Please Tell Me...

[redrider4u]

Hi Cookie

Take a look at this story. It's one of the best in book, for pure romantic passion. Full of good ideas.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=88909

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

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[cookiejar]

I want to thank everyone who posted here. Your tips were invaluable and they gave me the confidence to write a story that had been in the back of my mind. It's dark and deeper than most Lit fare but it was truly fun to write something where my pen just flowed across the paper.

The link to the story is in my sig...I'm happy because it got an "E"...Thank you all very much!!


Cookie

 

[ffreak]

Wow, I like it. Dark, mental - and I think you handled the 'sex' just right for the story. I'd recommend it to anyone.

 

[cookiejar]

Wow, I like it. Dark, mental - and I think you handled the 'sex' just right for the story. I'd recommend it to anyone.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and respond. I wanted the sex to be more implied, I tried very hard to balance it out. It has given me a renewed confidence in myself.