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StarXChyld said:
Brand New in This Wing of Lit

Hello all!

While I've been around Lit for a while, this is my first trip to this wing of Lit. I must say, I feel like I've stumbled upon a whole new realm! Wow!
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EDIT: Oops! I see this was posted in 2003. I'm not sure how it popped up on my screen, but there you go. I expect you've figured everything out long ago.

I'm not surprised you "stumbled" in. I did too a while ago. Then gave up in confusion. Then stumbled back in. I recorded my adventures this time. You might find it helpful.

https://forum.literotica.com/thread...of-literotica-especially-for-newbies.1596423/
 
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Hey everyone, a new story posted today. It's an indecisive teenager's sojourn with a long-haul trucker across America. Some dangers ... finding love, and told with a sense of John Steinbeck's nostalgic journey across our nation.

Finding Love on the Interstate
‘Traveling on a Dime’ – A Romance Journey with a Trucker.
today in Erotic Couplings Stories

Publishedbadge1538 views Score: 4 / 6
 
https://classic.literotica.com/s/playtime-for-amanda-and-lucy

In this story, bisexual Amanda and Lucy (first introduced in Gay Pride's The Battle of the Crater), try out their new dildo's and give themselves multiple orgasms in Lucy's dorm room. They also both talk about their masturbation fantasies regarding a cheerleader at their school. Lucy's somewhat stuck-up former roommate Martha is introduced and Amanda wonders about her sexual orientation.
 
My story Submitting Together is out.

It's about a young man and woman who submit together to an older man, written from the woman's point of view. I know that's a simple premise, but I couldn't find much else in the "genre," so I tried to create my own. Expect mostly smut, but I did aim to weave some relationship building in there.

Would love to hear what you think.
 
It didn't work for me. I'm not sure why. I guess I'd ask, did it work for you? To the extent that it didn't, focus on that and record what works.
A pure diddley-squat, but these always catch me up short. Should be Caleb and me. Simple test. Remove the second person.
"came crying to Caleb and I."

I didn't comment or vote, because when something doesn't work for me, but doesn't stand out as terrific (not just competent) writing. I'm not sure if it's me or the story. Don't want to mess up your scores.
 
AG31 said:
It didn't work for me. I'm not sure why. I guess I'd ask, did it work for you? To the extent that it didn't, focus on that and record what works.
A pure diddley-squat, but these always catch me up short. Should be Caleb and me. Simple test. Remove the second person.
"came crying to Caleb and I."

I didn't comment or vote, because when something doesn't work for me, but doesn't stand out as terrific (not just competent) writing. I'm not sure if it's me or the story. Don't want to mess up your scores.
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Oops. You're right.
Thanks for the feedback. Yes, it did "work" for me ;)
 
Idyll, my first GM story, was published yesterday.

Comments here or in Lit. are appreciated, whether positive or negative.
 
Emma and Bobbie Like Anal Sex

Another Emma and Bobbie story, where two women indulge themselves with the same man.
Down at the pool, at the beach, those little girls in my youth, they'd look at me. Tall, tanned swimmer boy, that was me, lying stretched out on a brightly coloured towel, with pretty girls in black bikinis. Or Roberta, that summer, who wore white. Not many girls can do that, wear white.

Bobbie's bikini bottom matched her eyes too, a paler blue. I looked at those white strings at the side. She'd said, "They're not sewn on. Gotta tie 'em in bows, or they fall down." She stretched her leg out, running her toes over my shaft. Dancers, they've got strong toes, comes from gripping the floor. She gripped there for a while, and I grew.

She was lazy, stroking me with her toes.

"You ever been pegged," Bobbie asked, quite out of the blue. Her foot stopped moving, but my cock throbbed. Twice. It was thick and coiled, filling those briefs very full.
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The first Emma and Bobbie story is this one:

Honey Always Tastes Better From the Pot
 
Trying to push this story as it stands on 4.4
It is pretty much what the title says, and the opposite of a slowburn. It’s short, impatient and horny.
Enjoy!

https://www.literotica.com/s/training-their-daughter-for-prom

(But PLEASE don’t read it if you are not into Incest and Non-con, it is really rough and not for everyone.
I have enough men writing to me and with happiness telling me they gave it 1 star and what a horrible wife/mom/human being I am.)
 
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