Tale Swappers~

[My Erotic Tail]

Jim~

very nice poems...

I sweltered in Humidity...
...............And.................
Two I's was delightfully twisting.

My Indian tale should be out soon..
Hawk and a Dove...and...
Dream Catcher Dreams.....

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Crotching Tiger & Ridden Dragon part 7~

The Story Continues...

Crotching Tiger & Ridden Dragon part 7
........."WEAPONS OF SEDUCTION"..............

Chapter 8 coming soon...

Also coming...
Hawk and a Dove (Earth Day Contest)(pending)
Dream Catchers Dream (pending)
Josh Henderson's St Patty's Day Tale (pending)
"Mirror Mirror, on the Wall..." (chain story)

 

[jthserra]

I read your Earth Wind Fire and Water...

Very nice the earth, wind, fire and water was worked nicely into the story. Again, a very comfortable progression into the sex, with a very realistic dialogue.

There's a few nits that I will email you about, but only a few.

I look forward to the next story...

jim : )

 

[My Erotic Tail]

412 Serum 03~

High 5~

Looking for part 4...read part 3...

Thanks for the read of tiger dragon...smiles

Had a story I wrote for siant patty's day that I
HAD GIVEN UP ON...but was posted today with
an EDITORS CHOICE (E) next to it...I was proud...smiles
Josh Henderson's St. Patrick's Day encounter..

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Stories~

The Story Continues...

Crotching Tiger & Ridden Dragon part 7
........."WEAPONS OF SEDUCTION"..............

Chapter 8 coming soon...

Also coming...
Hawk and a Dove (Earth Day Contest)
Dream Catchers Dream
Josh Henderson's St Patty's Day Tale
"Mirror Mirror, on the Wall..." (chain story)

When it rains it pours. They have been posted.
(Mirror Mirror...is still pending.)(look in my signature) woohoo

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Stories~

Guess the signature says it all...

Mirror Mirror posted...

 

[jthserra]

Hi Art...

I took a peek at your opening to the Mirror, Mirror chain story. I enjoyed the story...

I found a few hanging sentence fragments and one misplaced apostrophe, but overall pretty good. You might want to change dieing to dying, both are words, but with very different meanings.

I like the view of the world through the reversed image of the mirror, it will be fun playing with that... good stuff. I look forward to more...


jim : )


Take a peek at

Winter Bliss or
412 Serum Sexual Response CH 08

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Thanks jim~

Always appreciate it~

My latest..Josh Henderson's Easter

 

[sweetnpetite]

I would like to try and get a few more people to take a look at my Earth Day story, and vote

It was doing quite well for a while and then sort of plummeted. I don't know if it's getting bad marks because it's not stroke or if there's something else about it- so if anyone has any constructive comments, that's cool too.

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Sweet~

Your story is one of my favorite for the
Earth Day Contest...although its not so
much a contest to me as an endevor by
the some of the best writers on lit to share
the same consept in many different ways.
Sharing talents and reads. Ideas and perspectives.

I give ya a boost...^5...smiles...(~_*)

 

[jthserra]

Presently Tied....

excellent story. A nice look at the dominant side. The Japanese have a very artistic way of binding (usually) a woman. I forget the name for it, but I think that geisha house might make some use of it. You might want to google on bondage and see if they mention it. Well edited (I didn't see an apostrophe out of place). Well done...


If you get a chance take a peek at:How to Eat an Oyster You'll never look at seafood the same way. A bit like my sushi story.


jim : )

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Jim

First off I loved the oysters...hehehehe
Your story of how to eat them was great...
Want to head to the nearest sushi bar now...

Thanks for the swap and share...

Had to do a quick check...hehehe
(((Kinbaku (Japanese Rope Art) / Shibari
(Japanese Rope Bondage))))
might have to instill it in the Geisha House...smiles

 

[My Erotic Tail]

The Park Bench~

Well I have a few new ones...hehehe

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Hey Erotic Tail,

What's the deal? I went to have a look at your "Park Bench" so I clicked on the link in your sig and it took me to a story called "Absolute Satisfaction" by Kiss Me First.


---dr.M.

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Lmao~

First off I am honored you come to my thread
and second ...thanks for letting me know My
link wasn't linked properly. Figures I get ya to
look at one of my tales and its messed up.
"Murphy's Law" hehehe...thanks Doc~

 

[Kiss Me]

Hi Art...just dropped by to thank you for the feedback. I'm off to read your new one. Do I even want to know how my story ended up linked in your sig?

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Kiss-me~

Hey sweetie~
I was making my signature at the
same time I posted your story on tail waggin...
and that is the rest of the story...hehehehe

great tale too!!!

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Choose~

Here I sit to read a line while I finally
have the time...smiles....

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Choose~

I have no current reads scheduled~...smiles

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Choose~

A story is a journey...take me on a flight~

 

[jthserra]

I read your: "Park Bench"

Art,

Excellent story. I compliment you and your proofreader. That second set of eyes make a lot of difference. I am normally pretty tough on you and I didn't find any apparent problems.

While the story was just the quick sex act, it flowed well and was believable. Very good.


Please take a look at my latest non-erotic: Tears of Strength


or for something more erotic: Best Friends


or a review even: Review of Ryu Murakami's Almost Transparent Blue



jim : )

 

[My Erotic Tail]

jim~

Hey jim~


I thank you for the comment about my
second pair of eyes. I found a great and
patient person who enjoys helping me.
This is always...well...has been hard to do...

I read Tears of Strength~
Growing roses here~
04/21/04 by My Erotic Tail
Wow jim that was moving and powerful.
I think this story shines bright. I read it several
times the advantage of a short story.
And it sank in deeper each time...excellent read!

Best friends~
wow what a twist jim...this one was
mysterious...and erotic of course.
I like the witty way you played the tape
then played the truth being told.
Very nicely done...I want to write like
you when I grow up...laughs at my
age...hehehehe (44) Great read jim as always...

Almost Transparent Blue
I had read this one but I enjoyed it again...
and as was said in your comment section...
I'll have to read this or at least check it out
since your review. Thanks again...Art

 

[asian_sensation]

i just had to post a message here as i have a tail (excuse the pun) that may be of interest. Just finished reading the first chapter of crotching tiger hidden dragon, excellent flow. i hope to read the rest of it when i get more time.

my erotic tail!

 

[My Erotic Tail]

asian~

i just had to post a message here as i have a tail (excuse the pun) that may be of interest. Just finished reading the first chapter of crotching tiger hidden dragon, excellent flow. i hope to read the rest of it when i get more time.

my erotic tail!

I loved your story and I am very sorry my computer hick-uped and posted it so many times...god I'm sorry you can go to your submission section and delete them.

... it was a good story. smiles...any time you want me to read a story let me know. I will make sure my computer doesn't have the hick-ups...smile. (sorry)...Art

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Dream Catcher's Dream 2~

Dream Catcher's Dream ch 02

The continuing story of a womans strange
encounters after purchasing a dream catcher out
in the desert. From an old indian woman...