Virgin Here..Breaking my writing cherry

[LadyIlsa]

You're a Michigander too? We're neighbors.

Cool! Or should I say 'friggin cold!!!' Nothing better to do this time of year but write really HOT stories, right? Hope you read and comment... I'm on my way to take a peek at yours.
~J~

 

[Daniellekitten]

I've only got one on the site now, the rest I had taken down a while ago. I'm working on a chapter of a story now, but when I have it finished, I will be happy to read yours.

you're right, it's too cold out there to do much. Even my dogs don't want to go outside, it's too cold for the salt I have outside to do anygood but it hurts their paws to walk on it.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Cool! Or should I say 'friggin cold!!!' Nothing better to do this time of year but write really HOT stories, right? Hope you read and comment... I'm on my way to take a peek at yours.
~J~

DK is really worth reading, one of the best writers on the site! (At least in my opinion).

 

[Daniellekitten]

Okay Bri, you don't have to suck up, though I like it. There are many worthwhile authors on this site and a couple you couldn't force me to read even if you sat me on dynamite. You are one of the worthwhile ones, the story Cuda be love is my absolute favorite.

 

[LadyIlsa]

Well, I'm reading both of you - so expect my comments! And thank you so much for your help and suggestions.
~J~

 

[Daniellekitten]

Anytime...

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Well, I'm reading both of you - so expect my comments! And thank you so much for your help and suggestions.
~J~

Yikes!

 

[LadyIlsa]

You Chicken...

Yikes!

I really enjoyed your stories but you're a chicken...no comments? no voting? Well, the one about the car got me all hot and bothered! I give it 5 stars...
~J~

 

[drksideofthemoon]

I really enjoyed your stories but you're a chicken...no comments? no voting? Well, the one about the car got me all hot and bothered! I give it 5 stars...
~J~

Me? Chicken?

 

[LadyIlsa]

Wow

Well, I am utterly flabbergasted!

I received a comment - anonymous of course - where I was told to 'eat shit and die'. My story was 'garbage'.

This troll even put 'under the bridge' as his/her place in the universe.

This doesn't really bother me too much - this person is obviously impotent or frigid, probably still wets the bed, and has serious issues with impulse control - but I wonder why we allow anonymous comments at all? I've decided to not allow them anymore.

To every one that wrote such lovely comments under anonymous, I hope that you'll continue to leave your comments and suggestions with your pen name/member name. I do so enjoy them.

To the trolls: get a life.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Well, I am utterly flabbergasted!

I received a comment - anonymous of course - where I was told to 'eat shit and die'. My story was 'garbage'.

This troll even put 'under the bridge' as his/her place in the universe.

This doesn't really bother me too much - this person is obviously impotent or frigid, probably still wets the bed, and has serious issues with impulse control - but I wonder why we allow anonymous comments at all? I've decided to not allow them anymore.

To every one that wrote such lovely comments under anonymous, I hope that you'll continue to leave your comments and suggestions with your pen name/member name. I do so enjoy them.

To the trolls: get a life.

Learn to love your trolls, Lisa. They are your best advertising. They bloddy hate me and I think it's absolutly wonderful that they do.

 

[Darkniciad]

Gotta love "still wets the bed" though. Pure comedy gold, that *laugh* I love a multi-point insult rant.

Trolls can be great advertising. I regularly browse the feedback portal, and a frothing at the mouth rant is more likely to make me read someone's story than glowing praise lacking any finer points. Most of the time, the author has hit home with someone to draw the nastiness, and that makes the story worth reading most times ( Not always )

 

[LadyIlsa]

Gotta love "still wets the bed" though. Pure comedy gold, that *laugh* I love a multi-point insult rant.

Trolls can be great advertising. I regularly browse the feedback portal, and a frothing at the mouth rant is more likely to make me read someone's story than glowing praise lacking any finer points. Most of the time, the author has hit home with someone to draw the nastiness, and that makes the story worth reading most times ( Not always )

Thanks! Maybe I should give the humor category a try...

I will leave the comments - maybe even turn back on the anonymous - because you're right: I tend to read a story that has caught the ire of someone else. The shear nastiness of this one just really pissed me off.

 

[LadyIlsa]

Learn to love your trolls, Lisa. They are your best advertising. They bloddy hate me and I think it's absolutly wonderful that they do.

Thank you! I will take your advice. I doubt they make decent pets, but they may be useful.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Learn to love your trolls, Lisa. They are your best advertising. They bloddy hate me and I think it's absolutly wonderful that they do.

I wouldn't go that far and say they are your best advertising. I tended to ignore the yokels.

 

[Joseph King]

Re: Night Shift Nurse.

I would just repeat something that was said to me after my first submission. Develop the characters a bit more. We do not know a lot about Rita. She is a married nurse, goes to check on a patient and gives him a blow job... Now I want that health plan.

Okay this is fiction but does she have marital problems? Maybe she thinks her husband is shagging his secretary?

Off to read your new one now...

JK. (Not Rowling.)

 

[LadyIlsa]

I wouldn't go that far and say they are your best advertising. I tended to ignore the yokels.

lol - either way, I am not going to let them get to me.

 

[LadyIlsa]

Re: Night Shift Nurse.

I would just repeat something that was said to me after my first submission. Develop the characters a bit more. We do not know a lot about Rita. She is a married nurse, goes to check on a patient and gives him a blow job... Now I want that health plan.

Okay this is fiction but does she have marital problems? Maybe she thinks her husband is shagging his secretary?

Off to read your new one now...

JK. (Not Rowling.)

Thank you! I am a nurse and I have never given that kind of care...to a patient.
Enjoy the next story.
JK (Also not Rowling!)

 

[LadyIlsa]

Another Story!

OK - the first 2 chapters are now approved. Please read and let me know what you think...

Strangers To Love, Chapter 01
Chapter 02