Tihmmnmmish's Cuddle-Friendly Fireside Threadcast

Did stop.
Tried to.
Annie started it.
Annie made me
do it.
She tempted.
She flaunted.
I fell. Wanna stop...
wanna wanna
really
But... Can't...

z-zi-zip-zi-zi-zi-zip-
zip-zip-zipp-zippo
 
Did stop.
Tried to.
Annie started it.
Annie made me
do it.
She tempted.
She flaunted.
I fell. Wanna stop...
wanna wanna
really
But... Can't...

z-zi-zip-zi-zi-zi-zip-
zip-zip-zipp-zippo

Well in that case...

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Groucho, Harpo, Chico? :)
 
got groucho
not harpo
nor chico

heckuva exercise though.
should do stuff like that more often
but it could become habitual
 
sestina was a randomly chosen form, just to try, and I read a little about the sestina to get an idea, but boy making sure the right words end each line in each stanza in the right orders is... well, it was too much work, so I didn't pay too much attention to that part... hence the title. It was kinda fun though. Might try some more, maybe get one right for a survivor entry. Just because it's more fun than I really expected.

Liked your prison cell...
 
Thankyou :heart: I did notice a couple of your words were in the wrong place for a sestina (having slaved on the damn thing myself!)
 
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on meandering and hmmnmm

how is it that each time you (hmmnmm) post something... meandering... a gong resonates?

not each time, but peach times - while i'm allergic, they are delicious and they don't come with every post but the fuzz and juice are there in the majority of the things you say... and i end up meandering and smiling because you've said what i thought - there's the pit... toss it & see if it plants itself for bark & leaf under sun and rain.
 
no idea

but let's not plant your pit just yet
if you'll permit it I'll drop it in my pocket
pull it out and look at it during this day

excuse me
I must go out and chop
chunks of wood
 
probably only a matter of happenstance? if you'd said what I was thinking I'd say, 'you often say just what I'm thinking'

wonder if we're related, distantly, or some of our brain cells were sired from ancestors who were related to each other, long time ago.

bet you're not as big a hypocrite as I am, yeah, bet my hypocrisy's bigger than yours...
 
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