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a Muslim poetess maketh waves in NPs: her ' Bisexual Muslim boys' , Hijaab Sluts and Muslim gal into Big White Dick are sensational and shd be made must reading for ISIS jihadis and suicide bombers!!!!
 
Helping Hand by erectus123 brings the poem full circle, it's a bit unsettling that line 5 has no rhyme which interrupts what is otherwise a smooth read.
 
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this moment, soft and tender
is when the whip will fly
to spank her naked splendor
of ass cheeks lifted high------ this divine 4-line verse lifted Jenaus's New Poem " of edging , whips and cum..." into the BDSM Hall of Fame!!!!!
 
nice!

Ink and Pen by susansnow

Every now and then I get it, I think

Yes, a very nice poem.

It does have some (I counted three) blemishes, I hope that they will get fixed. The second sentence ends, and the third starts, with:

...through her. Complicated truths...
Instead of "her" and "Complicated", there should be poetry. The same goes later on with word "permanence".
 
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