Veroe's idea box

[Scentofawoman]

Hi Thyri and thanks for the input.

But its not the right tone of story. I'd like a paranormal mystery suspense thriller....like Basic Instinct or Body of Evidence or Fatal Attraction meets the Forsaken.

I thought of 2 things
1) a female Succubus who thinks herself a vigilante. Kills the most extreme monsters. But she pissed of the wrong people by "punishing" someone and now she's being hunted.

2) have Succubus be Domme who is killing her stable of men, killed the wrong one, now someone has to infiltrate the stable to stop her.

Just thoughts. You can tell me to shut up any time.

 

[Veroe]

The second idea has a lot of promise, scent...it combines two of my fantasies into one.

This is the closest of anything I've seen to what I want in terms of tone for this RP: Succubus: HellBent trailer

 

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[Scentofawoman]

The second idea has a lot of promise, scent...it combines two of my fantasies into one.

This is the closest of anything I've seen to what I want in terms of tone for this RP: Succubus: HellBent trailer

Looks cool V. you want to Succubus to be the villain. Ok. I guess I don't see what more your trying to work out. It sounds cool so far.

 

[Veroe]

Well I have a premise for a story the problem is figuring out a good plotline to best convey that premise. If it was the standard love story or lust story in the SRP forum me and whomever my partner would be could probably write it by the seat of our pants and create the story as we go along since we've more than likely done lots of the standard romantic scenarios in RPs like this. But what I want is a bit more unique. Its been my experience that unconventional RPs like this one need a strong premise and some clear direction to give it the best chance at success.

Also there's the problem that all the onus is on my partner. the succubus would be the instigator of the events in the plot, as well as having all the expectations of the specific characterization I want for her.

Sigh...normally when I feel like I know how to play a specific character I would, but I don't play female characters atleast not in the sex dept. I would switch the genders and play an incubus rather than a succubus that seduces, corrupts, and ruins my partner's normal everyday girl's life. However that's not exactly what I want.

The one time previous I did a story like this Curse of the Lilin was with Alana and she gave a very unique and compellingly sympathetic even in its chilling evilness characterization to the succubus character, Which was fantastic, but it still wasn't precisely what I'm looking for.

Yet on the other hand I was very impressed and fascinated by her portrayal of her character....mostly because it clashed with the stereotype and my own expectations....maybe in keeping my idea of how a succubus should be characterized as a sacred cow...I'm denying whatever partner I may get the chance to wow me again.

I'm gonna have to think on this.

 

[Veroe]

 

[Scentofawoman]

Well I have a premise for a story the problem is figuring out a good plotline to best convey that premise. If it was the standard love story or lust story in the SRP forum me and whomever my partner would be could probably write it by the seat of our pants and create the story as we go along since we've more than likely done lots of the standard romantic scenarios in RPs like this. But what I want is a bit more unique. Its been my experience that unconventional RPs like this one need a strong premise and some clear direction to give it the best chance at success.

Also there's the problem that all the onus is on my partner. the succubus would be the instigator of the events in the plot, as well as having all the expectations of the specific characterization I want for her.

Sigh...normally when I feel like I know how to play a specific character I would, but I don't play female characters atleast not in the sex dept. I would switch the genders and play an incubus rather than a succubus that seduces, corrupts, and ruins my partner's normal everyday girl's life. However that's not exactly what I want.

The one time previous I did a story like this Curse of the Lilin was with Alana and she gave a very unique and compellingly sympathetic even in its chilling evilness characterization to the succubus character, Which was fantastic, but it still wasn't precisely what I'm looking for.

Yet on the other hand I was very impressed and fascinated by her portrayal of her character....mostly because it clashed with the stereotype and my own expectations....maybe in keeping my idea of how a succubus should be characterized as a sacred cow...I'm denying whatever partner I may get the chance to wow me again.

I'm gonna have to think on this.

Then you either dictate what the Succubus should be like or yes, let the reigns go and let the character write herself.
Good luck whatever you decide. If you go the Incubus route that's cool. I love the books written by Larrissa Ione.

 

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[Asa]

Love that one

 

[Veroe]

Love that one

I do too.

 

[Asa]

I do too.

ponders what thread it could work in *EG*

 

[yeishia]

ponders what thread it could work in *EG*

Bliss bondage * giggles*

I loved it too

 

[Asa]

Bliss bondage * giggles*

I loved it too

Will have to take a look at Bliss thread I was thinking an actual rp thread *EG*

 

[yeishia]

Will have to take a look at Bliss thread I was thinking an actual rp thread *EG*

I know you were Asa I was teasing unsuccessfully I guess

Although I have to admit I have no idea what *EG* means.

Bottom line *giggles*

I am stealing your picture Veroe for Bliss...or maybe my own private collection I am a very bad girl.

 

[Asa]

*EG* = Evil Grin

Been a long few days so my mind kind of oblivious tonight yeishia

 

[Scentofawoman]

this made me laugh really hard today so I'm sharing it here with you.

 

[yeishia]

this made me laugh really hard today so I'm sharing it here with you.

* giggles* I adore this

 

[Veroe]

this made me laugh really hard today so I'm sharing it here with you.

That's hilarious Scent.

Asa uses a bit of Forum shorthand like EG in her posts. I've seen some from CG where he uses something similar...he uses: ish for much the same sentiment.

And Yeishia if you want the pic, take it, I agree its wholely perfect for Bliss.

 

[yeishia]

That's hilarious Scent.

Asa uses a bit of Forum shorthand like EG in her posts. I've seen some from CG where he uses something similar...he uses: ish for much the same sentiment.

And Yeishia if you want the pic, take it, I agree its wholely perfect for Bliss.

I was teasing if you had wanted the pic in Bliss you would have placed it there.. I will take it for my personal collection.

Forum shorthand that is so cool... so intimate for you both * blushes* I like.

 

[Veroe]

I was working today and thinking about the difficulty I had putting a plot together of the kind of story I wanted for a supernatural erotic suspense thriller SRP involving and out of the blue it hit me.

Curse of the Lilin (version 2)

Miranda Case was the wife of geriatric oil tycoon Harold Case, the late Harold Case. While they were having sex one night Harold suddenly spontaneously combusted. While the police wasn't sure just how Harold was killed they did know people don't normally burst into flames without some outside help. So they were looking into making a murder case against Miranda pushed forward by a self-righteous D.A. who was looking to make this case his springboard into the mayor's office next election.

Why? Miranda Case was not just a gold-digging trophy wife to a sixty-six year old billionaire. There was some rumors she was responsible for the accidental death of Mrs. Case twelve years ago and the Case's daughter swears Miranda was absolute evil-though few believe her from the inside of a padded cell in an asylum. Miranda Case used Harold's millions to start a raunchy magazine-that rivaled the sales of Playboy, Penthous, and Hustler. She also launched an adult movie studio-and the seven films that starred herself were the most successful in porn history. She was the most famous pornstar and porn producer, writer, director, and studio head in the world. She was also known as a regular fixture in the clubs on the strip, the Vegas swinging scene, as well as the fetish community.

The reason the D.A. wanted to pursue a murder case against Miranda was he was running for Mayor based on a family friendly conservative platform, and taking down the sin city siren living such a sinful lascivious lifestyle would certainly be an accomplishment to crow over to that end. So she was arrested and brought down to the precinct for questioning.

Adam Taylor was a good man. He had grown up a boy scout. He never broke the law. He married his highschool sweetheart and stayed true to her even when she had not. He never strayed outside of convention or the constraints of society. He was an average good everyday man or was he? Claire, his wife had been sleeping behind his back with his own brother. She said he gave her something they didn't have, passion, fire, danger, making her feel erotic. Despite all that they agreed to put it all behind them and try to heal the rift of their marriage.

Adam worked as a defense attorney like his father and his grandfather did before him, and once he passed the nevada bar the largest law firm in Las Vegas gave him a job. That was where he met Franklin Crandell the largest and most successful mob lawyer in vegas, his boss, and mentor. However defending criminals didn't sit well with him. So after a few years he left Taylor and Crandell to make his own firm, where he would defend people who were actually innocent. Crandell was stonewalling him keeping him from getting any clients who could actually pay his fees.

Which was why he was surprised to get a call from Crandell about handing him a wealthy client, the infamous Las Vegas Vixen, Miranda Case. The charges were ridiculous and there was the fact that Adam could use the money...so he agreed to defend Miranda.

Sounds straight forward, right? Wrong.

Miranda Case is old. She is far far older than the thirty-two years of age it states on her Nevada driver's liscense. She was old when the first man and woman were cast out from the garden of eden. Miranda Case is not her real name. Her real name is unpronouncable by mortal tongue. She and many of her kind were expelled, fallen, kicked out of their home and cast deep into a pit of fire and brimstone for daring to defy their maker in rebellion.

Miranda Case isn't human. She is a demon. A Succubus to be exact. And once a foolish mortal sorceror raised her up from her prison in hell during the dark ages she has stalked the earth ever since.

She has led a nomadic existence consuming a poor soul in a wild one night stand and then moving on again and again over the passage of centuries. However she has grown beyond the easy lay...she gets off on something even more wicked now...being a demon she enjoys corrupting and leading unwary souls deeper and deeper into sin. It's the sweetest aphrodisiac she has ever known. She destroys and ruins the foundations of their lives bit by bit.

So when she decided to settle down for a while she was hired on as Mrs. Case's nurse, and set her sights on Mr. Case, luring and seducing him...it was actually a challenge the old fool had genuinely loves his wife, but Miranda was nothing but subtle and patient and unrelenting. Within a year Mr. Case and her were having a torrid affair and much to the delicious pain of Mrs. Case and their daughter. She refrained from taking Mr. Case whole, only ever in these twelve years taking just a little. Then on the one year anniversary of the affair Mrs. Case handed him divorce papers and headed out the door where Miranda unseen shoved her down the stairs. Within a few weeks of Mrs. Case's funeral she became the second Mrs. Case.

Meanwhile the daughter had found religion, which was no defense against Miranda invading her dreams at night. For two years as she slept she gave the poor girl erotic nightmare after nightmare...eventually her mind snapped and Mr. Case had to commit his beloved daughter to an institution.

Then Miranda became the sole heir of the Case fortune, and set to work making Howard more and more a hermit. While she spent his money on the filthy magazine and porn studio.

But alas she grew tired of the monotony and finally decided it was time to resume traveling, but first she wanted to take from Mr. Case the last thing he owed her. So in a viagra fueled marathon session of fucking him she finally put aside restraint and consumed all of his soul.

However she was now in a police precinct being questioned about his death, poor dumb mortals-they had no clue who or what she was. However the lawyer...he was interesting...she could tell...he was a challenge...seducing and corrupting him would be so much fun....she may just stick around for a while afterall.

Miranda Case

Adam Taylor

Story influences:
Basic Instinct
Basic Instinct 2
Body of Evidence
Succubus: Hell Bent
Scorned
I like to play games
This gives you an idea of what kind of tone I want for this story.

 

[Asa]

Can't wait to read that played out in a thread. Amazing workaday always darlin