The Tanka Challenge Thread

[unpredictablebijou]

(lololol)

still speaking while you...?
goodness, that's not on, instead
turn her around, yes?
try filling her mouth - surely -
she can't get a vowel round that!

round that thick surrendered piece
of your flesh, my mouth can contain
all the self you are
all at once. It's the only way
I can swallow you whole.

 

[Tathagata]

round that thick surrendered piece
of your flesh, my mouth can contain
all the self you are
all at once. It's the only way
I can swallow you whole.

whole armies rise
conquer
fall
in the instant it takes
my November hand to peak ( deliberate misspelling of pique)
your nipples interest

 

[champagne1982]

whole armies rise
conquer
fall
in the instant it takes
my November hand to peak ( deliberate misspelling of pique)
your nipples interest

Interest flies vulture
circles around belly
button oasis
and pubic shade palms
inviting me to take a sip

 

[Tathagata]

Interest flies vulture
circles around belly
button oasis
and pubic shade palms
inviting me to take a sip

Sip 3 times
a turn of the cup
after each
birth, life, death
today bitter tea
tomorrows chawan
awaits
empty

 

[bronzeage]

Empty vessels ring
a clarion song when they touch
belly to belly
on the shelf, but the sweeter
tune is the clunk of the full.

 

[denis hale]

aight

KNOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART

Full at last, she burped,
ladylike on cooling spike:

"Puddin' Pop Repast!"

she told Boy Toy piece of ass,

tightening the bedpost ropes
held him fast... fast... fast.






ps...


Hi Lit People!

 

[LostBaby]

KNOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART

Full at last, she burped,
ladylike on cooling spike:

"Puddin' Pop Repast!"

she told Boy Toy piece of ass,

tightening the bedpost ropes
held him fast... fast... fast.






ps...


Hi Lit People!

Fast enough for you?
You like it like that don’t you?
You want more like that?
You sure you can handle it?
Hold tight, here we go again Baby!

 

[Remec]

Fast enough for you?
You like it like that don’t you?
You want more like that?
You sure you can handle it?
Hold tight, here we go again Baby!

"Baby?" She always
called me baby when wanting
something from me. And
I didn't mind in the least,
"Yes, Mom? Tell me what you need."

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

"Baby?" She always
called me baby when wanting
something from me. And
I didn't mind in the least,
"Yes, Mom? Tell me what you need."

Need me, hold me,
feed me, scold me,
bleed me, fold me,
make me sigh.
take me, make me,
do me wrong
shake me, wake me,
same old song.