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Getting Dirty with Daddy

Emily is 19 years old and determined to seduce her father. But no matter what she tries, he acts uninterested in her sexually. Until one night, Emily snoops on his porn habits. Turns out, her daddy has a wet-and-messy fetish. Looks like Emily will be Getting Dirty with Daddy.
 
Mickey Spillane Tribute

My entry in the Mickey Spillane Tribute has been published.

https://www.literotica.com/s/when-its-safe-to-die

It's a forties noir mystery that runs with many classic tropes and turns a few on their head. It won't be to everyone's taste, but this writer don't give a damn.

"How you feelin' there, Dan? All this sex, it's kinda turning me on."

"You and me both, Miss Jones. Maybe we should split up, case our own joints. Swap notes later, you know?"

"You got a taste for some ass, Dan?"

"Maybe I do, Ma'am."

"You're full of surprises. But look, there's Miss Quinn. Do you think I'm her type?"

I checked out Ruby in her clinging dress, such a deep blue it was nearly midnight black. Her breasts were half exposed in a deep vee, going damn near down to her navel, with one thigh revealed right up high. I glanced across at Maven, who was dressed like a man with her hair cut short, slicked back. She didn't look much like the studio's glamour shots, not any more, but she sure was stunning.

"I'd say, looking at her, that she might quite fancy a femme," I replied.

"Good," said Ruby. "I feel like a woman tonight."

She reached her mouth up to mine and kissed me. At the same time her hand dropped to my swelling prick. "But I'm going home with you tonight. You do know what a home is, don't you, Dan?"

She smiled at me, and I kissed her again. The look in her eyes could lose me.
 
Hello everyone!

I've posted my very first erotic story here on Literotica a few days ago, and I am as eager as I am excited to see its reception (and to virtually meet you all). It's an F/f foot fetish story in which a proud professor spirals into the control of her bossy assistant: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-history-lesson-1

Please don't refrain from commenting, sending me a PM, or checking out my bio to find out more about what I plan to write!
 
Hello everyone!

I've posted my very first erotic story here on Literotica a few days ago, and I am as eager as I am excited to see its reception (and to virtually meet you all). It's an F/f foot fetish story in which a proud professor spirals into the control of her bossy assistant: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-history-lesson-1

Please don't refrain from commenting, sending me a PM, or checking out my bio to find out more about what I plan to write!

1. You need to enable PMs in order to receive them, and I think you haven't yet.
2. If you want feedback, start a thread in here.
3. Clearly you can write well.
4. I'm a bit puzzled that you start in present tense and then start writing in past tense about later developments.
 
SITTING IN AT BLACKJACK (in color)

This submission is published today, 09 22 2021, in 'Illustrated Poetry'. I hope you view and enjoy it!



This is the 'teaser' from my pending submission in 'Illustrated Poetry'. The submission consolidates and expands on my strip blackjack illustrated poems, telling the story of a couple's strip blackjack gangbang fantasy coming to life. It's told in limericks, with the pending story containing new and updated limericks and illustrations.

TEASER:

I just wanted some innocent fun
So I said I’d play ‘strip twenty-one’,
Now I’m losing my shirt
Not to mention my skirt,
And I might have to screw everyone!



Here are links to new and/or upgraded illustrations for the pending submission:


https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=94206190#post94206190

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=94206341#post94206341
 
1. You need to enable PMs in order to receive them, and I think you haven't yet.
2. If you want feedback, start a thread in here.
3. Clearly you can write well.
4. I'm a bit puzzled that you start in present tense and then start writing in past tense about later developments.


Thanks for your comments! TBH I agree, the transition between present narration and end-story summary could have been handled better. Definitely something I should incorporate for future works.

Thanks for your heads-up regarding the forum too, I'm new here and still trying to get my bearings :D strangely enough, I thought I had PMs enabled? I'll go see if I can figure it out.

Thanks again!
 
My two new 'book matched' stories have posted

:) Please enjoy these short works - humor and some intrigue are involved.

My works are here:
https://www.literotica.com/my/#/works/stories/published

MY NEWEST book matched stories are listed below:

“Life is Like a Bucket of Shit – Not a Box of Chocolates”

A chance encounter with a mysterious woman, nicknamed ‘The Fixer,’ who enters Danny’s life and turns the tables on Rita, his gold-digging Ex-spouse! It’s a humous take on divorce. Heterosexual scenes of course!

https://www.literotica.com/s/life-is-like-shit-not-chocolate

• 9,999 Words, 20 MS Word pages, 03 Lit pages
• Humor/Satire
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“The Rise of the Fixer”

Extends the ‘The Fixer’ POV, in “Life is Like Shit … Not Chocolate.’ Jackie Wilson explains her chance encounter with Danny. We learn she is a sword wielding, 103 pound, Amer-Asian. She is pleasing on the eyes and is a lit stick of dynamite assigned to ‘fix fucked up situations.’ She works outside of the legal systems. Sex scenes with Danny from Jackie’s perspective.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-rise-of-the-fixer

• 4,200 Words
• Erotic Couplings, 09 MS Word pages, 02 Lit pages
 
Messy Halloween Mixup

It started as a simple Halloween party. Then, my wife ended up wearing a schoolgirl uniform similar to the one worn by my neighbor's wife. Mud wrestling ensued, which led to accidental cuckolding. It was all a Messy Halloween Mixup.
 
The Saga of Tallia the Unwilling

BEHOLD! I, Thutmose-Neferkare, royal scribe, chief librarian and high priest of the divine Ra bid thee attend! I have commanded my sub-priests to presently translate a heretofore unknown but most extraordinary and epic legendarium – “The Saga of Tallia the Unwilling.” It hath action and violence! It hath magic and monsters! It hath romance and, yay, bits most naughty! I hath read the first twelve scrolls and found them, lo, most hot.

But know this! Go not to the Temple of Ra and seek out this translation if thou be of weak constitution or most narrow degeneracy. Within this Saga you shall find tales so lustful, so lurid, so lascivious – I fear for the sensibilities of the common pervert. Here be prose presenting a panoply of pansexual polymorphic perversities so profoundly prurient that proper, prim persons will be patently petrified by their profane peculiarities.

Three scrolls are already available for thy perusal with a fourth submitted for my approval this very day. A new chapter shall come at thee weekly or my sub-priests, yay, they will taste the lash.

Tarry not! The path is hither: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-saga-of-tallia-the-unwilling

Yay, let it be written! Yay, let it be done!
 
Romance story

This is my first time posting any story anywhere, but I love this experience.

I started one series but I didn't like where it was going. So started over again.

My new series is here:
https://www.literotica.com/s/best-friend-and-lover-ch-01

The story is a romance spread out over 12 chapters. :heart:
Please read and enjoy. If you can, give some feedback. I want to know what I can improve.
 
My stories aren't new per se but I hadn't promoted them around the site except under my signature. I posted to "Feedback" earlier but now am seeing this thread which I think is what I was looking for. I hope you enjoy.

Lisa and Alan...and Gabriel

A grad student named Lisa sees her roommate, and herself, in a new light.


Lisa's Houseguest

The girlfriend of Lisa's roommate stirs up mutual jealousy.
 
The begining of another tale

Heya, Red here. Been reading on here for awhile, but after a wonderful conversation with Shakna, the author of Toofy, got inspired to write some stuff of my own to share.

Led to the begining of Mageslayer https://www.literotica.com/s/mageslayer-ch-01 which is a fantasy story inspired by (unsurprisingly) Toofy as well as Myka's tail from the site, and plenty of other things, including some old dnd games.

It's pretty story rich, and while not super light on the erotic, I do try to put plot and character first. Starring a neko named Lori who born a noble, caused the destruction of her family from her non human qualities, and was spared from a similar fate only due to a ruthless spy master who recognized she could be a useful tool. As you'll read in the first chapter though, she doesn't plan on living her life as a tool.
 
Social Studies with Mrs. Karen

I've been reading erotica on sites like this for over 20 years, but this is my first time posting a story online. That said, I have been writing Adult Visual Novels (aka. Adult Interactive Fiction, or "Porn Games") for three years now, so I'm not a complete novice.

https://www.literotica.com/s/social-studies-with-mrs-karen-ch-01

"Social Studies with Mrs.Karen" started in 2018 as a side-story for a much larger project called "Early Retirement". A few weeks ago I decided to rewrite that story as a stand alone story. Mrs.Karen is a professor at Andrew Xavier Cross 2-Year College - a sort of college prep for students who either excelled and are improving their chances of getting into an Ivy League OR failed miserably in their education and need a stepping stone to make it into a real college or university.

Andrew Xavier Cross 2-Year College has some very interesting rules. In particular, public nudity and corporal punishment are acceptable methods of discipline - at least for female students.

"Social Studies with Mrs.Karen" is a short story divided into 4 chapters. In chapter 1, "Mrs.Karen" (female professors are addressed by their first names) decides to punish a male student by spanking his bare ass in front of the class. Chapters 2, 3, and 4 (including epilogue) focus on Mrs.Karen's punishment - in class and by her students - for punishing a male student "inappropriately."

As you might suspect, this is the first of many stories I plan to release taking place at Andrew Xavier Cross 2-Year College. I am currently working on another submission for Literotica focusing on a sociology professor who loses control of her "human sexuality" course.
 
Me and AwkwardMD's first collaborative story is out! Everyone come see.

Grumpy Old Ladies

It's a long lesbian enemies-to-lovers story. I dare to say it doesn't feel as long as it is once you're reading it, but you can be the judge of that. Just be warned that it isn't a quick read.
 
"Two Bi Two, Ch. 01-02"

Published today in Group Sex are the first two chapters of “Two Bi Two,” the story of a young urban couple and a mature suburban couple who become a foursome and expand their sexual horizons.

https://www.literotica.com/s/two-bi-two-ch-01-02

In this installment, set in modern-day America, the couples meet, and explore their attraction, going as far as spousal sex in the same room. As told by Sherman, a young black man, the flirtation by him and his white wife, Kristi, could go beyond swapping and group fun. They’re both bisexual, but don’t yet know all of the interests of Garth and Brenda, both white and apparently straight. The 14-chapter story is completely written and is to be published in seven segments, one every three days. Before the story is finished, in addition to straight, interracial, and oral sex, there could be anal, lesbian, gay male, and rough sex, all of it consensual.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5116173&page=submissions
 
I left a comment on your story. To me, the age difference between the couples is a nice twist. I may steal that idea for one of my future stories. It's refreshing to me, that your couples didn't immediately start "coupling" after the charity golf event. Slow burn. For anyone who's experienced the slow burn with a partner, it can be maddening but builds the intensity. I can only imagine what effect it has on a foursome.
 
The Saga of Tallia the Unwilling

BEHOLD! ! I, Thutmose-Neferkare, royal scribe, chief librarian and high priest of the divine Ra wouldst have it known that now six scrolls have been translated by the priesthood and are available for your pleonectic and perverse perusal presently. That is nigh 65,000 words of, lo, hot sex, hot action and fantastical gender fluid fun!

Beginnest thy journey HERE and learn of the doings of Tallia, a cursed Amazonian warrior, and Hilarius, her rapscallion of a companion. Do they have what it takes to stop the most macabre and malevolent machinations of a merciless mentalist and his most monstrous minions?

It would seem most likely not.

But their future is yet unknown. Six more chapters are in the process of being translated to complete the first book of the Saga. Dare ye miss it? I say unto thee, nay!

Yay, let it be written! Yay, let it be done!
 
Welcoming feedback on "How to Write A Good Story"

My latest work is a 'How to write ...' article focusing on on structured writing techniques to developing a good storyline for Literotica readers. It provides basic story development structure and provides readers background information from published authors both professional and notable writers' work in Literotica publication on site.

I have provided examples that I believe illustrate the relevant basic parts: beginning, middle, and end of a storyline. The article also has a substantial portion devoted to character development.

If you have a few moments, I welcome your feedback on the contents or ideas on improving the article.

https://literotica.com/s/how-to-develop-a-good-story-01

dmallord
 
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