vanilla straight girl) and hasn't been thinking about this all her life, it would be easier to try to touch a woman in a threesome, with the comfort and familiarity of a man at the same time. Afterwards, she would have the courage to try a woman solo.

I can write most anything, so really it doesn't matter whether or not I write lesbian. I'm just a wee bit confused. However, being on the side of plausibility, I would have to agree with everything you've said.

 

[damppanties]

Okay, so DN after me, I guess. I've finished writing my part but still have to edit it before posting here. PM me if you want to get yours started, DN, and I'll send you a copy.


cahab, when did you submit yours? How long before it's up? What is the exact title? tagline? Do I need to write anything before or after the story? I'd appreciate an exact copy of what you submitted.

 

[cahab]

The story was submitted as blossoming rose, chapter one. If you want to add a chapter title as well for subsequent submissions that's up to you. The tag line was:

The journals of a world-wide tour of sexual awakening.

Though it did seem a little, even as I was writing it, like the narration for kung fu.

Nobody let me know about any mistakes yet. if you spotted any please let me know, by PM if you like. It's still pending, so there is time.

I included a list of authors so far and the fact that DN was writing the next. So far that list i make:

damppanties
CharleyH
CrimsonMaiden
deliciously_naughty
Dirt Man
English Lady
Tatelou
destinie21

I don't really mind what order these come in, as long as the decision is made by friday, so that the next person can begin. It does occur to me that people who only write in one genre should take precedence in that, and that people who have a limited amount of time should be accomodated, so if you are looking from decisions from me they will be based on that, rather than prior claim. As i say, though, I don't really see what sway I have over anything.

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Sounds good...thanks for understanding guys

 

[CharleyH]

The journals of a world-wide tour of sexual awakening.

Though it did seem a little, even as I was writing it, like the narration for kung fu.

LOL - hilariously.

Thanks for the list so far Cahab. Seems to me I recall Perdita on an earlier thread. Perhaps a recruit?

Cheers!

 

[Dirt Man]

The story was submitted as blossoming rose, chapter one. If you want to add a chapter title as well for subsequent submissions that's up to you. The tag line was:

The journals of a world-wide tour of sexual awakening.

Though it did seem a little, even as I was writing it, like the narration for kung fu.

Nobody let me know about any mistakes yet. if you spotted any please let me know, by PM if you like. It's still pending, so there is time.

I included a list of authors so far and the fact that DN was writing the next. So far that list i make:

damppanties
CharleyH
CrimsonMaiden
deliciously_naughty
Dirt Man
English Lady
Tatelou
destinie21

I don't really mind what order these come in, as long as the decision is made by friday, so that the next person can begin. It does occur to me that people who only write in one genre should take precedence in that, and that people who have a limited amount of time should be accomodated, so if you are looking from decisions from me they will be based on that, rather than prior claim. As i say, though, I don't really see what sway I have over anything.

Okay great! Obviously the list is not the order in which we are writing. So what we need now is some semblance of order, or at least a tentative schedule so that we each know when our turn is. Understandably the schedule might change for cercumstances.

As Always
I Am the
Dirt Man

Edited for PS: I sent you a PM with your chapter one edited.

 

[CharleyH]

Ok, so now I'm awaiting 'D'irection, how unusual . . . when do we write and what?

T

 

[damppanties]

CharleyH, I guess you go after DN. I think she's writing group and you can grab lesbian (correct me if I'm wrong). You can ask her to send you her chapter as soon as she finishes it if you want to start yours. I've sent her mine and I'm going to put it up here now.

After CharleyH, Dirt Man or CrimsonMaiden? Speak up people.

 

[damppanties]

my chapter

Monday 19th

Dear Diary,

I don't know how to begin today. I'm in such a state… I'm just so excited, puzzled, weird – I don't know what. I need to write this to keep myself sane. Things are happening so fast. I have no idea how I'm going to write all of what happened today. And, oh my God, did something happen! Where do I start? How do I begin to write it down?

Okay. Stop.

Dye, Take a deep breath and start again. At the beginning.

Right.

Diary, the last time I talked to you was on Thursday night, well, Friday morning. I had just finished masturbating with Marie's vibrator. You know me as someone who started these entries with no great experience about things sexual. I'm not saying that I was a complete innocent, but well, let's say I was as innocent as you can get in this day and age. That was me.

The next entry and I'm playing with myself, Marie gives me a vibrator and I do myself. As if that wasn't shocking enough, what I've got to this morning really takes the cake. If this keeps going on? I can't even begin to think along those lines.

Anyway, as soon as I woke up this morning, (afternoon actually, at about 12), my mind immediately went back to what I've been thinking since the events of Friday night. I couldn't get the thought of Marie's tour out of my head. What exactly was the tour about? What were they going to do? Will they just dance or will they also…? You know, do those kind of things. I so badly wanted to experience Marie's life. (From the outside though, I wouldn't exactly do all those things she does!)

What little bit Marie told me about the tour wasn't clear enough and I was too shy to ask her more that night. These past few days, I had been trying to get myself to ask her more about it, and then think about joining her. I decided that I'd do it today. After all, she had mentioned that they take some girls with them to help out backstage, and after all the things I've been doing, I wanted to go. I'd be assured of a ring-side view of whatever they got up to.

And then it would solve all of my problems too. I could pick up some money. I would get to stay here. I would not have to go back home to my parents, and *shudder* Kevin.

So with my mind made up, I marched quickly to her room before I could lose my nerve. Maybe my mind was too preoccupied with my problems, because I didn't even think about knocking. You'd think I'd have learned better by now, being used to Marie and her guys, but…

Anyway, I simply pushed open the door and my eyes fell upon Marie and Bruno (I think his name is Bruno - that bouncer guy from where she does her dances). Marie was asleep, well, at least her eyes were closed and Bruno, his hand was on Marie's breast, which was peeking out from under the sheet. He was all naked. and my eyes were attracted to his… penis. It was somewhat hard, and long.

Now, I'm no innocent when it comes to views of naked men, Kevin had once… but, can they be that big? What troubles me a little, even now, was the fact that I could not get my eyes off him; and then, right before my eyes, he got harder… and bigger!

Under his ministrations, Marie began to stir and Thank God she did, for that's what made me snap out of the trance and get out from that place before they saw me. I would have died if they had seen me!

I retreated as silently as I could and closed the door. That stupid door clicked so loudly as I closed it that I thought they hard surely heard me. I needed to make sure so I bent and peeked in through the keyhole and… damn! The view. The position and level of the keyhole was such that I could see everything clearly. And I mean everything.

Bruno was leaning half over Marie, and the sheet that had been covering her was now almost off her. I could see her golden legs merging into a gently rounded stomach and then into the two peaks of her breasts with pink nipples on top and then her chin. Her eyes were still closed and there was a pretty frown on her brow.

I'm rambling now but what I noticed then was that she looked very desirable. I wonder why I had never seen Marie in quite that way before?

What I could see of Bruno was even more shocking. Shocking to me, at least. He was over Marie and his, um, penis - God! I need to write that word without flinching. Well, his penis was nestled between her legs. And I mean, like, totally touching. His head was nuzzling into her… shoulder, I think, or somewhere there. I could see one of his hands on her breast, kneading the smooth flesh in a rhythmic motion.

I can't tell you what the scene did to me. It was like my insides melted and I had this urge to do something. I had not felt this way before, while playing with myself, like I felt this morning while seeing Marie and Bruno doing it. I could feel myself getting wet down there and to my astonishment, I actually wanted to. I liked the feelings too much.

I tentatively slipped one hand into my pajama bottoms. Slowly. This was a first. I was bent from the waist down while peeping in, and as my hand reached my mound, I hesitated. I think that was the only time I did, because after that I was too caught up in everything.

Inside, Bruno's hand slipped down from Marie's breast, down to her stomach and then between her legs - which he parted with his knee. I could see Marie's centre clearly when Bruno's hand dipped into her casually, I was so shocked that I could not believe my eyes for a few seconds.

Though my mind froze, the way that sight affected my body was something different entirely. I could feel my juices flowing out of me. I moved my hand to cup myself, the tips of my fingers feeling the wetness as I held on to the doorknob with my other hand. I swear I would have fell down had I not had that support.

Bruno's hands were gently stroking Marie, up and down. I imitated his actions with my own hand, against my own body. I think my brain had not registered the fact that I was touching myself there; otherwise I'm sure I'd have been a little repelled or something. Now when I think about it, I get a kind of shuddery feeling, but then, it was like my whole being was my hand between my legs.

Then it looked like Marie started to finally wake up and she tried pulling Bruno on top of her, but Bruno being Bruno and not something which could be pulled up, didn't budge and inch. Instead, he moved further away to give himself space to suck at her nipple. I guess Marie liked that. She moaned loudly and moved in a sinuous motion, which caused her stomach to get into a perfect concave and her spine to arch in a curve which pushed her breast up towards Bruno. Her hands fumbled in his hair; she tried pulling him closer to her breast – as if it was possible.

Bruno's hand, which was wandering all over Marie now came to rest on her other breast as he started pinching and pulling her nipple. His head was moving from side to side on her breast and I could only wonder what he was doing to her nipple with his mouth. Marie was writhing with wild abandon. (I am not exactly sure whether it was for real or if it was a put on for Bruno's benefit).

Meanwhile I was standing outside with my hands between my legs, my juices running down my legs. I didn't think it was possible to get so slippery down there. My pajamas were so wet there that if somebody else had seen me, they would have thought that I had peed or something. And you know what the amazing thing was? I was enjoying every minute of it. No shame. No ickiness. Just plain lust. Yes, that was what it was. Lust.

The next thing I see, Bruno climbs up on top of Marie and from then on I could only see their, well, privates, as the rest of Marie was shielded by Bruno's back. Their genitals were at the centre, framed by legs and hips on all sides and it was such a direct view from where I was standing that it was like they were actually putting on a show for me. Marie had her legs well spread and Bruno balanced himself between her and then holding his penis in his hand, rubbed it up and down her slit. Marie was glisteningly wet there and her wetness transferred itself to Bruno's penis. He guided it to her opening and pushed himself in.

One finger of my hand slipped into my dripping slit as Bruno was rubbing her there and now when he entered her, I entered myself too. The sensation was… I couldn't describe it if I tried. My eyes trained on Bruno's penis going in and out of Marie and my own finger matching his every thrust. I have no idea how I did that, but it was electric. My finger moved in and out of me, following Bruno's penis as he started to increase the tempo bit by bit.

My insides were pure jelly by then and I was staring into the keyhole with such intensity, my forehead against the metal doorknob. My brain zoomed in to Bruno's penis going in and out of Marie, blocking everything else out. I had never seen a porno movie in my life, but now it looked like I was seeing a huge, blown up, live version on a personal home theatre. Marie's lips, those lips, went in each time Bruno pushed in and then moved back out when he withdrew.

Marie was moaning unintelligible things and her pitch was continuously rising as the pace got faster and faster. Bruno's grunts were clearly audible too and so were the squishy noises as he moved in and out of her… or was that the noise of my own finger plunging into my sodden centre? I couldn't be sure.

"Oh, oh, OH MY GOD!" Marie cried out and then made a long nasal, grunting sound which ended on a sigh.

I saw her hips slowing down with rearing up to meet Bruno but he was still building up the speed with which he thrust into her. Any moment, any moment he would… and just when I felt my orgasm flow over me, Bruno's knees dug into the mattress and his buttocks clenched into tight buns. With an audibly expelled breath, he thrust one last time into Marie and then slowly collapsed on top of her. He twitched once and then lay still.

I felt my knees give away and I sank down on to the cold floor, my legs folded under me. When I came to my senses, my hand was still holding the doorknob and I was leaning against the door. I quickly got up, not good for them to find me there, and walked on wobbly legs into my room and into the bathroom. There I peeled off my soggy pajamas and had a long shower.

Today, all day, I've been continuously horny and so conscious of myself there. I mean, it's like my mind is centred on that one place in my whole body. It's so sensitive. When I walk, move, sit, stand, even when I shift a little, I can feel myself down there. Is this usual?

I even played with myself and with Marie's vibrator. (I wonder why I can't think of it as mine even though she gave it to me). That was a few minutes ago and right now I'm still horny. It seems like the flood gates, once opened, will not close. I can't help thinking about that creep Kevin. Frigid, huh? I'd like to show him a few things next time he meets me just to see the look on his face.

And you know what? I completely forgot to ask Marie whether I could go on the tour with her. When I came out of my room after the shower, Bruno was there. Marie introduced me to him. (Yes, confirmed, his name is Bruno, lol) and I completely clammed up. I couldn't speak two sentences if my life had depended on it. My voice insisted on coming out in a pathetic squeak when I tried a 'hello' for god's sake! Well, yes, I know that they didn't know I'd been watching them while they were, um, doing it, but still.

Anyway, I couldn't ask Marie while that guy Bruno was still there and then after they finished breakfast, or rather lunch; Marie disappeared with him and hasn't returned yet. Just as well I think as I'm not sure I'd have been able to speak to her. I needed time to myself to reflect upon what has happened, and writing all this down has helped. A real lot.

Thanks Diary.

~~~~~

I'd appreciate any feedback or pointers on typos and whatever anyone would like tell me regarding the chapter.

 

[CharleyH]

Dampy

Sounds good to me. Will read yours and get back in a couple hours. Still haven't had enough caffeine to concentrate completely!

 

[Guest]

CharleyH, I guess you go after DN. I think she's writing group and you can grab lesbian (correct me if I'm wrong).

DN is writing group? I hope the group is one that our character is watching and not participating. That would be kind of a huge leap.

I need a point cleared up a bit... is Diana a virgin or has she had sex with Kevin but didn't enjoy it?

Depending on the answer, I could do first time or erotic coupling with Diana having a sexual experience (with a guy, since lesbian will be done prior).

CM

 

[CharleyH]

DN is writing group? I hope the group is one that our character is watching and not participating. That would be kind of a huge leap.

I need a point cleared up a bit... is Diana a virgin or has she had sex with Kevin but didn't enjoy it?

Depending on the answer, I could do first time or erotic coupling with Diana having a sexual experience (with a guy, since lesbian will be done prior).

CM

CM

I don't know if this helps but . . .

From Cahab's chapter 1, Diana has at least tried, unsuccessfully to give Kevin a BJ. It is my understanding that she is naive, but not a virgin. In chapter 2, Diana is a masturbating voyeur, and penetrates self with fingers. I understood that DN's chapter 3 was a threesome (semantics: group to me at least, always means more than 3) where Diana doesn't get directly involved in lesbian action.

This is what I understand anyhow.

Charley

 

[damppanties]

I'm going to submit my chapter after a final edit tomorrow. CharleyH has sent me a great edited version of the thing and I'm going to make some final changes and submit. Is that okay with everyone or is there something I should change?

 

[Guest]

Sounds fine to me Dampy.

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Yes, my "group" scenario will be a threesome. I feel as though it's feasible for her to get involved with Bruno (since she's essentially crushing on him at the moment) and he'll get her to kiss, maybe touch her roomate's breats but not much else. There will definitely be alcohol involved. I'll make sure it sets the stage for her to have an encounter with her roommate or another dancer.

 

[CharleyH]

DN,

sounds good to me, and I appreciate the set up. I would be happy to do the same for the person writing after me - lol - if I knew who that was, and what sexy scene they have up their sleeves?

Since there is focus on Marie for the first few chapters, I'm leaning toward taking the lesbian action to another dancer. Hahah - I like variety

Cheers
Charley

 

[Guest]

Well, I don't mind going after you, Charley, if everyone thinks that Diana will be ready for an encounter with a man.

 

[cahab]

Insistence

Sorry to be a stickler on this, but can I remind everyone of one of the essentials for this chain. This is supposed to be happening real time; the entry you write must be written at some point within your week, from the characters point of view as well as yours. Otherwise there is little point in continuing thisw as a journal. The original concept was to follow through the year; writing an easter entry for easter week, and so on, and thereby making the story contest eligible for event prizes.

That means that unless the previous entry finished at midnight sunday, you can't immediately follow on. We would have just too much catching up to do. You can have consecutive days, but they would have to be both written by you.

Sorry if this banjaxes you, but this is my foot, and I'm putting it down. If you want to write the chain in a different way then that's fine, but it isn't the one I started.

 

[Guest]

Re: Insistence

The original concept was to follow through the year; writing an easter entry for easter week, and so on, and thereby making the story contest eligible for event prizes.

That means that unless the previous entry finished at midnight sunday, you can't immediately follow on. We would have just too much catching up to do. You can have consecutive days, but they would have to be both written by you.

Are you trying to say that you intended to have a story every week up until the end of the year? Or am I just not understanding you correctly?

I don't understand what you meant by that second paragraph up there.

Cahab, maybe you need to post exactly the way you intended for this chain to go, because I, for one, am now totally confused.


CM

 

[cahab]

Re: Re: Insistence

Are you trying to say that you intended to have a story every week up until the end of the year?

Er, yes. Thought I'd made that clear before.

Don't worry, that doesn't mean you personally have to hang on in here week after week. Just pop in when you feel like it. That's why the stories should be self-contained as much as possible; it's unlikely anyone will read all 40- odd at one sitting, if at all. It's also why we ought to take this slow, real slow.

 

[Dirt Man]

I'd appreciate any feedback or pointers on typos and whatever anyone would like tell me regarding the chapter.

Only caught one "and" where a "an" should have gone. Other than that it looked okay to me.

As Always
I Am the
Dirt Man

PS: I would really appreciate it if each author put the link to their chapter here once it is posted. Thanks.

 

[damppanties]

Re: Insistence

Sorry to be a stickler on this, but can I remind everyone of one of the essentials for this chain. This is supposed to be happening real time; the entry you write must be written at some point within your week, from the characters point of view as well as yours. Otherwise there is little point in continuing thisw as a journal. The original concept was to follow through the year; writing an easter entry for easter week, and so on, and thereby making the story contest eligible for event prizes.

That means that unless the previous entry finished at midnight sunday, you can't immediately follow on. We would have just too much catching up to do. You can have consecutive days, but they would have to be both written by you.

Sorry if this banjaxes you, but this is my foot, and I'm putting it down. If you want to write the chain in a different way then that's fine, but it isn't the one I started.

So this means that everyone would have to write a week's diary entries? Or write more than one entry at least? Or leave it at a Sunday to facilitate the next person in line?

In this case, mine has to start on a Sunday? That leaves two days between yours and mine and what I wrote cannot just happen after two days of nothing. At least it doesn't seem very likely to me.

My understanding of this chain story was that we had a handful of authors who would write maybe 3 or 4 months of Diana's life as she goes on this tour. I wasn't thinking about a year's tour.

Okay... so where does this leave my chapter now?

P.S. Thanks DM.

 

[Dirt Man]

Re: Re: Insistence

So this means that everyone would have to write a week's diary entries? Or write more than one entry at least? Or leave it at a Sunday to facilitate the next person in line?

In this case, mine has to start on a Sunday? That leaves two days between yours and mine and what I wrote cannot just happen after two days of nothing. At least it doesn't seem very likely to me.

My understanding of this chain story was that we had a handful of authors who would write maybe 3 or 4 months of Diana's life as she goes on this tour. I wasn't thinking about a year's tour.

Okay... so where does this leave my chapter now?

P.S. Thanks DM.

You're welcome. Actually, I think your entry works out fine too. Just change the date to Sunday Morning instead of Friday. Most strippers sleep in on Sundays anyways so it will still work for you.

As Always
I Am the
Dirt Man

 

[damppanties]

Re: Re: Re: Insistence

You're welcome. Actually, I think your entry works out fine too. Just change the date to Sunday Morning instead of Friday. Most strippers sleep in on Sundays anyways so it will still work for you.

As Always
I Am the
Dirt Man

Okay... I change my entry to Sunday (not very happily,cos it isn't very believable to me, but it's okay if that's the way it's supposed to be), so that means DN, who's after me, will be writing after a week's gap? Is she okay with that?

 

[Dirt Man]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Insistence

Okay... I change my entry to Sunday (not very happily,cos it isn't very believable to me, but it's okay if that's the way it's supposed to be), so that means DN, who's after me, will be writing after a week's gap? Is she okay with that?

If you've ever done journal entries you know that often times you don't enter any information until you have a whole weeks worth of information to put into it as very little out of the ordinary is taking place, or you just don't have the time to fool with it. So I'd say that she'll be fine depending on how she approaches it.

As Always
I Am the
Dirt Man