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UnderYourSpell said:
I think what we have here is a backwards Acrostic (if such a thing exists! but hey start your own!) The brother at the end I get but I'm afraid PDWCABW at the beginning is a fail!
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Ah! That's me not understanding the rules. I was concentrating on the ends of lines only. I now know for next time.

Thanks!
 
Wintermute01 said:
Ah! That's me not understanding the rules. I was concentrating on the ends of lines only. I now know for next time.

Thanks!
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The Only time you need to have the letters at the end is for a Double Acrostic, where the last letters echo the first letters only reading from bottom to top
 
I set out a base so the word father for a 2 x acrostic.....

F - r
A - e
T - h
H - t
E - a
R - f

....this helps me but others may have better methods.
 
Tristesse2 said:
I set out a base so the word father for a 2 x acrostic.....

F - r
A - e
T - h
H - t
E - a
R - f

....this helps me but others may have better methods.
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Thanks, this is what I did for the end of the lines, but obviously not the beginning.

I will have another go later.
 
Dangling my thoughts on the words you say
Anticipating the wisdoms that are always painted
Daily rituals where my innocence is fluttered
Don't think I don't enjoy our intimate academia
Your voice alone though leaves me sated


Am I close?
 
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Curious_in_Cali said:
Dangling my thoughts on the words you say
Anticipating the wisdoms that are always painted
Daily rituals where my innocense is fluttered
Don't think I don't enjoy our intimate academia
Your voice alone though leaves me sated


Am I close?
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*Applauds*
:)
 
Daintily she curtsies after
A ballet of beauty pure
Unique, this thought
Galvinized by emotional depth
How to love this little being
That smile and tu-tu
Every time I see her grow a
Revelation hits, time is precious indeed
 
Curious_in_Cali said:
Dangling my thoughts on the words you say
Anticipating the wisdoms that are always painted
Daily rituals where my innocense is fluttered
Don't think I don't enjoy our intimate academia
Your voice alone though leaves me sated


Am I close?
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Well done will just nit pick your spelling though :) *innocence
 
todski28 said:
Daintily she curtsies after
A ballet of beauty pure
Unique, this thought
Galvinized by emotional depth
How to love this little being
That smile and tu-tu
Every time I see her grow a
Revelation hits, time is precious indeed
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Great double, you have the flow too. So are you ready to move onto Pantoums now? :)
 
Thank you all! This was fun. :).

Whew! What does it say about me if I can't even SPELL innocence? :eek:
 
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Try number 2.....

Following you in that haiku thread,
Responding to those thoughts within,
I often wondered about that person there.
Eventually, I discovered you, near flowers of confetti.
Now, daily, we share words together,
Delighting in friendship itself.
 
Wintermute01 said:
Following you in that haiku thread,
Responding to those thoughts within,
I often wondered about that person there.
Eventually, I discovered you, near flowers of confetti.
Now, daily, we share words together,
Delighting in friendship itself.
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Now you've got it :) and congrats on finding 'confetti' I'm impressed!
 
In under the wire

So, I finally chisel out time and we're packing up for next subject, eh? hehehe Fine, fine...I'll be along to Pantoums in just a moment, let me paste this up first, 'kay?


Labor Day Reunion

She shone that summer, caught
In the dying sunlight’s rays,
Shimmered in a way that was new to me
Thoroughly altering our usual dynamic,
Ending on the hearth of the family den,
Relaxing afterwards, eating calamari.


:cool:
 
Remec said:
So, I finally chisel out time and we're packing up for next subject, eh? hehehe Fine, fine...I'll be along to Pantoums in just a moment, let me paste this up first, 'kay?


Labor Day Reunion

She shone that summer, caught
In the dying sunlight’s rays,
Shimmered in a way that was new to me
Thoroughly altering our usual dynamic,
Ending on the hearth of the family den,
Relaxing afterwards, eating calamari.


:cool:
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Dirty boy ;)

it's ok newbs I've know Remec a very long time I can insult him with impunity!
 
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UnderYourSpell said:
Dirty boy ;)

it's ok newbs I've know Remec a very long time I can insult him with impunity!
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I'm not so certain 'dirty boy' could be called an insult around here. hehehe More of an affirmation, esp considering you've inspired more than one of my naughty poems. ;)


:cool:
 
Coming together finally, after these months,
Our bodies merge in an erotic tableau.
Inspecting your breasts topped by nipples so pert,
Tasting you, I see your lips as red as Chianti.
Under me, you writhe, your heat an inferno,
Surrendering to me, as we become, ecstatic.
 
Wintermute01 said:
Coming together finally, after these months,
Our bodies merge in an erotic tableau.
Inspecting your breasts topped by nipples so pert,
Tasting you, I see your lips as red as Chianti.
Under me, you writhe, your heat an inferno,
Surrendering to me, as we become, ecstatic.
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Thundering applause !
 
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