New Poem Recommendations

[todski28]

well, this is pretty good, don't take my word for it, read it.

http://www.literotica.com/p/animal-feed

 

[greenmountaineer]

theoncomingstorms "BaNANa" is a fun read, very well done IMO.

 

[todski28]

two recommendations from me today, wether they are worth reading for you well, go read them and find out

http://www.literotica.com/p/being-odd

oddly prosaic this piece has some good thoughts on well, being odd, like poets we are an odd bunch,

http://www.literotica.com/p/days-of-gold-turned-to-coal

waking down flaunts his provocative abilities in this one and points a finger at the world in ringing truths.

 

[todski28]

http://www.literotica.com/p/gaga-and-strauss

haha a wonderful romp through history, stopping at guess where?

 

[greenmountaineer]

Stones by todski28's a good read.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

This by susansnow is my recommendation.

 

[greenmountaineer]

"Relief #2" by demure is disturbing and powerful, and as most of her poems are, so well written.

 

[Neonurotic]

oneiria's Night Wings is awesome. Thought you'd all like to know.

 

[twelveoone]

Very Strong Recommend
on this writer:
LesbianMuses

Seduced by Soulful Silence

ok the title, I see soulful, in my mind Soulful generally means aweful
some of the lines...that close

But, very very well done, this is an experienced writer

I kissed the winter from her lips

I can hardly wait for B to show up and question my judgement, except this looks like B might enjoy it, or maybe it is B

I recommend and it is not experimental, nor vers libre

 

[HarryHill]

Electric Toothbrush by PhillyPen if only for the first two lines

 

[Angeline]

11/23/13

Harry's Alternate Libation is really good. You should read it.

 

[twelveoone]

Harry's Alternate Libation is really good. You should read it.

Very strong second on this

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Harry's Alternate Libation is really good. You should read it.

Very strong second on this

I'll drink to that/those.

 

[HarryHill]

butters is back no-title but who needs one after reading?
Tristess2 Walter and the Naiad You may need to take a break after reading this one.

 

[twelveoone]

OK I feel a little guilty, due to a serial dump (don't do that folks) I did not even bother to skim most of them.
However, these two, I know familiar NAME SYNDROME.

This is a rather sophisticated trick, the whole poem screams for a cliche and he never directly uses it, it is there it every form but.

Final Hearing

a bad line?
on a king size bed as cold as ice
outside of context cold as ice is a cliche, however, context is king
speaking there of...
it is by greenmountaineer

Disclaimer: I like this person, really
decompression's a wonderful thing
bybutters
I also like most of the poem, most so I am attempting to be objective

 

[twelveoone]

This is a rather sophisticated trick, the whole poem screams for a cliche and he never directly uses it, it is there it every form but.

Final Hearing

a bad line?
on a king size bed as cold as ice
outside of context cold as ice is a cliche, however, context is king
speaking there of...
it is by greenmountaineer

I am going to make this obvious, anything said twice is important, Shakespeare does it often with Anglo-Saxon and Latinante, poetry is often lies what is not said, what is not said has to be unlocked, rarely are you going to see an incidence like this cold as ice is the key, the whole poem screams Its on the rocks which in itself would be a rather cheap ploy, but greenmountaineer never uses that phrase. Poetry is an associative process, an example here par par excellence.

Of course the audience has to be right, but right now, I just showed you some shit you never thought of.

 

[joynalvincent]

new poem

Whats new in today poem.

 

[twelveoone]

Whats new in today poem.

go look

desecration
by bybogusagain

could be conscrewed as humourous

Golbahar Used to Live in Kabulhttp://www.literotica.com/p/golbahar-used-to-live-in-kabul
bygreenmountaineer©
I think not so funny

Both, ahem, look starved for comments, the few that they have do not appear to be shredded


An Old Man's Tale
byloveking©

appears to be humourous
I feel my cum, it's starting to boil
And know this dream will very soon spoil.

My spunk erupts, my cock stiff like bone
Reality strikes, I'm old and alone.
does rhyme, perhaps someone can check the metre, but it does appear to be your competition UYS, but I won't worry much.

does not appear to be shredded
I recommend the first two, there are two others including a rather touching tribute to a girl's father.

New Poems is what you make it if you comment, if you don't, go vomit on yourself.

 

[todski28]

thinkingallowed by Butters

read, comment, amazing!

 

[Angeline]

12-15-13

susansnow continues to rock with her poetry. Read Gag, just one of today's offerings from her.

 

[Neonurotic]

There are a few good poems to checkout, particularly Scripts by DawnJ and the clever prospector by butters. Go see and see if you agree.

 

[greenmountaineer]

koba, demure, and todski light up the New Poems page today; worth the visit.

 

[butters]

demure's Nairobi Duet. read it!
edit: i did leave a comment on demure's piece plus a notification i'd recommended it here but it's gone!

harry's Archery Results of course - love's a fairground ride at times and the arrows a source of surprise and amusement

 

[Angeline]

12-18-13

Do not miss greenmountaineer's Candy Apple Red. It's really good.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Butters' "Sneaky Cupid" caught my eye - well worth reading.