Tale Swappers~

Ticket to Heaven~

Have a friend ... well a fellow supervisor
who wanted me to try and write a story
that he come up with, mix that with my
own imagination I come up with this...

Ticket to Heaven

Let me just add that he come up with the horror
and I came up with the ....tale!!!
 
Hey Art...

I took a look at both of your riverboat stories. When I first saw the titles I immediately thought of the stories of the great riverboats of the Mississippi. Though the scale of the houseboat was a bit smaller, it was certainly more interesting. I liked the collaboration and could see two distinct styles woven together.

With Riverboat 1 the lead in getting to the boat was believable, making the overall premise work well. The continuation on the river also was interesting, and as usual, the sex scenes were comfortably real. All in all two very good stories.


jim : )


If you get a chance, take a peek at The Ikebana Artist. Ikebana is the unique art of Japanese flower arrangement, an asymetrical art befitting an asymetrical woman.

thanks
 
"The Ikebana Artist"

jim~
left you this comment, fine piece of literature, filling a catagorie is one thing but you truely put your heart in what you do...That I respect, as well as your a damn good story teller...grin.

Comment:
Excellent wording as always from the zen master of pen, but as you know this one got me in the heart with the asian flare. The lessons you teach intertwined in a tale always deserves praise. Not sure what "SUX" means but I bet its an expression of greatness...hehehe Thanks and a great story. Art~
 
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