The Dom Lounge

[WriterDom]

Maybe I'll try that, bro. I will say that the day I submit anything to anyone named "Muffin" for criticism will be the same day they announce that the next Winter Olympics are being hosted in Hades.

rr

Don't worry. Stick around long enough and Muffin will find you.

 

[WillowPuss]

http://www.castlerealm.com/library/roseritual.shtml

That almost made me cry.

It is a lovely ritual ... and one we have been planning to do once we can get hold of a perfect red and a perfect white rose.

 

[redelicious]

Well, if you can get into castlerealm.com it's in the library under "The Ceremony of the roses"

Bah, still not working for me. Wonder if it has anything to do with being in AOLHell?

Thanks anyway.

 

[WriterDom]

http://www.frugaldomme.com/ceremonies/default.htm

Interesting collection of ceremonies and rituals if you enjoy that kind of thing.

 

[Daddyslilpet]

Bah, still not working for me. Wonder if it has anything to do with being in AOLHell?

Thanks anyway.

Psst Red....I had to copy and paste the link in...try that it might help.

 

[redelicious]

Psst Red....I had to copy and paste the link in...try that it might help.

Yep, that did it. Thank you Dixi.

(though the other Link WD posted worked, I wonder why . . .)

 

[spankableBelle]

It is a lovely ritual ... and one we have been planning to do once we can get hold of a perfect red and a perfect white rose.

i have the ceremony of the roses copied and pasted in my stories folder...amazing...simply amazing...it's the one of the most beautiful things i've ever read...i would like to do this one day...the trust, the commitment, the bond is described so preciously...brings tears to my eyes...

but then, i'm rather sappy...

 

[Hot4Heels]

Re: Re: story

I read about half of it. I'm no critic. If you want an in-depth analysis, then bring in that Muffin chick. To me there were too many big words when smaller words might have worked better. Or maybe too much info packed into sentences.

I read all of it and get more or less the same feel. For me the first part could have been broken into a few more paragraphs just to help the flow. It wasn't so much the big words but the compound sentaces. Which I would like to compliment you on. They are not easy to pull off and none jumped out at me as "wrong". However there are just to many of them and again it really disrupts the flow. Perhaps try parring it down some.

And WD gave you some good advise about Killer Muffin she seems very knowledgeable about the "technical" aspects of writing.

 

[A Desert Rose]

Looks like your lounge is being wallpapered..... with poseys.

 

[Lancecastor]

Too Many Frickin' Grrls!

Dear Writer Dom;

I was thinking about The Dom Lounge today during a business meeting....okay, so the meeting wan't exactly rocket science...and I was thinking : "There are too many chix hanging out at the Dom Lounge!"

This is problematic to deal with for a number of reasons:

1. I like grrls;

2. They can read what we say here, so Dom Lounge is a bit of a misnomer;

3. Guys don't PM each other like rabid squirrels on acid the way the grrls do here;

4. Now and then it's nice to have a serving wench on site, especially if she uses her real self in her AV and shows some flesh...but too many and it gets boring fast.

Can you fix this problem, please?

Best Regards;

Lance

 

[WriterDom]

Re: Too Many Frickin' Grrls!

Dear Writer Dom;

I was thinking about The Dom Lounge today during a business meeting....okay, so the meeting wan't exactly rocket science...and I was thinking : "There are too many chix hanging out at the Dom Lounge!"

This is problematic to deal with for a number of reasons:

1. I like grrls;

I love grrls. Especially the 18 yr. old Brit girl I found on bondage. And the 19 year old poet in Arkansas I talked with on the phone today. But I'm old enough to know if you sleep with babies you get peed on.

2. They can read what we say here, so Dom Lounge is a bit of a misnomer;

Yeah, but they seem to enjoy overhearing Dom talk. even if it's a misnomer

3. Guys don't PM each other like rabid squirrels on acid the way the grrls do here;

Thank God.

4. Now and then it's nice to have a serving wench on site, especially if she uses her real self in her AV and shows some flesh...but too many and it gets boring fast.

yeah, we need more naked chicks

Can you fix this problem, please?

No, fixing things on the web only makes them worse.

Best Regards;

Lance

 

[Rubyfruit]

Oh please, I see what scintillating conversations you boys have when we're not around.

You love us and can't live without us, but if you'd like to try, I have some cootie spray I can send you.

 

[Richard49]

Oh please, I see what scintillating conversations you boys have when we're not around.

You love us and can't live without us, but if you'd like to try, I have some cootie spray I can send you.

How about I whipped your ass with my riding crop instead?

 

[WriterDom]

a Rubyfruit gangbang?



I guess to be fair we need to do a lottery for the order.

 

[Rubyfruit]

Can I pick who goes first?

Oh, and can that person and I spend at least 48 hours alone together first?

 

[WriterDom]

Can I pick who goes first?

Oh, and can that person and I spend at least 48 hours alone together first?

Only if it's Todd. Well, on second thought, only if it isn't Todd.

 

[Lancecastor]

Forget the 48 hours....

I have some cootie spray I can send you.

....I want the cootie spray!

Well, and maybe that thing where I put my penis inside your vagina and move it back and forth over and over, faster and faster.

But none of that 48 hour or gang bang stuff please.

Thanks
Lance

 

[RisiaSkye]

<hijack>

rosco: Rather than get into it here and further hijack the thread, I've sent you a PM about the story and submission standards.

Sorry for the intrusion, guys.

</hijack>

 

[MissTaken]

Re: Forget the 48 hours....

Well, and maybe that thing where I put my penis inside your vagina and move it back and forth over and over, faster and faster.

But none of that 48 hour or gang bang stuff please.

Thanks
Lance

This sounds vaguely familiar.

Perhaps a short tutorial would refresh my memory.


Many hugs and sweet kisses,

Miss *just one of the grrls* Taken

 

[Sandia]

All of this talk about gangbangs is making me hot. Let's have some more of that, please.

 

[A Desert Rose]

Re: Too Many Frickin' Grrls!

if she uses her real self in her AV and shows some flesh...but too many and it gets boring fast.

Can you fix this problem, please?

Best Regards;

Lance

Too many AVs showing her real self and some flesh is boring to you? Nah, I think not.

I have about worn out my feet AV idea. I have been trying to think of what part of my anatomy to move to next. Sir-to-K suggested that it might become like a jigsaw puzzle.....


(edited because somedays I can't spell or type.)

 

[Rubyfruit]

I'm growing really attached to your feet avs, Rose, especially this one in the tub. Your toes are so perfectly pedicured that I will admit to having thought about sucking on them.

But if you must move on, I vote for your face.

 

[A Desert Rose]

I'm growing really attached to your feet avs, Rose, especially this one in the tub. Your toes are so perfectly pedicured that I will admit to having thought about sucking on them.

But if you must move on, I vote for your face.

 

[redelicious]

Re: Re: Too Many Frickin' Grrls!

Too many AVs showing her real self and some flesh is boring to you? Nah, I think not.

I have about worn out my feet AV idea. I have been trying to think of what part of my anatomy to move to next. Sir-to-K suggested that it might become like a jigsaw puzzle.....


(edited because somedays I can't spell or type.)

I have done the whole breast/cleavage av thing. It's ok for a bit. After awhile you get sick of looking at your own body parts.

 

[Richard49]

hey

any Doms left here ?