Bramblethorn
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This is quite possibly the Simonest post that ever Simoned.When you resubmit the story, please remember that the plural of Somali is Somalis, not Somali's. The apostrophe is for possessive only, not the plural form.
If it were me, I'd get rid of some of the other stuff, too, but it's your story.