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The Consort of the Court of Perverse Delights

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My name is Micheal Corrino, and I was born in the USA but my family goes way back to the Gypsy clans of Europe, and through some rather poor choices and wild and ultimately unhealthy living I died rather young. Twenty-seven, yeah, I had a good life-well maybe not that good-I stole, I lied, I cheated, I smoked copious pot, drank the hardest of liquor, and chased the finest of pussy...that was my life..and then I died.

You can probably guess where I am now. No, well...there aren't winged people strumming on golden harps....nope, the other place....lake of fire...ugly red sadistic bastards with tails and wings and horns....yep that's the place.

I've done the whole suffering for my sins thing...yeah it isn't as much fun as it sounds...really...no one wants that...so I fought in the arena of hell...it wasn't easy...they...those sadistic bastards the demons that ran hell really enjoyed tormenting us, and so they rigged my matches. Without one in my corner it was a hard and painful afterlife, but I found an ally.

Her. She's the Princess of Hell, royalty, daughter of the big bad...you know his name starts with an L and ends with an R, and Lillith mother of all Succubi...She's a Succubus, and she was having a lot of mommy and daddy issues....something about them seeking to destroy her...or unmake her-not too clear on the distinction there-but yeah mommy and daddy issues to the max.

So when she was sent to humiliate herself for some youthful impertinence by letting us poor lowly damned souls gangbang her...we discovered something...it seems my family back in the old country were something of wizards or demon summoning badasses and I got serious untapped mojo for this sort of demonshit with succubi...I always knew my ancestors were total pervs....While my compatriots were rutting away and dropping like flies when she devoured their energy I was the fucking energizer bunny...god's-okay poor choice of words there-anyway somebody's gift to succubi.

So long story short after the marathon gangbang we cooked up a scheme. She'd patronize me in the arena until I won my freedom and I'd give her all the power and energy and whatever mojo I inherited from my pervert family she'd need to overthrow her parents...and what do you know it kinda worked.

See Succubi are total nymphos...I mean that....Can't ever get enough...absolutely obsessed with sex. Well having a guy with staying power as her consort and sharing me gave her serious brownie points among them. Enough to take her mommy's place as their leader. They completely booted the old bitch out the door.

So here I am, in hell, but now its not too bad. I get all the pussy I can shake my dick at, I don't get to burn in a lake of fire or get tortured anymore...well some of these Succubi's games do involve some sort of torture-they are demons you know...but anyway it's pretty good now for me...

Oh don't get me wrong we've only accomplished the first and second step in our master plan. Mommy and Daddy are still out there and they're not going to let their daughter get so uppity on them unpunished. Hell here is a ticking timebomb about to erupt in civil war.

So my fate is tied to her success. We've gotta succeed...I can't tell you how much I don't wanna go back into the lake of fire.
 
Interesting story idea and ya may want to check ya pm messages darlin *lol*
 
Interesting story idea and ya may want to check ya pm messages darlin *lol*

Yeah it was fun writing in first person perspective again. I don't see why RPers don't do so more often. Like 99% of all SRPs are in third person, and I don't get it. First person is so intimate and gets your character's voice right across immediately to the reader/

What do you think Asa? Do you prefer writing in third person exclusively or would you try out writing in first person for a thread?
 
Writing in first person in a thread yeah is a bit more intimate and I personally would have to have a level of trust/friendship I think with my co writer to feel comfortable writing in 1st person.
 
Writing in first person in a thread yeah is a bit more intimate and I personally would have to have a level of trust/friendship I think with my co writer to feel comfortable writing in 1st person.

The whole trust thing is probably the sticking point for most people here. Its something to think about, definitely.

Another thought that occurs to me at times is that a lot of the women on Lit want to write a harlequin romance novel in their SRP while most guys want to write a letter to penthouse forums in their SRP...the most successful ones fall somewhere in the middle of those two extremes.

Well I'm done answering my PMs, Asa, now I'll probably just chill and hang out around the lounge.
 
Part of the reason I will not pay to watch Comic book movies in the theater. They take way too many liberties with character appearances and trashing original story arch from the comic book to fit their thoughts on it. I agree though that was funny as hell.
 
Part of the reason I will not pay to watch Comic book movies in the theater. They take way too many liberties with character appearances and trashing original story arch from the comic book to fit their thoughts on it. I agree though that was funny as hell.

Nods, I'm well aware of their shall we call it utter disappointment with Marvel's choices in depicting the Mandarin, but I have to admit it worked well for the purposes of their movie, but damn it, and not being a big iron man fan it didn't disappoint me the same way as if they had done something similar for say the Red Skull or Cap himself. If they hadn't atleast given an honest effort at portraying the key elements of the comic characters I am attached to instead of giving it a completely dishonest effort like they did with the Mandarin...I think I'd be much like Hitler in the video...but fortunately I don't care much about the Mandarin.:rolleyes:
 
Nods, I'm well aware of their shall we call it utter disappointment with Marvel's choices in depicting the Mandarin, but I have to admit it worked well for the purposes of their movie, but damn it, and not being a big iron man fan it didn't disappoint me the same way as if they had done something similar for say the Red Skull or Cap himself. If they hadn't atleast given an honest effort at portraying the key elements of the comic characters I am attached to instead of giving it a completely dishonest effort like they did with the Mandarin...I think I'd be much like Hitler in the video...but fortunately I don't care much about the Mandarin.:rolleyes:

One of my big things is I actually read the War Machine comics Crews from Expendables would have been a better choice than either of the two actors they got to play him... He was a fairly big fairly blunt person that at times Tony was about the only one who could put up with him.

Not to mention taking most of the SHIELD people from the main Comics and Fury from an alternate timeline comic just to get Jackson to play him.
 
One of my big things is I actually read the War Machine comics Crews from Expendables would have been a better choice than either of the two actors they got to play him... He was a fairly big fairly blunt person that at times Tony was about the only one who could put up with him.

Not to mention taking most of the SHIELD people from the main Comics and Fury from an alternate timeline comic just to get Jackson to play him.

Actually I like Jackson or the ultimate Fury better than the white guy. Gives him more personality and diversifies your cast...not to mention allowing Jackson's excellently nuanced performance trying to manipulate the Avengers into being the Avengers in the Avengers movie.

But I can understand all of that...we just have to keep in mind that the D/MCU is a different universe altogether.
 
and I've decided to use This pic of Tony Amendola for a new character in Huntress.
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edit: I've just decided this pic of Aaliyah will be the pic I use for a new character in Huntress.
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Now if I can just settle on a name for them.
Deagan was easy since I've used him before and Christian Kane just looks like someone who could be a werewolf.
Now what to name these two characters...
 
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