New Poem Recommendations

[Ashesh9]

Nothing Poetic
bywhowrotethisshit©


There’s nothing poetic about asking you to fuck my ass.
But there is something
in the way your fingers burry into the fat of my cheeks.
The way your breath catches when you spread me apart.
How you kiss my shoulder blade while I stretch and whimper
This BDSM poem in NP stirs up SM juices in Sadistic Hearts'n Minds!!!

 

[HarryHill]

I recommend https://www.literotica.com/p/the-penis-ler because it is the only poem today but every day there's plenty of the same.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Nov 23 - something like 25 submissions today, some of it quite interesting, from Haiku to found notes. Go see for yourself.

 

[ramdev]

Thanks for sharing.I found a lot of interesting information here. A really good post, very thankful and hopeful that you will write many more posts like this one.Great websites!

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

No new poems since the 6th. Just as the Recommendation Elves get geared up again! I will check again tomorrow.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Thirteen poems submitted today, I only just now got a chance to read them all.

First up. our old friend Oggbashan , with a group of interesting poems, some forms, well done but that I can't label.
Stay tuned for more.....it's suppertime here.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Next a little mother/son incest while Dad's off golfing by OedipalLustGuru. A short piece but makes its point.

Now Amelia_Rose lets us know what really happens on those sleep-overs when your asleep.

Daddysmichel describes the pleasure she gets from One Night of BDSM

 

[oggbashan]

Thirteen poems submitted today, I only just now got a chance to read them all.

First up. our old friend Oggbashan , with a group of interesting poems, some forms, well done but that I can't label.
Stay tuned for more.....it's suppertime here.

Thank you. The last two are Triolets.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

I couldn't finish Tuesdays collection, there are some interesting efforts here.

Today we have two……………..new member cornerstop mystified me with Blue Heron , a sad little piece of reminiscence and regret, but why the heron?

Then Sex in the woods - or not by WLOral.

 

[Piscator]

A little green house in Alaska and Birds and Bees and You and Me by by whowrotethisshit. Fun with heart.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

words-to-a-wounded-healer by annaswirls is wise and wonderful, food for thought and food for the soul. A must-read IMHO.

 

[AlwaysHungry]

words-to-a-wounded-healer by annaswirls is wise and wonderful, food for thought and food for the soul. A must-read IMHO.

Yes, that is a pretty remarkable poem.

 

[AlwaysHungry]

I like this one: https://literotica.com/p/evening-5

 

[AlwaysHungry]

She's on a roll: https://literotica.com/p/the-beekeeper-1

 

[AlwaysHungry]

And another: https://literotica.com/p/strawberries-9

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

There are several poems worth a mention today but i have to do it later, no time right now.

 

[Piscator]

River Maya's Portraits

Elora Butler's Love Well Lost

 

[AlwaysHungry]

Both links go to the same poem.

 

[Piscator]

Both links go to the same poem.

sorry about that

Elora Butler's Love Well Lost

 

[Piscator]

Love and Lakes, a winning combination. Lake Michigan by LittleRedWildflower

 

[todski28]

Love and Lakes, a winning combination. Lake Michigan by LittleRedWildflower

I second this and recommend it thoroughly my comment on the write is listed below

by todski28
07/01/20
Magic

I do agree with levitating bed on a stanza flip for more impact
However the imagery in this is so evocative you lose yourself in the words
I had a small hiccup on the warm womb section, only because lakes that size are normally cold, but the alliteration of the wording fits so well within the piece I couldn’t suggest any changes.

The lingering effect of the imagery and you clever use of sound structures in smatterings throughout lift this above the normal everyday dross

Take the scene setting in the first line

Your consonants structures have the harsh ar sound repeated three times in three words the “here” softening it, But when spoken aloud they sing together.

Then you have a sibilances that runs throughout

You repeat the words

“Stars” twice and “water” three times in the first stanza normally a deathknell for me because the same repeated words tend to create a jarring effect, like an echo that niggles away in the back ground and breaks my immersion in the write.

With this piece I didn’t even notice until I started looking into why I enjoyed this write so much. Takes craft and a good ear to pull that off in my opinion (which by the way, isn’t worth a lot)

But this is a structural tour de force in sounds and the erotica is right where it should be, floating in the inferences of two people sharing a moment, written in such a way that the reader can be either narrator or secondary protagonist.

This is recommended in the literotica poetry forum

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=92539815#post92539815

 

[todski28]

https://www.literotica.com/p/haiku-no-seasonal-nor-cut-word

tzara's littlie amusing yet still erotic "haiku" is up, please read and comment

 

[Piscator]

Thanks tod - your recommendation send me into tazra's back catalogue and
Why WE Don't is certainly worth a visit or revisit if you now the catalogue.

 

[todski28]

Thanks tod - your recommendation send me into tazra's back catalogue and
Why WE Don't is certainly worth a visit or revisit if you now the catalogue.

Tzara has always been one of the poets on here I admired, I doubt I'll ever reach the level of polish he seems to make look effortless in almost all the work he posts and this piece is no exception, I've read it before, but didn't really know how to say what I thought of it, just read it left a five and went on my way, because its whole narration is evocative and quite loving. thanks for the bump from the past piscator was a good read to start the day

 

[todski28]

https://literotica.com/p/lit-a-match-on-your-zipper


Calli sets the night on fire with this one