"Spreading Seeds"

[JackLuis]

I put up Chapter 39 "Topock Follies" 11-23-09 and it is now at 4.00, 16 votes and 1088 reads.

"Topock Frolics" #38 is now at a 4.50, 18 votes and 1209 reads.

This surprises me? I looked at the two and tried to decide what changed between them.

Was it the chapter breaks in the wrong place?

#37 is 4.04, 18, 2318. I think because he never fucked anybody in that chapter?

Still 16 Red H's for 39 Chapters ain't too bad, cionsidering the overhead that a Novel brings for plot weaving.

 

[JackLuis]

Feedback

"keep it comin'
11/24/09 By: Anonymous in usa
I enjoy each chapter. I look forward to their upcoming trip. Of course I do want Josh to get together more with Charlotte. "

Charlotte will be a feature for a few chapters and ? Who knows? maybe a lot longer, although Josh will be TDY for a while.

 

[JackLuis]

First Feedback of the year:

Comments: (re Chapter 39)

"I hope that you are continue this story series because I really enjoy and love reading this story. It is one of my most favorite stories I have ever read. "

Thank you for the input. It makes my day.

Chapter 40 is just about ready and should be here soon.

Chapter 38 hit 4.5 today, WHahoo!
Chapter 39 is way behind at 4.25

If you like "Spreading Seeds" try my new story "Sexual Therapy"

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1019186&page=submissions

 

[JackLuis]

I put #40 Up and expect it will be posted Monday or so.

 

[JackLuis]

Fianlly Forty!

Chapter 40 posted today today.

 

[JackLuis]

Sigh* #40 has ~1900 reads and is 4.14 on score.
Only one comment which was :

"Very Good

Excellent writing and hope to see more soon."

Thanks Anon. I appreciate that but I wish someone would tell me what is good and what is bad, about the chapter.

This segment of the saga runs from #37 to #40, then there will be a bridge chapter to the next part of the saga.

 

[JackLuis]

Wha Hoo!

#40 is up to 4.64, better than all the chapters since #34.

Well now we know that all it takes is seven women and one man to get you guys off.

I'm thinking 41 will be a short chapter, for you quicky fans.

I need more comments to stroke my Authors ego, but I guess I'll have to ask in the story?